高三短文改错专题教学案

高考英语专题复习高考英语专题复习短短 文文 改改 错错 Neijiang No.3Middle School Chen lihua 2014.04 Today we had a chemistry test.I found the test difficulty,but I tried hardly to do it.Suddenly Mary,my best friend,asking me to let her to copy my answers.After think for some time,I let her copy my answers.But after the test,all of us were called to the teachers office.The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests.We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents.I was very upset.I didnt cheat.I was just helping a friend.Why does she punish me?20132013年四川高考短文改错年四川高考短文改错Warming-up exercise:Warming-up exercise:Today we had a chemistry test.I found the test difficulty,l but I tried hardly to do it.Suddenly Mary,my best friend,l asking me to let her to copy my answers.After think for some l time,I let her copy my answers.But after the test,all of us were l called to the teachers office.The teacher was angry because we l had same answers in the tests.We were warned not to cheat l again so she would need to see our parents.I was very upset.I l didnt cheat.I was just helping a friend.Why does she punish l me?difficultdifficulthardhardaskedasked thinkingthinkingbothboththethetesttestorordiddid Error CorrectionOur Topic Our Topic:名词名词 动词动词 形容形容词词/副副词词 冠词冠词 代词代词介词介词 连词连词2011 1 3 1 1 1 112012 1 3 1 21 2013 2 4 1 1 1 短文改错中各词性所占个数短文改错中各词性所占个数（四川高考2011-2013)其他其他 2 2 11.名词名词a.She said that she and my schoolmate all wished me success.b.We stopped to rest for a while and drink some waters._c.We practise three times every week and often watch football match on TV.d.He collected some informations about computers._watermatchesinformation单句改错的几个方面单句改错的几个方面 schoolmates1.名词名词2.代词代词a.I think I liked those classes because I felt that it helped me understand how the world worked.theyb.He is sitting between you and I.mec.Tom and Bob all needed some new clothes.both单句改错的几个方面单句改错的几个方面 1.名词名词2.代词代词3.冠词冠词 a.Each player must obey captain,who is the leader of the team.theb.Today I visited the Smiths-my first visit to a American family.anc.What a great progress he has made.单句改错的几个方面单句改错的几个方面 1.名词名词2.代词代词3.冠词冠词 4.介词介词a.Bill insisted in staying near the car.onb.In fact,they are planning to visit China in next year.c.We must keep in mind that we play for the team instead ourselves.ofd.She married with a man with a lot of money.单句改错的几个方面单句改错的几个方面 1.名词名词2.代词代词3.冠词冠词 4.介词介词5.动词动词a.Hello,I have learn about you from my English teacher,Miss Fang._learntc.I remembered her words and calm down.I did a good job and won the first prize._calmedb.When I got home,I found my house had broken into._ beend.In front of my house stand a tall tree._standse.She smiled,nodded her head._ nodding单句改错的几个方面单句改错的几个方面 1.名词名词2.代词代词3.冠词冠词 4.介词介词5.动词动词6.形容词形容词/副词副词a.Who works the most careful inyour class?_carefullyb.This book isnt as cheaper as that one ._cheapc.The bad meat smells terribly._ terribled.The hard you work,the greater progress youll make._harder单句改错的几个方面单句改错的几个方面 1.名词名词2.代词代词3.冠词冠词 4.介词介词5.动词动词6.形容词形容词/副词副词7.连词连词a.(2000)She was smiling but nodding at me ._andb.Though he worked hard,but he didnt pass the exam.c.Lets set off immediately,and well miss the train._d.I like the coat,and it was more than I would like to pay._单句改错的几个方面单句改错的几个方面 butor1.名词名词2.代词代词3.冠词冠词 4.介词介词5.动词动词6.形容词形容词/副词副词 7.连词连词a.I always wanted return to the village after moving away._b.I want to thank you again for have me in your home for the summer holiday._ toc.The boss makes them to work twelve hours a day._8.非谓语非谓语动词动词havingd.Play football makes us grow up tall and strong _Playing单句改错的几个方面单句改错的几个方面 Conclusion：1.名词名词：a.可数名词注意单复数.b.不可数名词无单复数.2.2.动词：动词：a.a.时态错误时态错误b.b.语态错误语态错误c.c.注意谓语动词要与主语保持一致注意谓语动词要与主语保持一致d.d.非谓语动词不能相互混淆非谓语动词不能相互混淆(dodo,to do,doing,doneto do,doing,done)3.形容词与副词形容词与副词：a.a.相互混用相互混用b.b.形容词原级与比较级混用形容词原级与比较级混用c.c.形容词形容词-eded形式与形式与-inging形式不分形式不分4.4.冠词冠词：a.a.a a和和anan不分不分b.b.冠词漏用冠词漏用c.c.冠词多用冠词多用5.连词：连词：a.a.逻辑关系（逻辑关系（and/but/so/or and/but/so/or 混用）混用）b.b.多余（多余（because.because.soso.）though/although.though/although.butbut.6.6.代词代词：a.a.主格与宾格主格与宾格/形容词性与名词性形容词性与名词性/反身代词反身代词b.b.代词单复数错误（代词单复数错误（he/shetheyhe/shethey it/him/herthem his/hertheirit/him/herthem his/hertheir）c.c.代词指代错误代词指代错误(we they(we they he-she his-her us-them)he-she his-her us-them)A seeing-dog is a very special dog,which help blind people walk along the streets and doing many other thing.We call these dogs“seeing-eye dogs”.One day a seeing-eye dog and the blind man got on a bus together.The bus full of people and it had no empty seats.One man,however,soon got up and left her seat.The dog took its master to the seat,so there was very less space.The dog began to push the people on each side by the nose until they moved down and finally there is enough room for them two.Exercise:A seeing-dog is a very special dog,which help blind people walk along the streets and doing many other thing.We call these dogs“seeing-eye dogs”.One day a seeing-eye dog and the blind man got on a bus together.The bus full of people and it had no empty seats.One man,however,soon got up and left her seat.The dog took its master to the seat,so there was very less space.The dog began to push the people on each side by the nose until they moved down and finally there is enough room for them two.Exercise:helpshelpsdodothingsthingsa awaswashishisbutbutlittlelittlewithwithwaswas1 1，通读全文，掌握大意。通读全文，掌握大意。2 2，上下联系，上下联系，逐逐句修改。句修改。3 3，先易后难，改出错句。，先易后难，改出错句。4 4，一行，一行未必未必一错，不能改动一错，不能改动相邻相邻两个词。两个词。5 5，正确使用批改符号，正确使用批改符号“，”。答案应写答案应写在下方，不能写在上面。在下方，不能写在上面。Thanks for your listening！Passage correctingvLike most of my schoolmates,I have neither brothers or 76_sisters-in any other words,I am an only child.My parents 77_love me dearly of course and will do all they can make sure 78_that I get a good education.They did not want me to do 79_any work at family.They want me to devote all my time to 80 _my studies so that Ill get good marks in all my subject.We 81_may be one family and live under a same roof,but we do 82_not seem to get much time to talk about together.It looks 83_as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest.Do they 84_ really understand their own daughter?What things are in 85_other homes,I wonder.anyto aboutdodohomehomesubjectssubjectsthetheororHowHownornor Thanks for your listening！名词的常见错误单复数名词错用。单复数名词错用。形容词错用名词。形容词错用名词。如如 importantimportanceimportantimportance，differentdifferencedifferentdifference，difficult-difficultydifficult-difficulty，interesting interesting（interestedinterested）-interest-interest，surprised surprised（surprisingsurprising）-surprise-surpriseegeg.a)a)Their word were a great encouragement to Their word were a great encouragement to me.(NMET2003)me.(NMET2003)b)b)On the way up I was busy taking pictureOn the way up I was busy taking picturesince the scenery was so beautiful.(NMET2002)since the scenery was so beautiful.(NMET2002)合乎 wordspicturespictures代词的错误代词的错误1,人称代词的偷换错误a）The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home.(NMET96)b）And they must not break the rules too often if we want to win the game.(NMET98)2,缺少人称代词的错误 c）The day before the speech contest,English teacher talked to me.(NMET2000)3,代词的误用d）I was learning to express me in simple English.（NMET2003)theirwemymyselfmyself1)一般过去时与一般 现在时错用;2)第三人称单数形式错用;3)And 前后动词时态不一致;4)主谓不一致;5)缺少谓语动词（尤其缺be动词）;6)主动语态与被动语态错用.Examples 1 a)I am happy with any programme but the others spent a lot of time arguing.(NMET99)b)She liked it very much and reads it to the class.(NMET2003)c）Last Sunday，police cars hurry to the tallest building in New York.（NMET92）d）Today it is much easier to be healthy than it is in the past.（NMET93）e)I use to play ping-pong a lot in my spare time,but now I am interested in football.(NMET97)f）He not only came to see me but also tell me the news._spend_read_hurried_was_used_told形容词，副词的错误形容词，副词的错误（1）修饰名词及在连系动词后用形容词；（2）修饰实义动词，形容词，分词及整个句子用副词；(3)形容词,副词的比较等级a）Im sure well have a wonderfully time together.(NMET99)b）Unfortunate,there are too many people in my family.(NMET99)c）The Huanghe River is the second longer river in China.wonderfulUnfortunatelylongest 非谓语动词的常见错误非谓语动词重点重点：不定式，动名词作主语，宾语，and 连接的不定式或动名词前后一致（尤其距离较远时），现在分词和过去分词的区别等。a)I was often a litt1e tired after a days work and watch TV demands very little effort .(NMET2001)b)It was very kind of them to meet me at the railway station and drove me to their home.(NMET97)watchingdrive