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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,求助信,4,信件写作步骤,1,、,仔细审题,，明确写作要求,一审,文,体,：,二,审,时态、人,称,：,三,审,要,点,：,2,、列出提纲，构建框架结构,-,框架,-,要点分布,-,逻辑关系,-,语言（词汇、语法）,（动词、连接成分、可用句型）,格式,正确，,语言得体；,时,态前后照,应人,称,上下一,致,；,要点齐全，,逻辑,清晰,3,、,依据,提纲，,扩展成文,紧,扣提,示,，,适,度发挥,，,扩展成句，,连,句成文,。,尽,量使用,较丰,富的词汇和语法结,构,。,4,、核查文章，适度修改。,格式正确,要点齐全,语言,准确,衔接自然,2017-9-15,刘 晓,文体概述,求助信是当个人遇到一些自己无法解决的问题或困难时向别人请求帮助的一种书信。通常包括三部分内容：,1.,表明写信目的，请求帮助。,2.,要清晰陈述请求帮助的具体内容。,3.,希望得到帮助。注意语气,委婉,、,真诚,，并要向收信人表示感谢。,求助信,正文可按照以下三部分进行写作：,Para 1,：说明,写信目的,；,Para 2,：阐述,求助原因,+,求助内容,Para 3,：表达期望与,感谢,。,To show your purpose(2,句,),问候,+,我要干啥,1. How is it going recently,？,Im writing this letter to you,for help,.,2. I hope my letter finds you well. I m writing to ask you,to do me a favor/give me a hand.,Para 1 Introduction,To show your problems,(5-6,句,),讲困难,+,需要的具体帮助,说明类：,1.,I am,encountering,three,problems,which trouble me a lot,.,To begin with,;Whats more,;What troubles me most is,记叙类,1. (,讲困难）,I,have trouble/difficulty/problems in doing sth.,或者,I find it hard /difficult to do sth ,或者,I have no idea of how to.,2.,(,有礼貌地求助,）,Faced with the above problems, I am anxious to get your help.,3.,Would you please,offer me some,constructive,guidance,on,?,或,. I wonder if you can,help me .,或,. Would you be so kind to help me .,Para 2 Body,To show your hope (2,句,),1.,I would be really grateful if you could do me the favor.,2.,Your generous help and immediate response are enthusiastically expected and shall be truly appreciated.,Looking forward to your reply.,Para 3 Closing,【,真题再现,】,假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（,resume,）。给外教,Ms Jenkins,写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（,format,）。,注意：,1.,词数,100,左右；,2.,可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,_,(2016,年全国卷,I,书面表达,),【,写作指导,】,一、,审题定调,本题要求写一封,求助信,。求助信主要是就某一问题向收信人求助。求助的对象可以是个人或机构。,求助信的人称以,第一人称,为主，时态以,现在时,为主，如果描述过去的情况要用,一般过去时,。求助信的语言应,诚恳真挚,，求助的目的应,清晰明确,。,二、谋篇布局,求助信的格式和其它的信件一样，通常包括称呼、正文、结束语和签名。内容主要包括,自我介绍,(,如与收信人熟悉，可省去此项,),、,希望得到的帮助,以及对收信人的,感谢,。,正文可按照以下三部分进行写作：,Para 1,：说明,写信目的,；,Para 2,：阐述,求助原因,+,求助内容,(,暑假想去一家外资公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历,),(,让外教帮助修改所附材料的文字和格式,),；,Para 3,：表达,感谢,。,【,参考范文,】,Dear Ms Jenkins,Im Li Hua from your English writing class last term. Im writing to ask for your help.,Im,applying for,a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation, and I have just,completed my application,letter and,resume,.,However, I am not quite sure of the language and the format Ive used. I know you have a very busy,schedule, but,Id be very grateful if you could,take some time to,go through,them and make necessary changes. You can find my application letter and resume in the,attachment,.,Thank you for your kindness!,Yours,Li Hua,Dear Ms Jenkins ,I hope,this letter finds you well,. Im Li Hua, a student from your class.,With,an application and a resume,badly,in need of,improvement,Im writing,with,anxiety,to,seek,help.,In an effort to,develop my independence and,enrich,my experience, Im,determined,to,apply for,a part-time job at a foreign company this summer. I have already,prepared,an application and a,resume,.,Nevertheless,a little unsure about it, I sincerely hope you can help me,enhance,it,which will help create a good impression.,Therefore,Would you be so kind to help me,with the,attached,materials, such as their,expressions,and,format,?,Your generous help and immediate response are enthusiastically expected,and shall be truly,appreciated.,Yours, Li Hua,写作训练a：,假定你是李华，乘坐FL753航班抵达伦敦后发现钱包遗失。请给航空公司写一封邮件说明情况并寻求帮助。内容包括：,1行程信息；2钱包特征；3联系方式。,注意：1. 词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；,参考范文,Dear Sir/Madam，,I am writing to report the loss of my wallet.,On,1st August, 2019 I flew business class on your flight FL753 from China to London.,I clearly remember it was with me immediately I boarded the plane. However，on arrival in London Heathrow Airport，I found it gone. I guess it must have,slipped out of,my pocket during the flight. Its a black leather one with around 200 dollars，my ID card，and two credit cards in it. Besides，it contains a family photo，my precious memory. As you can imagine，these matter a lot to me.,Has anybody happened to find it? Please email me at xxx.,Thank you for your time and support.,Yours sincerely，,Li Hua,
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