新人教版九年级英语第四单元写作指导.ppt

Unit4Iusedtobeafraidofthedark SectionBWriting Talking 3a Writenotesabouthowyouhavechangedinyourappearance personalityandhobbies Thentalkwithapartneraboutyourchanges Appearance tall short fat thin slim strong young old straighthair curlyhair longhair shorthair amediumbody Talking Personality humorous outgoing serious funny smart friendly shy helpful quiet active brave unfriendly hobbies readcartoon novel sing dance playfootball basketball Talking Whatmakesagoodcomposition Discussion 写作步骤 审题立意定主人称时态用词得当检查修改 写作时 找关键词由词组句组句成段扩句成段 Content Everythingneededincludedwhichisrelatedtoyourview 内容要完整 Structure Goodbeginningandending 好的开头结尾 Wellorganizedandsmoothlydeveloped 结构合理 行文流畅 Properlinkingwordsbetweensentences 使用恰当的连接词 练一练 Writesentencesbyusingusedto 1 I havecurlyhair havestraighthairIusedtohavecurlyhair butnowIhavestraighthair 2 I sofat thinIusedtobesofat butnowIamthin 练一练 Writesentencesbyusingusedto 3 I shy outgoingandbraveIusedtobeshy butnowIamoutgoingandbrave 4 I readbooksonmartialarts readbooksonWesterncultureIusedtoreadbooksonmartialarts butnowIreadbooksonWesternculture 练一练 Writesentencesbyusingusedto 1 我过去是走路上学的 Iusedtogotoschoolonfoot walktoschool 2 我过去喜欢跑步 但现在我喜欢打篮球 Iusedtolikerunning butnowIlikeplayingbasketball Properlinkingwordsbetweensentences 连接词 first second third themostimportant firstly secondly thirdly finally 首先 第二 第三 表示举例子 forexample例如Take forexample以 为例suchas比如like像 表示转折 however but 然而 但是 表示个人观点 Inmyview在我看来Inmyopinion我认为AsfarasIamconcerned就我而言 Writeabouthowyouhavechanged Whatdidyouusetobelike Whichchangeisthemostimportantone andwhy 3b Trytowritethreeparagraphs 总分总 Paragraph1 Generalintroductionaboutthechangesinyourlife Paragraph2 Themostimportantchangeandhowithappened Paragraph3 Toexpressyourownideas HowI veChanged Mylifehaschangedalotinthelastfewyears Iusedto NowI m Thebiggestchangeinmylifewas Thisisthemostimportantchangebecause HowI veChanged Mylifehaschangedalotinthepastfewyears Iusedtohavesomuchtime butnowI mtoobusy Ialwaysusedtogetupearlyandstayinschoolallday BeforeIgotohighschool Iusedtospendlotsoftimeplayinggameswithmyfriends butIjustdon thavethetimeanymore Intheevening IusedtowatchTVorplaycomputergames butnowIhavetostudy Ilovemusic andmyfatherusedtotakemetoconcerts ButIstillreallylovemypresentlife ThebiggestchangeinmylifewasI mmorebusythanbefore becauseIwentintohighschoolandIhavemorehomework