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Friends How to make friends Everyone needs friends. A friend can give us help and share our difficulties and happiness. But how can we make friends? First, to make friends, you must be friendly to others. Second, friends should negotiate instead of quarrel.When you don t agree someone, please discuss with him. Finally, never believe in those who leave you when you are in trouble. And never leave your friend when he is in trouble. Remember, a friend in need is a friend indeed. Something we may do when we meet I can do a lot of things with my friends when we get together. And as time goes by, our friendship is growing. For example, I can play computer games and go jogging with them. Playing computer games is so interesting that we feel nothing can be more amazing. Also, going jogging can make us stronger and healthier. By the way, we usually learn math together, too. You know, I m good at math, so I often help my friends with math. In my opinion, mutual help and understanding are integral to friendship. Who I want to make friends with I intend to make more new friends in the future. I will make some friends in different places, such as, friends in other classes or other schools. Know how valuable it is: friendship we must be very careful to make friends. Real friends are the heart of those who have good character, superior power and goodness. Real friends can share one and all our sorrows and joys of double-all us. Only so that we can develop true friendship and keep the divine light of friendship burning all of our lives . My best friend My best friend is Enid. She is helpful and polite. She always says good morning when he meets teachers. When she was on the bus he always gives seats to people in need. She also has a good sense. She always tells me some good jokes. She often makes me laugh happily. Now, we do not meet usually. But we must be best friends until the end.What I think of friendship Life is full of conflict and conflict, we need to support and help for difficult. Real friends to share the joy of not only, but they often do not share the sorrow. Friendship, life is happiness and harmony. No friendship that life is hostile and unfortunate also needs friends to share our happiness. Friendship we can enjoy one of the greatest joys. It means that loyalty, integrity, sympathy, feelings, willing to help. Why we need friend Everyone needs friendship. No one can sail to single life in the ocean. We need help, or provide to others for help. In modern times, people pay more attention to relationships and connections. Friendship, life is happiness and harmony. There is no friendship that life is hostile and unfortunately also need friends to share our happiness. Real friends to share the joy of not only, but they often do not share the sorrow.AmovingstoryIread1.WhatthestoryisaboutRecentlyIreadastoryaboutanappletreeandayoungboy,Iwasmovedalotandatthesametime,itmademesad.ActuallyIshouldcallitafable,becauseIalsolearntalotfromit.inthestory,therewasahugeappletree.Alittleboylovedtoplayarounditeveryday.Timewentby.Whenthelittleboygrewup,henolongercame.Whenthetreecalledtheboywhenhepassedby.Theboysaidhewasbusyforlivingandheneededmoneytobuyahouse.Sothetreelethimpicktheapples,chopoffthebranchesandsellthem.”Theboydidallthethingshappily.Thetreeleftaloneandsoondied.Theonlyhopeofthetreewasthattheboywouldstaylonger,buthedidnt.Manyyearslater,theboymissedthetreeandhewenttovisitthetree,hefoundthetreewasdeadandherealizedthetreewashisonlyhappymemory.Butitwastoolate. Haveyoueverreadanymovingstories?2.WhythisstoryimpressedmealotIwasdeeplyimpressedbythestory,becauseIthinkthetreeislikeourparents,andwearejustliketheboy.Theygiveeverythingtheyhave.Butwesometimesdonotappreciatewhattheydidforus,untilitistoolate.Theynevermentionwhattheydidforus.Theyneveraskustodoanythingforthem.Theirhopeissosimple,theyhopeushappyandhealthy,andwhenwegrowupandleavehome,wecangohometovisitthemregularly.问考官的问题:Doyougohomeandvisityourparentsregularly3.HowthestorymademethinkofmyparentsLiketheappletree,myparentsalsolovemeverymuch.IamusedtoaskingmyparentstobuymeeverythingIlike,theytakecareofmeverywellandgivemealltheirlove.Likethelittleboy,Itakeeverythingstheygavemeforgranted(把。当做理所当然)，IevenneversaythankstothemandneverthinkofwhatIcangivethemback.UntilIreadthestory,IthinkIshouldalsodosomethingformyparents.Doyouthinktheparentsareliketheappletreeinthestory?附加问题：Whatshouldyoudoforyourparents?Weshouldnotletthemdown.Weshouldnotblamethem.Weshouldnotletthemangry.Weshouldgohomefrequentlyafterwegrowup.Ourparentswillbeolderandolder,iftheyletyouangry,dontblamethem.Iftheycouldnotcookoneday,Iwillcookforthem.Iftheycouldnotwalkoneday,Iwillholdthemtogoanywhere.4.WhattheproblemthestorytoldmebetweenparentsandchildrenIthink,aseriousproblembetweenparentsandchildrenistoomuchlove.Forexample,ourparentsareliketheappletree,theysacrifice(牺牲)everythingeventheirlivesinreturnfor（换回）ourhappiness.Idontthinkitsgood,becauseofsuchparentsnowadays,manypeoplewholiveonnothingbuttheirparentsappeared,wecallthemNEET.(啃老族).Thatmeanssomepepolehavenoemploymentandonlydependontheirparents,evenwhentheyare30.However,IdontthinkIlldothatifIhaveachildinthefuture.Whenmychildisoldenough,Illteachhimhowtomakemoneyandhowtotakecareofhimselfinsteadofonlygiving.SoIthinkteachingisbetterthangiving.Howmuchlovedoyougivetoyourkids?5.WhatwecandotosolvetheproblemAsparents,theonlywaytosolvetheproblemisstopgivingtoomuchlovetothechildren,dontspoilthechildren.lettheirchildrentolookforapart-timejobwhentheystudyintheuniversity,itsagoodwaytopractiseinthesociety.Asachild,Ithinkthebestwaytosolvetheproblemisindependence,weshouldfaceboththechallegeandthetroublebravely,weshoulddealwiththeproblembyourselves.Whenweneedmoney,wecanlookforajob.whenwehaveadream,wecanrealizeitthroughhardwork.Ontheotherhand,weshouldtreatourparentswell.neversayharmfulwordstoourparents.Tobeagoodlistener,earnlotsofmoney,sothattheycanenjoythebestthingsintheworld.Iwilltakethemtotravelaround.Myparentslovetravelling.IthinkIcandothose.Iwilltrymybest.Didyoulookforapart-timejobwhenyouwerestudyingintheuniversity?Myhobby-Playingthepiano1.HowIgotinterestedinit.2.WhatIgotfrommyhobby.3.WhatIhavedoneformyhobby4.WhatIhopetodoformyhobbyinthefuture5.Whatmyparentsopinionaboutmyhobby.1.whenIwas7yearsold,Istartedtoplaythepiano.Atthebeginning,Ithoughtitwastoodifficulttome.Inearlygaveitup.Withmyparentshelp,Icontinuedtopractice.Inordertomakemyparentshappy,Ididitveryhard.Uptonow,Ihavelearntmanysongsandgotinterestedinplayingthepiano.2.WhenIamtired,Icanplaythepianoforawhile,thenIwillforgetalltroublesaroundme.Becauseofmyhardness,Ivealreadygotmanycertificatesitcanrelivesthetensionfromtheproblemsofahardday.andalsothesecertificatesgivemechancestoenterafamoushighschool.Whenwehaveapartyatschool,Icanperformonthestage,andtheaudiencewillgivemeapplause，andthen,Iwillbeproudofmyself.ExactlyIamcrazyaboutitandIdliketobeamusicianinthefuture.Thatsmydream.3.Ihavelearntplayingthepianofor4years.Iusuallypracticeuntil8intheeveningandthenIhavetofinishmyhomework.Myfingersoftenhurt;Icanhardlypickupapen.Whenmyfriendsgoouttoplaywiththeirparents,Ialwaysstayathometostrikethekeysalone.Thepianocostmelotsofmoney,andIpaidmuchmoreforlearningit.Ontheweekends,Iusuallytakepartinsomecompetitiontogetthecertificates.Soitishardtodoitwell。4.IhopetobeamusicianinthefuturejustlikeLanglang.Now,Imgoingtoenterahighschool,soIdonthaveenoughtimetopracticethepiano.ButwhereverIgo,Iwontgiveupmyhobby.IgoonplayingthepianoeverydaythoughIambusierthanbefore.Finally,IhopeIcancontinuemyhobbyinmyhighschoolandImsuremydreamwillcometruesomeday.5Myparentslikepianotoo.Buttheycannotplay.Sotheywantmetoplaythepianoverywell.Myfathersaidthepianowasagreatmusicalinstrument.Hewantsmetobeamusicianinthefuture.Mymotherthinksaprettygirlshouldplayakindofinstruments,andshefindsthatIhavemadeagreatprogressinplayingthepiano.ShehopesthatIcanbeatopstudentinmyclass.Inaword,Iwilltrymybesttomakemydreamcometrue.hurt;Icanhardlypickupapen.Whenmyfriendsgoouttoplaywiththeirparents,Ialwaysstayathometostrikethekeysalone.Thepianocostmelotsofmoney,andIpaidmuchmoreforlearningit.Ontheweekends,Iusuallytakepartinsomecompetitiontogetthecertificates.Soitishardtodoitwell。4.IhopetobeamusicianinthefuturejustlikeLanglang.Now,Imgoingtoenterahighschool,soIdonthaveenoughtimetopracticethepiano.ButwhereverIgo,Iwontgiveupmyhobby.IgoonplayingthepianoeverydaythoughIambusierthanbefore.Finally,IhopeIcancontinuemyhobbyinmyhighschoolandImsuremydreamwillcometruesomeday.5Myparentslikepianotoo.Buttheycannotplay.Sotheywantmetoplaythepianoverywell.Myfathersaidthepianowasagreatmusicalinstrument.Hewantsmetobeamusicianinthefuture.Mymotherthinksaprettygirlshouldplayakindofinstruments,andshefindsthatIhavemadeagreatprogressinplayingthepiano.ShehopesthatIcanbeatopstudentinmyclass.Inaword,Iwilltrymybesttomakemydreamcometrue. 2.WhendidIbegintolearnswimming?IbegantolearnswimmingwhenIwas5yearsold.LastyearIgotaswimmingteacheratschool.Heishandsomeandfriendly.Alsoheisgoodatswimmingandsometimeshetoldussomeswimmingskillsinahumorousway.Hissoundisveryspecialandalwayshoarse（嘶哑的）.3.HowhaveIlearntswimming?Ihavelearntswimmingfor1yearbutIcanswimverywell.WhenIbegantolearnswimmingIcouldntswimverywell.ForexamplethefirsttimeIwentintothewaterIswallowed(吞)somewaterandIwasscared.AlsothefirsttimeIwentintowaterIfelldownandIhurtmyknee.WhatsmorewhenIbegantolearnbreaststroke（蛙泳）Ifelldowntothewater.Ishoutedloudlybutnobodyheardme.AtthattimeIwasveryscared.Eventhough(尽管)IhavemetalotofdifficultyIstillhavelearnthowtoswimming.BythewayIamthefastestonetoswim.云舟王老师点评：这段中，现在完成时体现得非常好，由于现在完成时是5级的一个非常重要的语法点，所以考生在表达的时候一定把这2.WhendidIbegintolearnswimming?IbegantolearnswimmingwhenIwas5yearsold.LastyearIgotaswimmingteacheratschool.Heishandsomeandfriendly.Alsoheisgoodatswimmingandsometimeshetoldussomeswimmingskillsinahumorousway.Hissoundisveryspecialandalwayshoarse（嘶哑的）.3.HowhaveIlearntswimming?Ihavelearntswimmingfor1yearbutIcanswimverywell.WhenIbegantolearnswimmingIcouldntswimverywell.ForexamplethefirsttimeIwentintothewaterIswallowed(吞)somewaterandIwasscared.AlsothefirsttimeIwentintowaterIfelldownandIhurtmyknee.WhatsmorewhenIbegantolearnbreaststrok Ifelldowntothewater.Ishoutedloudlybutnobodyheardme.AtthattimeIwasveryscared.EventhougIhavemetalotofdifficultyIstillhavelearnthowtoswimming.BythewayIamthefastestonetoswim.云舟王老师点评：这段中，现在完成时体现得非常好，由于现在完成时是5级的一个非常重要的语法点，所以考生在表达的时候一定把这6.WillIcontinue(继续)toswiminthefuture?Yes,Iwillcontinuetoswiminthefuturebecauseswimmingisusefulsport.（用will表达将来的用法也是5级的语法点）云舟王老师总体点评：总体来看，小作者三一五级语法点和语言功能的使用还是很到位的，文章中不乏诙谐幽默，这一点值得其他考生学习。同时此文条理清晰，通俗易懂，是一篇不错的文章。
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