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Unit 8 Task牛津版牛津版 八年级八年级(8A)floodearthquakefirestormnatural disastersWhats the weather like?What will happen if it snows very heavily?Where did the snowstorm happen?Who did Sandy share the umbrella with?What did Sandy hear the next morning?In Beijing.Millie.She heard the noise of traffic.A snowstorm hit Beijing on Friday,5 January.学学.科科.网网I was doing my _ in the classroom when Mr.Wu came in and told us to _.My parents could not get home that night because of the heavy snow,so Millie asked me to go to her home.I _ an umbrella with her while we were walking to the bus stop.The weather was really terrible.The _ kept falling around us.We could hear the _ blowing.Suddenly,a strong wind came from behind.I lost my _ in the wind and I nearly _ over.We had to walk slowly in the deep snow.When we arrived at the bus stop,we saw many people _ there.At last,we got on a bus to Millies home.I stayed at Millies home that night.I heard the noise of _ the next morning.People were trying to _ the snow from the street.Snowstorm hit Beijinghomeworkgo home earlysharedsnowumbrellafellwaitingtrafficclearwindWhere did it happen?When did it happen?Beijing Friday,5th Jan P1Where was she?What did she do?What did she hear?What did she see?What happened?at schoolshared,walked to bus stopwindsnow,people atlost,walked slowlyP2-3Where was she?What did she hear?What did she see?How did she feel?at Millies homenoise of trafficpeople removed the snowIt was terribleP4How did she feel?What did she see?What did she hear?Where was she?After the snowstormWhat happened?What did she see?What did she hear?What did she do?Where was Sandy?During the snowstormWhen did it happen?Where did it happen?IntroductionBeijing Friday,28thJan at schoolshared,walked to bus stopwindsnow,people atLost,walked slowlyat Millies homenoise of trafficpeople removed the snowIt was terriblePara.2-3Para.4Para.1choose the topic定定题题choose materials选材选材start to write着手写作着手写作make the list列提纲列提纲Lets choose the topic!A fireAn earthquakeA floodA rainstormA typhoon 台风台风A snowstormA sandstorm 沙尘暴沙尘暴An accident Jim的家中失火了,请根据下列提示写一篇短文,的家中失火了,请根据下列提示写一篇短文,对事故经过作一个介绍对事故经过作一个介绍,字数不少于字数不少于90个单词。个单词。1.3月月6日上午日上午Jim家的房子被闪电击中失火。家的房子被闪电击中失火。2.Jim及他的父母当时在及他的父母当时在(做做),被困家中被困家中,看到看到,听到听到 3.幸运的是幸运的是Jim没有受伤,但他的父亲左手受伤。没有受伤,但他的父亲左手受伤。4.Jim 打了打了119,消防员,消防员5分钟后到达,救了他们并把他们送分钟后到达,救了他们并把他们送 去了医院。去了医院。5.火灾后火灾后Jim的感受的感受 A terrible fireIntroductionWhere did it happen?When did it happen?During the Disaster/accidentWhere were you?What did you do?What did you hear?What did you see?What happened?How did you feel?Make the list!After the disaster/accidentWhere were you?What did you hear?What did you see?How did you feel?First,Then,Next,Finally/At lastThese words are useful:Try to write Jim的家中失火了,请根据下列提示写一篇短文,的家中失火了,请根据下列提示写一篇短文,对事故经过作一个介绍对事故经过作一个介绍,字数不少于字数不少于90个单词。个单词。1.3月月6日上午日上午Jim家的房子被闪电击中失火。家的房子被闪电击中失火。2.Jim及他的父母当时在及他的父母当时在(做做),被困家中被困家中,看到看到,听到听到 3.幸运的是幸运的是Jim没有受伤,但他的父亲左手受伤。没有受伤,但他的父亲左手受伤。4.Jim 打了打了119,消防员,消防员5分钟后到达,救了他们并把他们送分钟后到达,救了他们并把他们送 去了医院。去了医院。5.火灾后火灾后Jim的感受的感受 A terrible fire中考作文评分标准中考作文评分标准 先根据整体内容和语言表达确定档次,然后在该档次内评出分数。先根据整体内容和语言表达确定档次,然后在该档次内评出分数。第五档(第五档(1513分)分)完全符合题目要求,表达思想清楚,内容丰富。使用多种语完全符合题目要求,表达思想清楚,内容丰富。使用多种语法结构和丰富的词汇,语言通顺,语意连贯,具有逻辑性。允许法结构和丰富的词汇,语言通顺,语意连贯,具有逻辑性。允许个别语言错误。个别语言错误。第四档(第四档(1210分)分)符合题目要求,表达思想基本清楚,内容完整。语法结构和符合题目要求,表达思想基本清楚,内容完整。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本通顺,语意基本连贯。有少量词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本通顺,语意基本连贯。有少量语言错误,但不影响整体理解。语言错误,但不影响整体理解。第三档(第三档(97分)分)基本符合题目要求,表达思想不够清楚,内容基本完整。语基本符合题目要求,表达思想不够清楚,内容基本完整。语法结构和词汇错误较多,语言欠通顺。法结构和词汇错误较多,语言欠通顺。第二档(第二档(64分)分)部分内容符合题目要求,表达思想不够清楚,内容不完整。部分内容符合题目要求,表达思想不够清楚,内容不完整。语法结构和词汇错误很多,所写内容难以理解。语法结构和词汇错误很多,所写内容难以理解。第一档(第一档(30分)分)与题目有关的内容不多,不能表达自己的思想。只是简单拼与题目有关的内容不多,不能表达自己的思想。只是简单拼凑提示词语,所写内容难以理解。凑提示词语,所写内容难以理解。Homework1.Finish the composition.2.Finish off the exercises.
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