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Description WhatisDescription Descriptionispaintingapictureinwordsofaperson place object orscene Itisamodeofexpositorywriting TypesofDescription DescriptionofaPerson DescriptionofaPlace DescriptionofanObject DescriptionofaScene TypesofDescription ImpressionisticDescription ObjectiveDescription ObjectiveDescription Hewasstandingonaraisedplatforminacorneroftheroom Hewasawizenedoldmanwithwrinkledfaceandashygreyhair Overhisshoulderwasthrownaroughbrowncoat alltornandfullofholes histhickbootswereoldandpatched andwithonehandheleantonaroughstick whilewiththeotherheheldouthisbatteredhatformoney ImpressionisticDescription Constance hiswife wasaruddy country lookinggirlwithsoftbrownhairandsturdybody anddeftmovements fullofunusualenergy Shehadbig wonderingeyes andasoftmildvoice andseemedjusttohavecomefromhernativevillage ScarlettO Harawasnotbeautiful butmendidnotrealizethiswhencaughtbyhercharmastheTarletontwinswere Hereyesweregreen andherskinwasthatsoftwhiteskinwhichSouthernwomenvaluedsohighly andcoveredsocarefullyfromthehotGeorgiasunwithhatsandgloves OnthatbrightAprilafternoonof1861 sixteen year oldScarlettsatinthecoolshadowsofthehouseatTara herfather splantation alargefarm especiallyinahotpartoftheworld onwhichaparticulartypeofcropisgrown StuartandBrentTarletonsatateachsideofher Theywerefriendlyyoungmenwithdeepred brownhair andwerecleverinthethingsthatmatteredinnorthGeorgiaatthattime growinggoodcotton ridingwell shootingstraightandbehavinglikeagentleman TheylookedacrosstheredearthofGeraldO Hara sland whichstretchedawayasfarastheeyecouldsee Thewhitehousewaslikeanislandinawildredsea theearthblood coloredaftertherainsofrecentweeks Qualities beautiful charming friendly clever DetailsSensoryDetailsFactualDetailsComparisonfigurativeComparisonliteralComparison ThreePillarsofDescription 1 Useofspecificverbs modifiers 2 Figurativedescription 3 Senses sight hearing taste smell touch 4 Tense Person Essentials ShowTell ImportantPrinciple BasicStructure Mainideaspecificdetailsconclusion Igrewtiredafterdinner AsIleanedbackandrestedmyheadagainstthetopofthechair myeyelidsbegantofeelheavy andtheedgesoftheemptyplateinfrontofmeblurredwiththewhitetablecloth Compare 1 Adescriptiveessayhasone cleardominantimpression select omitdetails 2 Adescriptiveessayreliesonconcrete sensorydetailstocommunicateitspointandtoinvolvethereader 3 Allthedescriptionshouldmanifesttheuniquefeatureofaperson place objectorscene 4 Keenobservationisnecessary Rules PrinciplesforOrganizingDetails 1 Arrangement spatialortemporal2 Observationpoint staticordynamic3 Mainimpression4 Stressonespeciallyimportantdetails OurhouseonMangoStreetissmallandredwithtightstepsinfrontandwindowssosmallyou dthinktheywereholdingtheirbreath Bricksarecrumblinginspaces andthefrontdoorissoswollenyouhavetopushhardtogetin Thereisnofrontyard onlyfourlittleelmsthecityplantedbythecurb Outbackisasmallgarageforthecarwedon townyetandasmallyardthatlookssmallerbetweenthetwobuildingsoneitherside Therearestairsinourhouse butthey reordinaryhallwaystairs andthehousehasonlyonewashroom Everybodyhastoshareabedroom MamaandPapa CarlosandKiki meandNinny DescriptionofPerson 1 Bydescriptivedetail appearance 2 Byobjectivewritertells 4 Bymentalactivity Fromwithinthecharacter Myyoungbrotherhasanextraordinarynose Itissobigandwidethatyoualwaysseehisnosefirstwhereveryoucatchthesightofhisface butnoonefeelsuncomfortableaboutit Onthecontrary itislovedbymostpeoplebecauseofthecomicstreakitaddstohisface Itoftenremindsusofthelovelybignoseofaclowninthecircus Sometimes especiallywhenhesmiles thebignosehassuchasoothingeffectthatyousmilewithhim forgettingyourtroubles Hegavehimselfthenickname Biggie Wealllovehimandhisbignose DescriptionofObjects 1 Describetheshape appearanceofobjects 2 Describethespecialfeature uniquecolorofobjectsthroughoursensoryexperience 3 Interminglehumanemotionintothedescription Apple Sight Itisalmostspherical eitherredorlightyellowoutsidebutwhiteinside Touch Afreshappleisalwaysfirm Smell Ithasaverymild pleasantfragrance unlikelemonwhichhasratherastrongsmell Taste Ittastessweetwithalittlesourpunchinit Hearing Whenyoubiteintoit itproducesamildcrunchysound DescriptionofaPlace 1 Aclearmainideaoroverallimpression2 Specificsensoryandfactualdetails effectivecomparisons3 Aclearconsistentmethodofarrangement Ilookedaroundtheroom andmyheartsank Cobwebsdangledfromtheceiling theoncewhitewashedwallswereyellowwithageandstreakedwithdust Thesinglenakedbulbwascoatedwithdirtandextremelydim Patchesofthecementfloorwereblackwithdampness Astrongmustysmellpervadedtheair Ihastenedtoopentheonlysmallwindow withitsrust spottedironbars Toreachit Ihadtostandontiptoe WhenIsucceededinpullingtheknobandwindowswungopen flakesofpeelingpaintaswellasashowerofdustfelltothefloor Theonlyfurnitureintheroomwasthreenarrowbedsofroughwoodenplanks oneagainstthewall theothertwostackedoneontopoftheother NeverinmylifehadIbeeninorevenimaginedaplacesoprimitiveandfilthy DescriptionofaScene 1 Describehumanactivityonatypicalscene 2 Describetherelationshipbetweenhumanandthesceneinacertaintime photographicdescription harmonyofstaticscenewithdynamichumanactivity PrinciplesforDescribingaScene 1 Asceneisconsistedofthreefactors thesetting thepeople andtheaction 2 Thescenecanbethemainpartofanessayoranepisodeinalongnarrative 3 thenaturalphenomenoncanalsobedescribed 4 Thewritershouldtrytocreateadominantimpressionwhendescribingascene TheStation Itwasarainydayandacrowdofpeoplewerewaitingforthebusatthestation Morethanonehourhadpassedbybutnobuscame Manypeoplegotwetandbegantocomplain Whatbadweather Iamtiredofwaiting Somepeopleweresotriedthattheysatontheground Someplayedgamesontheircellphones Somefeltsoboredthattheybegantoleave TopicsforPractice 1 Describeapersoninlove excitement despair 3 TheNew moonLakeatnight4 EnglishCorneronCampus5 VegetablemarketonSundaymorning WritingTaskforYourselves Writeanessayontheseasonwhichyoulikebest Paymoreattentiontotheselectionandorganizationofthedetails 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