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第一步:细审题、三确定1确定体裁:本文为_作文;2确定人称:本文的主要人称应为第_人称;3确定时态:描述将来要发生的事情,时态以_为主。想象性想象性 一一、三、三 一般将来时一般将来时 第二步:依提纲、准翻译:或许有些人会去月球上度假。_:有些科学家将在海底生活。_:每家都有可视电话。_:我们可以通过可视电话进行体检和购物。_Perhaps some people will go to the moon for a holiday.Some scientists will live under the sea.We will have videophones in every home.We can have a medical examination or do some shopping without leaving our homes.:广播或电视上会有更多的教育节目。_:孩子可以在家学习而不是天天去上学。_:也许将来每个家庭都会有机器人。_:它可以做它被告诉的一切,如购物、做家务等。_Tt can do whatever it is told to,such as shopping,housework and so on.There will be more educational programs on the radio or TV.Children will study at home instead of going to school every day.Maybe in the future each family will have a robot.第四步:句升级、求靓丽句式升级一:用连词 and 连接。_句式升级二:用 which 引导定语从句把要连接起来,并修饰 videophones_Some people will go to the moon for their holidays,and some scientists will live under the sea.Well have more videophones in our home by which we can have a medical exam or do some shopping without leaving our homes.句式升级三句式升级三:以为主句以为主句,然后用然后用which引导的定语从句改写。引导的定语从句改写。_Maybe in the future each family will have a robot,which can do whatever it is told to,such as shopping,housework and so on.巧衔接、顺成文Our Future Life_ I am always dreaming about life in the future.What on earth will it be like?Perhaps some people will go to the moon for a holiday,and some scientists will live under the sea.Maybe we will have video-phones in everyhome by which we can have a medical examinationor do some shopping without leaving our homes._ Im sure therell be more educational programs on the radio or TV.Children will study at home instead of going to school every day.No people like doing housework.Maybe in the future each family will have a robot,which can do whatever it is told to,such as shopping,housework and so on.I do believe the dream will come true some day.祝您成功!祝您成功!
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