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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,高三英语写作复习讲评课,Assessment&Practice of Writing,By Money from Longwan High School,一个周六的下午，“绿眼睛”环保组织成员李华和王平在河边开展环保行动时发现了一只小鸟受伤了，在地上无法飞行，于是他们展开了抢救行动。你就此事写一篇新闻报道。要点如下：,1,、时间、地点、情景,2,、描述处理方法，包括救助，治疗,3,、简要谈谈你的感想。,注意：字数,100120,；参考词汇：绿眼睛环保组织：,Green Eyes.,ASSESSMENT,structure,The article is divided into,parts,.,content,All the,details,are included,Everything is,to the point,(,切题,).,Language,Try to use some,linking/transitional words(,过渡词,),.,Few,mistakes,.,Advanced vocabulary,（高级词汇）,.,Some good,sentence patterns,（句式）,.,Handwriting,Saving The Wounded Bird,One Saturday afternoon,Li Hua and Wang Ping,members from Green Eyes,are carrying out an environmental protection activity along the riverside when they found a bird lying on the ground._,they picked it up and found it wounded.In no time,they took out a piece of cloth,and then dressed the wounded part.,Having_(perform)a series of first aid,they held the bird in their hands._,it came to life and started moving.What appearanced on their faces was the happiness of saving a life.,_,Obviously _their kindness _ saved the wounded bird,and it,increases our awareness of environmental protection because the earth is home to all the animals as well as human beings.,没有犹豫,Without hesitation,it is,that,which,were,I think,令他们高兴的是,To their delight,很值得去做这事情,its worthwile for them to do such a thing.,performed,Having dug,a square pit first,the foreigners,put a sapling into it.,Having done/doing something.,sb.,种了几棵树，我感到非常的高兴。,_several trees,I feel delighted,.,一,到那里，大家,就,开始种树了。,_,there,everybody began planting trees.,看他们甜蜜的微笑，我能想象他们是多么的开心,。,_,_,I can imagine how delighted they are.,Practice,Having planted,Arriving,Seeing the sweet smiles,_surprises me most is that so many enthusiastic people participate in it.,What,我想说的是我们必须要保护环境。,_ is that we must protect the environment.,What I want to say,_ that there are many foreigners planting trees.,To my surprise,It surprises me a lot that,.hold the sapling carefully and.put the earth back to the pit.,It is,his mother,who,helps the little boy plant a tree.,这个好的传统活动应该传承下去。,_,the good traditonal activity _should be passed down from generation to generation.,It is/wasthat/who,It is that,在植树节这天种树是很有意义的。,_to plant trees on Tree-planting Day.,It is+adj.(for sb)to do.,It is _ for the boy to plant trees with his mother.,It is meaningful,unforgettable,3,月,12,日早上在温州会昌河畔举行保护温瑞塘河为主题的植树节活动。你就此事写一篇新闻报道。要点如下；,1.,时间、地点、情景；,2.,描述图片内容，包括师,(,外教,),生、母子种树等,3.,简要谈谈你的感想（至少,2,点）。,注意：字数,100,120,参考词汇：植树节,Tree-planting Day,树苗,sapling,3,月,12,日早上在温州会昌河畔举行保护温瑞塘河为主题的植树节活动。你就此事写一篇,新闻报道,。要点如下；,1.,时间、地点、情景；,On the morning of March 12th.,Near the Huichang Riverside.,_ an activity to protect the Wenrui River.,Its theme is to protect the Wenrui River.,There was an activity held near the Huichang Riverside with the purpose of protecting the Wenrui River on the morning of March 12th.A good many people were planting trees there.,In order to protect the WenRui River,an activity whose purpose was to plant trees was carried out by plenty of students as well as some foreign teachers along the Huichang River on Tree-planting Day.,There was,3,月,12,日早上在温州会昌河畔举行保护温瑞塘河为主题的植树节活动。你就此事写一篇新闻报道。要点如下；,1.,时间、地点、情景；,2.,描述图片内容，包括师,(,外教,),生、母子种树等,3.,简要谈谈你的感想（至少,2,点）。,注意：字数,80,左右,参考词汇：植树节,Tree-planting Day,树苗,sapling,Tips:try to use the sentence patterns/,linking words/advanced vocabulary.,In order to protect the WenRui River,an activity whose purpose was to plant trees was carried out by plenty of students as well as some foreign teachers along the Huichang River on Tree-planting Day.,What most surprised me was that there were foreign teachers and students planting trees together.Some were digging holes,while others were putting saplings into the holes.Having planted some trees,they smiled.Besides,a hard-working mother with her son planted trees happily,which left me a deep impression.,As we know,it is the environment that is getting worse.Therefore,its high time that we should take actions to save it and pass on the tradition.And only by putting it into practice can the earth grow more beautiful.,(117words),In order to protect the WenRui River,an activity whose purpose was to plant trees was carried out by plenty of students as well as some foreign teachers along the Huichang River on Tree-planting Day.,What most surprised me was that there were foreign teachers and students planting trees together.Some were digging holes,while others were putting the trees into the holes,and the rest watering.Besides,a hard-working mother with her son planted trees happily,which set us a good example.,As we know,the environment is getting worse and worse.Therefore,its high time that we should be aware of the damage th