写作课I-love-you--my-teacher

,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,I love you,my teacher!,-,中考写作课训练,Aims,Knowledge Aims:,review words and phrases of a teacher(funny,hard-working,strict,responsible,serious,helpful,give classes,correct homework,help students,listen to students,encourage students,talk with students),Ability aims:,Students learn the writing skills:,Dont miss any required points!,Grammar:1)Word missing 2)Spelling,3)Word order 4)Punctuation,5)Grammar,3.Emotion aims:,Students love their teachers.,Our aims(,目标,):,Talk about your,favourite,teacher and write about your,favourite,teacher.,Round One:Words,Words,Words:Brainstorming,看看谁记的单词多！,teacher,friendly,funny,helpful,hardworking,strict,严厉的,serious,严肃的,responsible,负责任的,kind,busy,你能想出什么形容词来描述你的老师？,Round Two:Phrases,Phrases,看谁知道短语多！,Phrases:Brainstorming,老师们在上班时间通常要做什么工作呢？,改作业,上课,和同学谈心,照顾学生,给学生们建议,鼓励学生,correct homework,give classes,talk with students,take care of students,give students suggestions,encourage students,Round Three:,Sentences&Passages,Passages,This is my English teacher Cherry.Shes a beauty.And shes kind.She can make English class interesting.,Last week,I didnt do well in my English test.I was very sad.Cherry said to me,“Never give up!”,and she also gave me some good suggestions.So I worked hard.I did a good job this week.,I want to say thanks to her.I wish her to be healthy and happy every day.,Sentences&Passages,1.,外貌,2.,性格,3.,特长,4.,我发生了什么事,5.,我的感受,6.,老师如何帮助我,7.,我怎么做,8.,结果,9.,感谢老师,10.,祝福老师,Language points:,Never give up!,别放弃！,2.say thanks to,对某人说谢谢,2.wish her to be healthy and happy,祝愿她健康和开心,Sentences&Passages,外貌：,性格：,特长：,4.,老师和我的故事,1,）我遇到什么困难,:,2),我的感受,:,3,）老师如何帮助我,:,4,）我怎么做,:,5,）结果,:,5.,感谢老师,:,6.,祝福老师,:,Sentences&Passages,Shes a beauty,And shes kind.,She can make English class interesting.,Last week,I didnt do well in my English test.,I was very sad.,Cherry said to me,“Never give up!”,and she also gave me some good suggestions.,So I worked hard.,I did a good job this week.,I want to say thanks to her.,I wish her to be healthy and happy every day.,Writing:Who is your,favourite,teacher?,Our school headmaster is going to do a survey about students,favourite,teachers,because he wants to know which teachers are popular among the students.So you can writesomethingabout your,favourite,teacher and then put your composition in the school letter box after school today.,Writing,你们学校校长将要在学生中进行调查，因为他想知道哪些老师在学生之中最受欢迎，请写下你最喜欢的老师的情况，放学后把这篇文章放在学校的信箱。（,80,字左右）,The teacher I never forget,My,favourite,teacher is_ _,Writing,1.,第一段：简要介绍老师的性格或者特长,2.,第二段：列举一个事例，说明老师是如何在学习上帮助和鼓励你取得进步的,3.,第三段：感谢老师，祝愿老师,内容包括,This is my English teacher Cherry.Shes a beauty.And shes kind.She can make English class interesting.,Last week,I didnt do well in my English test.I was very sad.Cherry said to me,“Never give up!”,and she also gave me some good suggestions.So I worked hard.I did a good job this week.,I want to say thanks to her.I wish her to be healthy and happy every day.,写作范文,Exchange the composition.,同桌互改。,Post-writing,1.,要点,1,：老师的性格或者特长,(2,分）,2.,要点,2,：列举一个事例，说明老师是如何在学习上帮助和鼓励你取得进步的,(6,分）,3.,要点,3,：感谢老师，祝愿老师,(2,分）,4.,卷面情况,(2,分）,5.,语法结构单词拼写,(3,分,每个语法错误,0.5,分）,How to correct a composition,如何批改作文,Dont miss any points!,不要漏写任何一个要点！,Post-writing,1.WM(word missing):,漏词,My math teacher not funny.,My math teacher,is,not funny.,2.,Sp(spelling):,拼写,She is very,funy,.,.,She is very,funny.,3.,WO(word order):,语序,She,very,likes playing basketball.,She likes playing basketball,very much,.,4.Punctuation:,标点符号,She is very kind,she helps me with my homework after class.,She is kind,.,She helps me,5.,GM(grammar mistake):,语法错误,I must,saying,thanks to her.,I must,say,thanks to her.,Writing Skills:,Post-writing,1.,要点,1,：老师的性格或者特长,(2,分）,2.,要点,2,：列举一个事例，说明老师是如何在学习上帮助和鼓励你取得进步的,（,6,分）,3.,要点,3,：感谢老师，祝愿老师,（,2,分）,4.,卷面情况,（,2,分）,5.,语法结构单词拼写,（,3,分，,每个语法错误,0.5,分,）,Task,任务,Post-writing,A.,找出好的句子，用,_,做标记,B.,给你同桌的作文打分,Time to share your compositions,Post-writing,Share good sentences,分享好句子,1,）说一个描述外貌的好句子,2,）说一个描述性格的好句子,3,）说一个描述特长的好句子,4,）说一个关于老师做过的事情的好句子,5,）说一个关于感谢和祝福的话的好句子,2.Share compositions,分享文章,summary,How to describe a teacher?What does a teacher usually do?,funny,hard-working,strict,responsible,serious,helpful,give classes,correct homework,help students,listen to students,encourage students,talk with students,Writing skills:,Dont miss any points!,Grammar:1)Word missing 2)Spelling,3)Word order 4)Punctuation,5)Grammar,3.Enjoy writing and love your teachers!,Words,：,kind,busy,friendly,helpful,creative,strict,serious,hardworking,knowledgeable,responsible(,负责任的,),Phrases,:correct homework carefully,give classes,help students,talk with students,listen to students ideas,take care of students,encourage(,鼓励,)students,give students suggestions(,建议,),Sentences,:I didnt do well in,I did a good job.,I want to say thanks to,I wish him/her to be,Writing,