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第八讲巧夺天工的连篇技巧,有效地使用语句间的连接成分巧妙地衔接过渡，利用好“开篇、承接、转折、总结”四个方法使文章流畅自然，是考生在书面表达题目上争创高分的非常重要的条件。一、开篇创造良好开端1.常用表达“开篇”的过渡词语(常用在段落或文章的开头),first，firstofall，atfirst，inthefirstplace，firstly，tostartwith，recently，now，atpresent，inrecentyears，ingeneral，generallyspeaking，atpresent，lately，currently等。,2.常用表达“开篇”的句型,(1)Itisoftensaidthat.(2)Astheproverbsays.(3)Itgoeswithoutsayingthat.(4)Itisclear/obviousthat.(5)Manypeopleoftenask.FirstlyIcollectedallthebooks，newspapersandotherthingsscatteredintheroomsandputtheminplace.(陕西卷)ItsoftensaidthatallworkwithoutplaymakesJackadullboy.Astheproverbsays，nopains，nogains.(北京卷),二、承接顺势承上又启下1.常用表达“承接”的过渡词语,secondly，inaddition，besides，moreover，whatismore，whatisworse，forexample，inotherwords，especially，particularly，obviously，atthesametime，nodoubtmeanwhile，asaconsequence等。,2.常用表达“承接”的句型：,(1)Itistruethat.(2)Everybodyknowsthat.(3)Itcanbeeasilyprovedthat.(4)Noonecandenythat.(5)Thereasonwhy.isthat.(6)Thereisnodoubtthat.(7)Totake.forexample(instance).,(8)Whatismoreseriousisthat.Inaddition，IwillgoonatriptoSichuan，wherethereareagreatnumberofplacesofinterest.Meanwhile，Iwillregarditasmydutytohelpkeepourenvironmentcleanandhealthy.Asaconsequence，childrenbeesoreliantontheirparentsthattheyhavenoindependentthoughtorcreativeideas.,三、转折利用转折巧过渡1.常用表达“转折”的过渡词语,but，however，ontheotherhand，onthecontrary，inanycase，or，orelse，while，despite，inspiteof，regardlessof，instead等。,2.常用表达“转折”的句型,(1)Everycoinhastwosides.(2)Butfor.Iwouldnever.(3)Anotherexampleisthat.(4)Takingeverythingintoconsideration.(5)ThatswhyIfeelthat.Therewillbemanychallengesahead，butIhaveconfidencethatIlltakeontheburden.However，itisnotsoeasyforpeopletorealizetheirdreamseverytime.,四、总结完美结束全文常用表达“总结”的过渡词语：inaword，ingeneral，inshort，aboveall，finally，inconclusion，atlast，insummary，asaresult，onthewhole，inonesopinion等。1.Somethingmustbedoneto.2.Itcanbesafelyconcludedfrom.that.3.Inmyopinion，wecandrawtheconclusionthat.4.Itmaybesummedupasfollows.,常用表达“总结”的句型：Itmaybebrieflysummedupasfollows：itshightimethatourgovernmenttooksomemeasurestoimproveourenvironment.Inmyopinion，peopleneedtolearntoaccepttherealityandkeepontrying.,跟踪训练,.完成句子1._theInternet，putersplayanimportantroleinpeopleslife.2._，themoreyoupractise，themoreskillfullyyoucanwriteinEnglish.3._，itisoneoftheoldestcitiesintheworld.,随着因特网的发展，计算机在人们的生活中起着重要作用。总的来说，你练习越多，用英语写作就越熟练。就拿北京来说吧，它是世界上最古老的都市之一。,Withthedevelopmentof,Generallyspeaking/Onthewhole/Ingeneral,TakeBeijingforexample,4._，ifyouwanttosucceed，youhavetobelieveinyourself.5._，Ilovewealth，butIvaluehealthmore.6._，peopleshallnotsmokeinpublicplaces.7._，agoodcitizenshouldobservetrafficregulations.,也就是说，如果你想成功，必须相信自己。就我而言，我喜欢财富，但我更看重健康。按照我的观点，人们不应该在公共场所抽烟。总之，一个好市民应该遵守交通规则。,Thatistosay,AsfarasIamconcerned,Inmyopinion,Inaword/Inconclusion/Inshort/Inbrief/Tosumup,8._，ourclassalsoorganizeavarietyofactivitiestoenrichoursparetime.9._，ifwespendtoomuchtimeonphones，wewilllosethemunicationskillsweneedinthefuture.,另外，我们班还组织了各种各样的活动来丰富我们的业余时间。更糟的是，如果我们在电话上花费过多的时间，我们会失去将来需要的交际技能。,Besides/Whatsmore/Inaddition/Moreover/Furthermore,Worsestill/Tomakemattersworse,.完成短文1._，Icollectedallthebooks，newspapersandotherthingsscatteredintheroomsandputtheminplace.2._Iwipedthedustoffallthefurniture.3._，Isweptandmoppedthefloors.首先，我把所有的书籍、报纸和其他的散落在屋子里的东西收集起来放好，然后我扫去所有家具上的灰尘，之后我扫地、拖地。,Firstly,Then,Afterthat,.翻译句子1.努力学习，你就会升入重点大学。2.游泳不但对身体有好处，而且能培养我们的坚强意志。3.然而，使你最惊讶的是下述新的功能。4.相反，智能手机不仅占用我们宝贵的时间，而且对我们的健康造成极大的危害。,_,Workhard，andyouwillbeadmittedtoakeyuniversity.,Swimmingnotonlybenefitsourhealth，butalsohelpsushaveastrongwill.,However，whatamazesyoumostisthefollowingnewfunction.,Onthecontrary，smartphonesnotonlytakeupourvaluabletime，butalsodogreatharmtoourhealth.,5.多亏医生的及时治疗，他获救了。6.因此，我建议应该给我们更多的时间用于体育运动和睡眠。7.只要你不灰心，就一定会成功。8.如果我们忽视我们的未来，就像图画中的这个人一样，我们就会以失败告终。,_,Thankstothedoctorstimelytreatment，hewassaved.,Therefore，Isuggestwebegivenmoretimeforsportsandsleep.,Aslongasyoudontloseheart，youresuretosucceed.,Ifweneglectourfuture，wellendupinfailureaswhathappenstothemaninthepicture.,.用方框内的过渡词完成下面的短文second，so，asaresult，despite，on(the)onehand，whatsworse，insteadof，inaword，ontheotherhand，asiswell-known1._，onlineshoppingisbeingmoreandmorepopularinourdailylife.2._，onlineshoppinghasmanyadvantages.First，onlineshoppingmakesiteasierforustobuythings.3._searchingacrowdedstore，wejustneedtowatchtheputerscreenandchoosethethingswelike.4._，itismuchfasterforustodoshopping.Wedonthavetospendalotoftimegoingtoshops.Third，wecanseealotofgoodsshownontheputerscreenatthesametime.,Asiswell-known,Ontheonehand,Insteadof,Second,5._，onlineshoppingalsohasmanydisadvantages.Thepicturesofgoodsshownontheputerscreenarenotalwayswhattheyare.6._，wecanbecheatedeasily.7._，wecannotseethethingsindetail.8._，9._thedisadvantagesofonlineshopping,Ithinkitisanadvancedwaytodoshopping.10._weshoulddevelopit.,Ontheotherhand,Asaresult,Whatsworse,Inaword,despite,So,
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