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1 xxxxxx2xxx3xxx4 56xxx7201202jenny1. 2. 3. 81. 1504. 5. dear jenny,how nice to hear from you! in your letter you asked me how to keep healthy._how nice to hear from you! in your letter you asked me how to keep healthy. now. i will give you some advice. frist, notice the diet, to eat much fish, flesh and bean, pay more attention to eat fresh vegetables and fruits. dont eat too much dessert. second, do more exercise can make your bodies stronger. join some pe activities is good for relief ourselves. third, make sure have eight sleep timeevery day. dont stay up late or you will feel sleepy. so, follow what i say and you will keep healthy. i hope to hear from you soon.li hua 1. fristfirst2. ourselvesyourselves3. relief ourselvesreliefrelievingourselves4. 1 pay attention to eat fresh vegetables and fruitspay attention to sth./doing sth.,pay attention to eating fresh vegetables and fruits2 join some pe activities is good for relief ourselvesjoin take part in; take part in pe activites be good to do sth. help do sth. help relieve ourselves3 make sure have eight sleep time every daymake sure of sth.; make sure + make sure that you sleep for eight hours5. do more exercise can make your bodies strongerjoin some pe activities is good for relief ourselvesdoing more exercise can make your bodies stronger.taking part in pe activities helps you relieve yourselves. notice the diet, to eat much fish, flesh and bean, pay more attention to eat fresh vegetables and fruits. we pay more attention to our regular diet and eat plenty of nutritious foods, such as fish, meat, eggs and beans, especially fresh vegetables and fruit. first, second, thirdwhats more, furthermore, also now. i will tell you how to keep healthy.now, i will tell you how to keep healthy.1. 2. 3. 1 afraidfrightened; happentake place;2 make it + for sb. to do sth.3 besides, whats morehowever; on the contrary; in conclusion; in a word4 only by following the advice above can you 4. 5. 15025 dear jenny,how nice to hear from you! in your letter you asked me how to keep healthy. i would like to give you some advice.as you know, we teenagers grow very fast, so we need plenty of nutritious foods, such as fish, meat, eggs and beans, especially fresh vegetables and fruit. youd better not eat too much sweet food. also, its necessary for you to take physical exercise regularly instead of studying in the classroom all the time. for example, you can play basketball or swim after school. whats more, having enough sleep is very important. so i advise you to have at least eight hours of sleep every day and not to stay up too late. only in this way can you keep energetic and have a healthy body.li hua ? ? ?