（江苏专用）高三英语二轮复习 主题36“记”肢体语言

The first attempt of even the most talented artists，musicians，and writers is seldom a masterpiece.If you consider your drafts as dress rehearsals(彩排)，or tryouts，revising will seem a natural part of the writing_1_What is the purpose of the dress rehearsals and the outoftown previews that many Broadway shows go through？The answer is adding，deleting，replacing，reordering，_2_，revising.Andrew Lloyd Webbers musical Phantom of the Opera underwent such a process.When Lloyd Webber began writing in 1984，he had in mind a funny，exciting production.However，when Phantom opened in London in 1986，the audience saw a moving psychological love story set to music.The musical had_3_several revisions due，in part，to problems with costuming and makeup(戏服和化妆)For instance，Lloyd Webber_4_some of the music because the Phantoms makeup prevented the actor from singing certain sounds.When you revise，you change aspects of your work in_5_ to your evolving purpose，or to include_6_ideas or newly discovered information.Revision is not just an afterthought that gets only as much time as you have at the end of an assignment._7_，it is a major stage of the writing process，and writers revise every step of the way.Even your decision to_8_topics while prewriting is a type of revising.However，dont make the mistake of skipping the revision stage that follows_9_Always make time to become your own_10_and view your dress rehearsal，so to speak.Reviewing your work in this way can give you_11_new ideas.Revising involves_12_the effectiveness and appropriateness of all aspects of your writing，making your purpose more clearly，and refocusing or developing the facts and ideas you present.When you revise，ask yourself the following questions，keeping in mind the audience for whom you are writing：Is my main idea or purpose_13_throughout my draft？Do I ever lose sight of my purpose？Have I given my readers all of the_14_that is，facts，opinions，inferencesthat they need in order to understand my main idea？Finally，have I included too many_15_details that may confuse readers?1A.technique Bstyle Cprocess Dcareer2A.in particular Bas a resultCfor example Din other words3A.undergone BskippedCrejected Dreplaced4A.rewrote Breleased Crecorded Dreserved5A.addition BresponseCopposition Dcontrast6A.fixed BambitiousCfamiliar Dfresh7A.However BMoreoverCInstead DTherefore8A.discuss BswitchCexhaust Dcover9A.drafting BrearrangingCperforming Dtraining10A.director BmasterCaudience Dvisitor11A.personal BvaluableCbasic Ddelicate12A.mixing BweakeningCmaintaining Dassessing13A.amazing BbrightCunique Dclear14A.angles Bevidence Cinformation Dhints15A.unnecessary BuninterestingCconcrete Dfinal【语篇解读】 修改是作品写作过程中非常重要且必须的步骤。本文讲述了作品修改的目的和途径。1C2答案B考查介词短语辨析。前面adding，deleting，replacing，reordering都是revising的某一方面，即revising和这些名词同义；in other words表示“换句话说”，符合句意。而in particular(尤其、特别，表强调)、as a result(因此，表结果)、for example(例如，表举例说明)都不符合题意。难度适中。3A4.A5答案B考查介词短语辨析。in addition to表示“而且；除之外还有”，in opposition to表示“与意见相反”，in contrast to表示“与形成对比”，都与句意不符。in response to(作为对的反应)在本句中表示“你修改作品是对你想改进作品目的的一种回应”。难度大。6D7.C8.B9.A10.C11.B12.D13.D14.C 15A