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高班英语写作材料高班英语写作材料写作检核表1.关于标题是否有标题？标题是否符合文章内容？标题是否太大，太空？标题写法是否正确？2.关于文体是否过于口语化？有些个人书信该用口语体时又是否用了太正规的书面语？3.关于结构结构是否合理？全文是否不止一段？是否完整，包括开头、正文和结尾？全文逻辑是否清晰？相对全文而言，开头或结尾是否太长？4.关于段落每一段是否有topicsentence？是否实现了unity（统一性），即每段只讲一个内容？文章coherence（连贯性）如何？是否运用了一些transition（过渡）手段？段落中是否包含了不相关的论据？每一段中的论据能支持该段的主题句吗？论据的安排是否按照一定的维度或层级结构？5.关于表达句子的形式是否多样化？文中是否用到了大学阶段的单词和短语？是否偶尔用到强调句、倒装句、谚语、名人名言、修辞手法？时态、人称、数上是否一致？拼写、语法方面是否有错误？大小写和标点方面是否有错误？要避免的低级错误文中夹杂汉字；用了顿号、书名号；句子中间到处打点；Takesth.asane*ample.后用逗号；Because从句单独使用；阿拉伯数字、年代小写；写信时日期写在信尾，还采用中国式写法；用了call110/120等中国特有的号码;将祈使句误用为激励自己；书名、电影名未用斜体。写作中的维度和层级结构(Hierarchy)Renumberthesentencestoarrangetheminwhatyouthinkisthebestntrollingidea:SinceIbeganlivinginanapartmentandgoingtoschool,mybiggestproblemhasbeenthehokingmyfoodisabiggerproblem.(2)Theworstproblemisdoingmylaundry.(3)Cleaningtheapartmentisnottoobad,althoughittakestimeawayfrommystudies;atleastwhenIfinshtheapartmentlooksnice.(4)Sometimesthmeasuredcorrectly,sothefoodtastesterrible.(5)ShoppingformyfoodismoredifficultbecauseIdontknowtheEnglishnamesofmanyfoods,andoftenIhavetospende*tratimeaskingforhelp.(6)Thelaundromatisfarfrommyapartment,andIwastemuchvaluabletime.(7)Ihaveneverhadtocookbefore,andusuallytheresultsarediscstlyIamembrassedasIsitinthelaundromatwithallthewomen,andsoIwaituntilallmyclothesaredirtybeforeIdothisterribletask.(9)Ialsohavetroublewiththecomplictedinstructions,sooccasionallyIendedupwithpinksocksorashirtthatistoosmall.Whatkindoftitlesaregood?concise:moreoftennounphrasesratherthanlongsentences;clearbeautifulanplete:notpartial,governingthewholete*tratherthanaparteye-catchingTheWritingofTitlesWritethefollowingtitlesintheproperform.1.whereIlived,andwhatIlivedfor_2.aretransgeniccropssafe_3.well-knowndramatistofthemingdynasty_4.adaytoremember_5.approachestoteachingenglishasaforeignlanguage_6.criticismsontheendingofmarktwainsadventuresofHuckleberryfinn_
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