高考作文常考题型审题和模板课件

高考英语作文点睛高考英语作文点睛审题构思+万能模板+精彩靓句 高中英语高中英语 贺方臻贺方臻 With the NCEE(National College Entrance Examination)approaching,are you ready for A Successful Composition?The First Key Step is How to Examine the Requirements 审题构思段落审题构思段落 审题：构思段落 三/四段论开头段开头段一般写两或三句话左右，约30词 主体段主体段一般写6句话左右，约100词（三段论）两个平行段落，约100词（四段论）结尾段结尾段一般写两句话左右，约20词 审题：1.注意“具体、详细、简单”等题目要求 （2013）上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展，现就展出场所（博物馆还是社区图书馆）征集公众意见，假设你是王敏，给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。你的信必须满足以下要求：1.简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择；2.说明你的理由（从便利性，专业性等方面对这两个场所进行对比）。(2008)你班将组队参加学校组织的集体舞比赛（group dancing competition)，班长希望大家积极参加。对此谈谈你的看法。对此谈谈你的看法。你的文章必须包括以下内容：你是否会参加比赛 你做出该决定的具体理由 审题：2.如何决定主体段落的表达方式（2012）上周一，你在一所小学观摩了小女孩Amy所在班级的两堂绘画课（如图所示），回家后你用英语写了一篇日记，内容包括：对两堂绘画课的具体描述；你从中获得的启发。审题：2.如何决定主体段落的表达方式（2010）下图是小学新生的课堂一脚，对照你当时的上课情况，作出比较并谈谈你的感受。你的作文必须包括：描述图片里学生上课的场景比较你同时期的上课情况简单谈谈你的感受 审题：3.构思段落，突出主体 （2011）假如你是启明中学（Ming Qi Middle School）的李明，想申请一个扶贫项目，帮助贫困地区的儿童。根据以下启事，写一封申请信（信中不能提到真实姓名和学校）。启事国际儿童基金会将资助中学生开展扶贫项目，以帮助贫困地区的儿童。申请成功者将获得项目经费2000元。有意者请来信告知：1）你个人的基本情况；2）你对申请项目的基本设想；3）项目经费的使用计划。联系方式:2011hopeicf.org 2011 审题：3.构思段落，突出主体（2009）某海外学校举办英语夏令营，开设了如下课程：园艺（gardening）、烹饪（cooking）、防身术（self-defence）、护理（nursing）。假如你是王跃华（不可以用自己的真实姓名），写一封申请信，报名参加其中一门课程的学习。信地内容必须包括：你感兴趣的课程你期望从这门课程中学到什么为什么想学这些内容 审题：4.结合个人/具体事例 南方大学北方大学学费8000元/年5000元/年招生人数20人10人优惠政策无加20分 （2006）下表提供了你所心仪的南、北两所大学的招生信息。通过比较作出选择，并结合个人情况说明理由。审题：4.结合个人/具体事例 （2005）古人云：“天生我材必有用”请你描述你生活中的一件事，说明人各有所长，无论才能大小都能成为有用的人。（嘉定2014一模）据报导，在不久的将来，英语将不再列入高考科目。这引起了社会很大的关注和争议：赞成的说这可以减轻学生的负担；反对者认为全球化背景下英语越来越重要，如此将对中小学英语教学产生负面影响。请结合自己英语学习的经历，谈谈你对这一变化的看法和观点。参考词汇：globalization 审题：5.漫画图揭示的主题请认真观察下面的漫画，然后简要描述漫画内容，并根据你对该漫画的理解，谈谈自己的思考和看法。参考词汇：缸：vat；漏出来：leak out漏洞：loophole Do you want to have a successful composition within the exam-limited time?The Second Key Step is To Choose the Right Pattern 万能模板万能模板 议论文之段落结构 三/四段论开头段开头段一般写两或三句话左右，约30词 引入题目 说出自己的观点 主体段主体段一般写6句话左右，约100词（三段论）两个平行段落，约100词（四段论）写3个分论点，第一个3句，第二个2句和第三个1句 写2个分论点，第一个4句，第二个2句,或平行各3句 不写分论点，通过事实、例子、数字等论证，写6句话左右。结尾段结尾段一般写两句话左右，约20词 重申观点 提出希望和建议 万能模板之议论文开头公式万能模板之议论文开头公式 热门话题引题：热门话题引题：1.has caused wide public concern recent years（描述某件引起广泛关注的话题时）2.It seems that is（sweeping the world/catching on/becoming popular overnight）（比如说说科技的飞速发展，电脑、网络的兴起等等）3.An increasing number of people are beginning to realize that（比如意识到环保、节能、低碳的重要性）争议性话题引题：争议性话题引题：1.There is a general debate on/over Heated/hot debates on/over have been stirred up these day/recently（写到有争议的话题时）2.is now being questioned by more and more/an increasing number of people（写到某些举措不得人心，或者你持反对态度的时候，可以这么写）3.Whether to do A or to do B has become a practical and significant issue facing the Senior Three students in Shanghai.直点主题：直点主题：（对题目要求的第一句话直接进行翻译/简单描述）When speaking of/When it comes to，nothing else can be compared with that(定从）万能模板之议论文开头公式万能模板之议论文开头公式 实战练习：实战练习：1.在上海乘坐地铁需要接受安检(security check)，但是有些乘客并不配合。请具体分析其原因，并简要说明你对此现象的看法。(2014长宁二模）2.（2006）下表提供了你所心仪的南、北两所大学的招生信息。通过比较作出选择，并结合个人情况说明理由。3.据报导，在不久的将来，英语将不再列入高考科目。这引起了社会很大的关注和争议：赞成的说这可以减轻学生的负担；反对者认为全球化背景下英语越来越重要，如此将对中小学英语教学产生负面影响。请结合自己英语学习的经历，谈谈你对这一变化的看法和观点。参考词汇：globalization （2014嘉定一模）4.在中学阶段，英语课外阅读有许多材料。比如：小说、杂志、报纸、网络、系列读物和习题等。请写一篇关于中学英语课外阅读的文章，内容必须包括：介绍你喜欢的英语阅读材料简单阐述你在英语课外阅读中的收获和感受（2014宝山一模）万能模板之议论文表达观点万能模板之议论文表达观点 表达观点：表达观点：1.个人认为：For my part；From my point of view/From my perspective；Personally speaking；Personally I maintain that;I（firmly）hold the view that；In my humble opinion;Im of the opinion that（In my opinion&I think）个人选择：As for me,I prefer/my preference is/Im in favour of/I agree with2.大多数人认为、知道Many,if not most/Most,if not all,harbor the idea that；The majority of the people/Many individuals take the attitudethat；Its universally/widely accepted/acknowledged that；Its shared by a large number of people that；（Many people think that）3.有些人而有些人 Some people hold the view that,whereas/while others object to doing/disapprove that Some people agree.;instead,/on the contrary,the opponents maintain that 万能模板之议论文万能模板之议论文 实战练习：实战练习：1.在上海乘坐地铁需要接受安检(security check)，但是有些乘客并不配合。请具体分析其原因，并简要说明你对此现象的看法。(2014长宁二模）2.（2006）下表提供了你所心仪的南、北两所大学的招生信息。通过比较作出选择，并结合个人情况说明理由。3.据报导，在不久的将来，英语将不再列入高考科目。这引起了社会很大的关注和争议：赞成的说这可以减轻学生的负担；反对者认为全球化背景下英语越来越重要，如此将对中小学英语教学产生负面影响。请结合自己英语学习的经历，谈谈你对这一变化的看法和观点。参考词汇：globalization （2014嘉定一模）4.在中学阶段，英语课外阅读有许多材料。比如：小说、杂志、报纸、网络、系列读物和习题等。请写一篇关于中学英语课外阅读的文章，内容必须包括：介绍你喜欢的英语阅读材料简单阐述你在英语课外阅读中的收获和感受（2014宝山一模）万能模板之议论文论点阐述万能模板之议论文论点阐述 1.过渡句和第一个论点 理由论说:There are a couple of reasons that account for my opinion as follows.My reasons for are as follows.The main reason whyis that What matters most in is that In terms of,it is not that matters,but When it comes to the factors contributing to,nothing else can be compared with 影响变化:There are some(un)favourable aspects/influential changes that result fromWhat seems the most/least favourable aspect/the greatest change that have is 建议:There are some suggestions that I would like to make in dealing withas follows.The most feasible suggestion/most immediate action/most effective measure that should take to deal with is 方案计划:There are a series of steps in my project(plan)that will be demonstrated as follows.Of the top priority is/The first step is 万能模板之议论文论点阐述万能模板之议论文论点阐述 2.递进补充第二个论点 Besides;Moreover;Furthermore;Whats more;Equally significantly;More importantly,Likewise etc.3.对比性：Everything has its pluses and minuses.Every coin has two sides.On one hand,On the other hand,is a double-edged sword.We should not be blind to the other side of 4.并列性 In terms of;With regard to;Personally,Socially,In theory,;In practice5.举例说明 is such a prime example（就是个极好的例子）A case in point is that we can cite as an excellent example of perfectly fits/illustrates my idea/description of perfectly serve my purpose（恰好能说明我的观点）for example;for instance 万能模板之议论文结尾万能模板之议论文结尾 得出结论：得出结论：1.From what has been discussed above,we may safely draw/come to/reach/arrive at the conclusion that （议论类文章的万金油式句型，非常正规、书面，不过略微缺乏新意）2.Thus,it can be included that/we can find that 3.Needless to say/Admittedly/Obviously,（如果读者很难“显而见之”，但说无妨，就当读者的眼光太浅罢了！）4.Therefore,its quite reasonable for us to assume that（总结完之后，来点美好的期盼，尽情地去YY）5.To sum up/All in all/In brief,Im sure that/Im firmly convinced that提出建议和畅想：提出建议和畅想：1.Therefore/Thus,it is high time that we did（提建议还用个虚拟！很拽很高级！）2.Accordingly,I recommend that（some measures should be taken）（于是乎我建议）3.will be fantastic if 4.Only when,can we 书信体之开头公式书信体之开头公式:申请，表达观点/建议，投诉/反映情况等 Dear Sir/Madam,Ive learnt/heard(from)that.Im writing the letter to apply for the position/project.(个人基本简介）express my opinion/suggestion plain about（投诉事宜/物品的基本简介）report/introduce to you that（存在问题的基本状况）个人基本情况：My name is xxx,a student from xxx.My rich experience in well qualifies me to do./My great interests in trigger the intention to do投诉事宜：the poor quality of the product ordered by me a week ago/the bad service I received in doing sth.书信体之主体段落书信体之主体段落:申请，表达观点/建议，投诉/反映情况等 个人基本情况/申请条件：My name is xxx,a student from xxx.My rich experience in well qualifies me to do.As the saying goes,practice makes perfect.Through the previous experience,I have gained the problem-solving skill,which I believe is of great help in In addition,my great interests in.trigger the intention to doThe interest is the greatest motivation to do well.理由论说/建议/方案：(参考议论文）投诉事宜：(描述问题）the poor quality of the product ordered by me a week ago/the bad service I received in doing sth.What disappoints me most is thatBesides,there exist a serious problem with.（解决办法）As a loyal customer,I feel very sorry for Therefore,it is advisable that 书信体之结尾书信体之结尾:申请，表达观点/建议，投诉/反映情况等1.Thanks for taking time to read my letter and Im looking forward to.2.I shall be much obliged if you will offer me a precious opportunity to an interview.3.I would greatly appreciate it if my complaint is timely attended to.Yours sincerely,xxx书信体真题书信体真题(2011)申请设计方案类申请设计方案类 假如你是启明中学（Ming Qi Middle School）的李明，想申请一个扶贫项目，帮助贫困地区的儿童。根据以下启事，写一封申请信（信中不能提到真实姓名和学校）。启事 国际儿童基金会将资助中学生开展扶贫项目，以帮助贫困地区的儿童。申请成功者将获得项目经费2000元。有意者请来信告知：1）你个人的基本情况；2）你对申请项目的基本设想；3）项目经费的使用计划。联系方式:2011hopeicf.org 2011 书信体真题书信体真题(2014虹口二模虹口二模)校图书馆在校园网登出广告，拟招聘一名图书管理员助理(the Assistant Librarian)，请以Simon Johnson为名写一封求职信，内容必须包括：简述你写信的目的及对该职位的看法 说明你的理由，证明你能胜任该职位（注意：信中不能提及你的真实身份）（2013）书信体，观点理由论说类）书信体，观点理由论说类 上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展，现就展出场所（博物馆还是社区图书馆）征集公众意见，假设你是王敏，给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。你的信必须满足以下要求：1.简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择；2.说明你的理由（从便利性，专业性等方面对这两个场所进行对比）。投诉信：投诉信：汤姆在一家商店购得劣质商品，遂与营业员交涉。但该营业员对他态度粗暴，不予受理，汤姆为此向经理写一封投诉信。万能模板之图画类万能模板之图画类 开头公式开头公式1.Wearing excitement and eagerness expressions,the children in the picture raise their hands as high as they can for the opportunity to answer the question put forward by the teacher.2.As is vividly described in the picture,the foreign pupils are raising their hands,eager to answer the teachers questions.3.From the picture,we can see4.The picture depicts a scene of 启发或感想启发或感想/漫画主题漫画主题+观点论说（参考议论文）观点论说（参考议论文）1.On seeing the picture,I cant help thinking of 2.This picture reminds me of3.What it illustrates is a common issue that.(揭示的主题)4.One glance at the picture leaves me deep in thought.结尾结尾(参考议论文）参考议论文）万能模板之图画类实战练习 请认真观察下面的漫画，然后简要描述漫画内容，并根据你对该漫画的理解，谈谈自己的思考和看法。参考词汇：缸：vat；漏出来：leak out漏洞：loophole 万能模板之图画类实战练习（2010）下图是小学新生的课堂一脚，对照你当时的上课情况，作出比较并谈谈你的感受。你的作文必须包括：描述图片里学生上课的场景比较你同时期的上课情况简单谈谈你的感受 万能模板之图画类实战练习（2012）上周一，你在一所小学观摩了小女孩Amy所在班级的两堂绘画课（如图所示），回家后你用英语写了一篇日记日记，内容包括：对两堂绘画课的具体描述；你从中获得的启发。万能模板之图表类万能模板之图表类 开头公式开头公式1.Recently,a survey has been carried out onAs can be seen from the chart,According to the result shown on the chart,According to a recent survey,A recent survey revealed/indicated that 2.is on the decline/increase.More students with an increase of 9.3%and 16.4%respectively.90.1%of the students claim to Nearly half of them,which is far worse than that in 2007.A growing/increasing number of has increased/dropped dramatically in recent years主题和结尾段落（参考议论文）主题和结尾段落（参考议论文）万能模板之图表类实战练习万能模板之图表类实战练习 下图反映的是某高中2007年与2009年学生健康状况调查数据。请简要介绍一下学生健康的变化情况，分析其原因并提出相应的改进措施。万能模板之谚语警句类万能模板之谚语警句类开头公式开头公式 1.It is well known to us that the proverb“”has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study.It means _谚语的含义_.2.A proverb says，,which I think means 3.As a classic proverb goes,which I think means 4.There is much truth in the saying that 5.cited as saying，which I think means过渡句和主体段过渡句和主体段 1.The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows.A case in point is _例子_.（描述事例）2.is such a prime example.3.perfectly fits/illustrates the truth of the saying.结尾段结尾段 1.Therefore,Im sure it is of great importance to practise/stick to the proverb.The more aware we are of its significance,the more benefits we will get in our daily work and life.2.From the examples above,Im confirmly believed that the saying is worth keeping in our daily work and life.With its guide,we will 万能模板之谚语警句实战练习 05年上海高考作文：古人云：“天生我材必有用”（There must be a use for my talent）。通过描述你 生活中一件事，说明人各有所长，无论才能大小都能成为有用的人。Do you want to have your composition shining?The last Key Step is to Learn How to Polish 语言润色语言润色 语言润色之好词好句记叙文中的倒叙记叙文中的倒叙1.I never forget/remember/bear in mind the day when 2.Once upon a time was just a（用于强调某人某物今非昔3.There was a time when I/we/you did sthe.g.There was a time when we met with a series of disasters but we didnt let go our hope.4.What touches/impresses me most in the three-year high school life is 适当用被动替换主动适当用被动替换主动1.Attention should be paid to 2.Immediate/Instant/Effective measures should/is needed to be taken/carried out to3.Great/Joint effort should be made to 4.It should be pointed out that 5.It never be neglected/overlooked/ignored that 语言润色之好词好句做做是有好处的、有帮助的是有好处的、有帮助的It pays to;Its rewarding to;Its of great benefit to;（its good/helpful to）导致了导致了give rise to;（greatly）contribute to；is a major contributor to;lead to;result in （cause）喜爱喜爱,热衷于热衷于take a fancy to/have a fancy for have an affection/love for be fond of/be keen on be obsessedwith （like）努力做某事、尽某人之力做某事努力做某事、尽某人之力做某事 do everything in ones power to;take pains to do spare no effort/make an effort to do;do ones utmost to （try ones best to do）语言润色之好词好句Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。（强调多做练习的重要性）Where there is a will,there is a way.有志者事竟成。（学习要坚持不懈）Its never too old to learn.活到老，学到老。A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.千里之行始于足下。（强调脚踏实地的重要性）Action speaks louder than words.行动胜过语言。（学习，是要去做的）Experience is the mother of wisdom.实践出真知。（做学问要实践）Rome was not built in a day.伟业非一日之功。（学习是个积累的过程）One false step will make a great difference.失之毫厘，谬之千里。（强调治学要严谨）All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.只工作不休息，聪明孩子也变傻。（也要说说学习不能过度）Beauty will buy no beef.漂亮不能当饭吃。Beauty is only skin-deep.美貌不过一张皮 Beauty without virtue is like a rose without fragrance.无德之美犹如无香之玫瑰，徒有其表。Never judge a book by its cover.不可以貌取人 The time for the NCEE is counting down,But everyone of you must hold on,Remember“Every effort will pay off”Good Luck!