高考英语一轮复习 高考写作6大增分锦囊与6类背诵宝典 6大增分锦囊 6.书面表达常见错误及对策课件.ppt

写作进阶提升之六 书面表达常见错误及对策 常见错误有以下几个方面 1 审题错误抓不住文章的所要写的要点例文 1 中国学生通常过生日的方式 如生日聚会 生日礼物 生日祝福等 2 我认为有意义的庆祝方式以及这样做的目的或理由 ChineseBirthdayFirstletmeshowyousomethingabouttheChinesebirthday Usuallyitincludesthreeparts party giftandgoodrewards Onthebirthday weoftenwearourfavoriteclothes whichmakesusveryhappy Wealsowillorganizeabirthdaypartyintheevening Attheparty we llpreparelotsofdeliciousfoods especiallythebirthdaycake Thenwewilleatthecake Wesinganddancetogether Atlast we lltakethegifttothepersonwhowasbornonthatday Inthegifttherewillbeacard onwhichareourbestwishes 2 格式错误不熟悉常见应用文的格式需要熟练掌握的应用文有 书信 日记 通知 分书面通知和口头通知 Receiver saddressDate Dear Bodyoftheletter Sincerely TrulyYours Writer sname Saturday February14th 2007 Sunny Thebodyoftheyourdiary Boysandgirls mayIhaveyourattention please Attentionplease everyone That sall Thankyou 口头通知 书面通知 Notice Student sUnion 3 词法错误1 用词重复如 returnback repeatagain ChinesestudentsinChinahaveourownwaytocelebratebirthday 2 用词不当如 把bring写成 take get fetch 等把欢迎某人到我校写成welcomeyoutovisitourschool正确的说法是 Youarewelcometovisitourschool 或Welcometoourschool 3 词性混淆A 不及物动词当成及物动词 例如 ishappened isbelongedto come to thecity return to theplaceB 把形容词用作动词如 例如 Thiswillhappytheforeignvisitors Pleasereadyasmallgift C 不可数名词用成可数名词 例如 makeagreatprogresswhatafineweatherday D 形容词和副词的使用错误例如 workhardlytalkfriendlyDon ttakeitserious 4 虚词错误A 冠词的漏用和误用例如 Sendhimaemail B 介词使用错误例如 Theyhadtowaitthebusunderthehotsun underthesun 普天之下 5 拼写错误把礼物present写成peasant parents pleasant 如把present写成parents那行文就成了pleasebringalongyoursmallparentsforthispurpose Remembertowrapitup signyournameandwriteafewwordsofgoodwishes 注意同形词 model medal mental metaleffort effect offer affectabroad board broad aboardstrict strike stick注意易拼错单词 modern government destroy true official等 4 句法错误1 连词错误如 because与so although though与but同时使用 或两个句子之间没有连词 如 HelikesEnglish IlikeMaths 2 汉式英语如 晚会将在主楼花园顶上举行 写成 Thepartywillinthemainbuildingroofgardenheld 操场上有五个学生在踢足球 写成 Ontheplaygroundtherearefivestudentsplayfootball 把Therewillbeaparty写成Therewillhaveaparty 3 句子前后不一致学生常常容易在文章中的时态 语态 人称 主谓一致出现错误 如 Theplacecansolvetheproblem Thebookwasdisappearedlastweek MrSmith withhiswife havearrivedinShanghai IwillgotovisityouassoonasIwillreturntoChina Youshouldworkhard Ifnot wewillfailtopasstheexam 四 对策 词汇是保证 语法是基础 句型是关键 如何写好句子写好句子有许多方法和技巧 谈谈句子的基本结构及与汉语的一些区别 A 确定主语英语句子无论多长都有自己的主语 祈使句除外 动手写句子首先要确定主语 其次要特别注意汉语与英语的区别 其中几点请学生注意 A 汉语中的主语不一定是英文中的主语 例如 北京八月多雨 英文中不说 BeijingrainsmuchinAugust 而说 ItrainsmuchinBeijinginAugust 英文中主谓语有时需要倒装 汉语则不需要 例如 OnlythendidIrealizehowimportantitistostudyEnglish B 动词是关键英文中没有动词就构不成句子 但英语动词千变万化 稍不注意就会写错句子 在写句子时应特别注意以下几个方面 注意及物与不及物动词的正确运用 注意非延续性动词的用法 注意一些不可用作被动语态的动词 注意一些动词的特殊用法 注意那些汉译意思相同实际用法不同的词 注意动词的时态及时态的一致 注意部分常用动词及动词词组的辨异 否则 差之毫厘 谬以千里 以下是一些容易混淆的动词词组 betiredof因 烦恼betiredfrom因 感到累wear穿 状态 puton穿 动作 becomparedwith与 比较becomparedto把 比作bemadefrom由 制作 改变本质 bemadeupof由 构成bemadeof由 制成 不改变本质 find找 结果 lookfor找 动作 lookat看 动作 see看 结果 beusedto习惯于usedto过去常常 1 启 创造良好开端常用表达 启 的过渡词语和词组有 inthefirstplace 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