英语写作常见表达错误纠正

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,英语写作常见表达错误纠正,1,Some people,thing,that failure is a bad thing.Firstly,failure,has influence,in,confidence,so,it can make people,lost,their direction.While if someone,lost,his direction,he wont,make,his dream come true forever.,That,is very serious.,修改版：,Some people,argue,that failure is a bad thing,with the reason being that,if people,fail to do,something,he will lose confidence in such a thing.Besides,constant failures will,be bound to,affect peoples confidence in doing everything.Without confidence,how can people do things successfully?,英语写作常见表达错误纠正,2 It is said that “failure is the mother of,succeed,“.,They,are inclined to,the idea,that if people,sum up,from the failure,they will learn something and it is useful to,get,their goal.,修改版：,As the saying goes,“Failure is the mother of success”,which means/meaning,people can always learn something from failure and it is very useful to his future success in,achieving goals,.,英语写作常见表达错误纠正,3,It is important for everyone to stay healthy.,To,other words,everyone wants to stay healthy,.,How can we stay healthy?Which is the best way to stay healthy?It is said that“,get ill by the mouth,“,so we must,eat healthy,first when we want to stay healthy.,That,means we,eat meal on time,and make sure the food is ok.,修改版:,There is no doubt that,everyone wants to stay healthy.Nowadays,it is commonly agreed that,health is above wealth.But how can we maintain a healthy body?When asked this question,different people,may come up with,different ways of keeping fit.Some people say that we should eat healhty diet if we want to,avoid getting,ill.,According to,them,people get sick,mainly because,they eat unhealthy food.,英语写作常见表达错误纠正,4,We,also should,take some exercise,.if,you take some exercise every day,you will become strong and healthy,so that illness,keep,away from you.,Every coin has two sides,different people have different ideas.,In my opinion,the best way to stay healthy is,that,you must eat healthy,修改版:Other people,however,hold that doing exercises is the best way to enjoy a healthy body.In their opinions,people will keep away from illness as long as they do regular exercise,such as running and swimming.,As far as I am concerned,the most effective way of keeping healthy is to,英语写作常见表达错误纠正,5 When,asked about,failure,some people become frustrated and they will lose,them,confidence.It is a bad thing for them.,And,failure will,take,great bad effect on their lives.,修改版:When,talking about,failure,people often feel frustrated and some people are even fearful,at the mention of,failure.,Admittedly,constant failure will,result in,peoples lack of courage and confidence and thus,have negative effect on,their daily life and work.But is failure a bad thing?Peoples ideas vary.,英语写作常见表达错误纠正,6 As far as I am concerned,I,tend to,the,latter.That is,I,dont think failure is a bad thing.,Instead,I believe for a successful people,failure is a,stopping stone,.,修改版:,As far as I am concerned,I,prefer,the latter.,In other words,I believe that failure is not absolutely,negtaive.As we know,failure is something that we can never avoid in the course of achieving success.,For those who,succeed eventually,failure is the source of experience;for those who always,complain about,failure,failure is the source of misfortune.,英语写作常见表达错误纠正,7.Cities should be kept clean in spite of the size of it.It is not,such,an easy thing to keep our city clean.,The phenomenon,in todays society is not optimistic.The unethical behavior of some people has affected the citys,image,.(缺少连贯性）,修改版:Cities should be kept clean regardless of the size.But it is by no means easy to ensure the cleanness of a city due to peoples unethical behaviors.Thus,some people hold that the prospect of a citys clean image is not optimistic.,英语写作常见表达错误纠正,8.,As far as I am concerned,the governments,relevant,policies and the,action,of the volunteers are the part of the,action.,We should try our best to do something,by our selves,no matter you are a man or a woman,young or old.,修改版:,As far as I am concerned,to keep a city clean,the governments policy and citizens awareness are of vital importance.With the governments strict law,people dare not do things that are harful to the environment.With peoples raised consciousness and voluntary actions,the citys tomorrow will be cleaner.,英语写作常见表达错误纠正,9.,Some people hold the idea that,do,a pat-time job is good for college students.,As far as they are concerned,college students have enough,personal,time to control.They take advantage of this,period time,to do a part-time job,which will enrich their social experience and broaden their,eye shot,.But I couldnt agree with them in several points.,修改版:Some people hold that doing a part-time job is of great benefits for college students.,According to,them,college students have plenty of time after academic study,so that,working as a tutor or sales person are good way spending time meaningfully.,Also in their eyes,doing a part-time job can