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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,2020/10/26,#,专题,16,2021,新高考英语读后续写典例,分析,16,2021,新高考英语,Different Christmas,专题16 2021新高考英语读后续写典例分析162021新高,1,目录,01,表达积累,02,原文分析,03,续写扩展,04,续写赏析,目录01表达积累02原文分析03续写扩展04续写赏析,2,01,表达积累,01表达积累,3,表达积累,1.,一整天假期,2.,一只小手在擦我的,脸,3.,与时间赛跑,4.,寻找,礼物,5.,房间里充满了喜悦。,the whole day off,a small hand rubbing my face,race,against time,hunt,for gifts,Delight flooded the room.,表达积累1.一整天假期the whole day offa,4,表达积累,6.,空气柔和,清新,7.,四周静悄悄的，没有一丝声响。,8.,她深深吸了一口秋日清爽的空气,9.,第一道晨光,出现,10.,大雨正在猛浇房子,The air was delicate,there was a complete,absolute silence.,she breathed in the crisp autumn air,the first morning light started to appear,a storm was throwing rain heavily against the house.,表达积累6.空气柔和清新The air was delica,5,表达积累,11.,衣服被汗水浸湿,了,12.,我的血沸腾了。,13.,他不想谈细节。,14.,凯特挣扎着站起来。,15.,自掘坟墓,clothes were soaked with sweat,My blood boiled.,He didnt feel like going into details.,Kate struggled to her feet.,digging his own grave,表达积累11.衣服被汗水浸湿了clothes were so,6,表达积累,16.,脸上绽放出灿烂的,笑容,17.,像雕像一样一动不动地坐,着,18.,他感到,耳朵发红,了,19.,他感到一阵,震惊,20.,船倒过来，半埋在土里。,A big smile spread across,ones,face.,sat as still as a statue,He felt his ears redden.,He felt a jolt of astonishment,The boat lay upside down,half buried in the dirt.,表达积累16.脸上绽放出灿烂的笑容A big smile s,7,02,原文分析,02原文分析,8,Different Christmas,Several,years ago,I was living in New York and working for an airline,so I never got back home for Christmas.My Christmas was happy too with some other colleagues around.But in my heart I was sad because I couldnt stay with my family.Sometimes my colleagues would say,our Christmas was filled with tears.,But this Christmas was different.I was lucky.I had,the whole day off,which meant I could stay with my family on Christmas Eve.,原文分析,介绍往年圣诞我都缺席，今年我可以陪同家人。,Different Christmas 原文分析介绍往年圣诞,9,When Christmas morning came,I,awoke to a small hand rubbing my face.,“Dad,Merry Christmas!”was all my younger son had time to say.He seemed to be,racing against time.,I knew he was,hunting for gifts,with his brother eagerly.I got downstairs just to see the two little boys faces as they looked at the pocket rockets Santa Claus had left them.I realized that the real Christmas was for the children who had deep belief in the amazing power of Santa Claus.At first,their fingers went almost shyly over their toys.When their inspection had been completed,the two boys ensured that the gifts were really delivered by Santa Claus and they dragged everything into the center of the living room.,原文分析,圣诞节的情景。孩子们寻找圣诞老人给的礼物。,When Christmas morning came,I,10,Delight flooded the room,.As their mother began giving out gifts,I smiled to myself,wondering how my unexpected gifts this year would be received.With so many Christmas spent outside,I had prepared so many gifts for my children and together with my wife I hid them in several secret places.But the children were excellent detectives and they found all of them.They were happily opening packages constantly thanking considerate Santa Claus for his kindness and ability to know their desires.But I had not received a single one.I knew they had forgotten my existence with my absence from their Christmas these years.,原文分析,我准备了好多礼物给孩子们，但是自己没有一分礼物。,Delight flooded the room.As t,11,Paragraph,1,：,I had to admit that my disappointment was growing steadily._,Paragraph,2,：,Suddenly my wife walked up to me.,_,原文分析,没有礼物我挺难过的。下文应该是期待圣诞礼物的过程。希望谁能给我准备一个礼物。,妻子向我走来。后面应该是妻子给我准备了一个特别的礼物。,Paragraph 1：原文分析没有礼物我挺难过的。下文,12,03,续写扩展,03续写扩展,13,Paragraph 1,Paragraph 1,：,I had to admit that my disappointment was growing steadily.,I expected the gift from my son,He shared his gift with me,I still disappointed,Paragraph 1Paragraph 1：I exp,14,Paragraph,2,Paragraph 2,：,Suddenly my wife walked up to me.,She showed me the Christmas tree,I just,thought that tree was beautiful,But under the tree was a gift for me,Paragraph 2Paragraph 2：She s,15,句子润色,当我的小儿子跑来找我的时候，我在想是否能得到一份,礼物，他,真的很好，会顾全我的面子。,I was wondering whether I could get a gift when my younger son ran to me,who was,really kind enough,to.,save my face,I was wondering whether I could get a gift when my younger son ran to me,and he,was,really kind enough,to.,句子润色当我的小儿子跑来找我的时候，我在想是否能得到一份礼物,16,句子润色,他让我欣赏他的礼物，他深信这是圣诞老人精心挑选的礼物。,He asked me to admire his gift which he deeply believed was carefully chosen by Santa Claus.,admire his gift,deeply believed,was carefully chosen by,句子润色他让我欣赏他的礼物，他深信这是圣诞老人精心挑选的礼物,17,句子润色,他高兴地说，他会分享他的一些礼物，让我从中挑选一个。,share some of the gifts of his,He said happily that he would share some of the gifts of his and allow me to choose one from them.,句子润色他高兴地说，他会分享他的一些礼物，让我从中挑选一个。,18,句子润色,我由衷地感谢他，仍然感到失望。,from the bottom of my heart,I thanked him from the bottom of my heart,still feeling disappointed.,句子润色我由衷地感谢他，仍然感到失望。from the bo,19,句子润色,她似乎,猜到了我的感受。,It seemed that she had guessed how I felt.,It seemed that,句子润色她似乎猜到了我的感受。It seemed that,20,句子润色,她让我看看装饰着这么多盒子的圣诞树。,She asked me to look at the Christmas tree which was decorated with so many boxes.,Be decorated,with,句子润色她让我看看装饰着这么多盒子的圣诞树。She aske,21,句子润色,我想她是在
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