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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,活动类作文,思路与表达,郝原悦,1,语言,词汇,语法,more and more,I think/believe,There are,Many people,We have to,important,good,bad,三大从句:,that/which,引导的定从,because,等引导的状从,I think,等引导的宾从,2,more and more,I think/believe,There are,Many people,We should,important,very,a growing/increasing number of,Im convinced that,There lives/stands/exists/lays,A large proportion of population/Many folks,We are supposed/expected to,essential,necessity,significant,rather,quite,语言,词汇,语法,3,三大从句:,that/which,引导的定从,because,等引导的状从,I think,等引导的宾从,定从:,+which,prep.+which,状从:,given that,considering,on condition that,宾从:,其他名词性从句,My firm conviction is that,My belief that originates from,语言,词汇,语法,4,常见替换词汇,5,大亮点句型,从句,非谓语,强调句,倒装句,虚拟语气,语言,词汇,语法,5,作文高分,自查点,卷面,内容(逻辑),10,句话作文,语言(词汇,+,语法),6,学校英语报正在酝酿改版,拟从现有的三个栏目(健康、娱乐、文化)中去除一个,并从三个备选项目(时尚、职业规划、读者反馈)中挑选一个纳入该报。假设你是该校学生程飞,给校报编辑写一封电子邮件,表达你的观点。邮件须包括以下内容:,你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由;,你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由。,2014,上海高考作文,7,卷面,8,2014,年,全国新课标,咨询(暑假去英国学校),信,北京,提建议解决自行车存放问题,建议,山东,我喜欢的英语谚语征文,征文,浙江,图书馆购书,推荐科普和文学,信,辽宁,创意作品展评活动书面通知,通知,江西,在高中学什么沙龙发言稿,发言稿,天津,给交换生写邮件,信(邮件),陕西,美国中学校长代表团出席英语周,欢迎词,四川,回复美国笔友询问高考的情况,信,广东,老妇人简朴生活捐大学巨款,议论文,上海,校报改革提意见,信(邮件),内容,题目汇总,9,内容,文章框架,10,句话作文,2,句开头,6,句重点,2,句结尾,应用文的特殊格式要求,10,文章框架,10,句话作文,应用文的特殊格式要求,应用文(邮件、信、发言稿、通知、欢迎词),信件,六部分:信头,(Heading),、信内地址,(Inside Address),、称呼,(Salutation),、正文,(Body of Letter),、结束语,(Complimentary Close),、署名,(Signature),称呼、正文、结束语、署名,内容,11,文章框架,10,句话作文,应用文的特殊格式要求,称呼,Dear xxx,Dear Sir/Madam,Editor,Students,All,John,President Johnson,Distinguished guests,ladies and gentlemen,good afternoon.,Distinguished President Johnson,ladies and gentlemen,good afternoon.,内容,12,文章框架,10,句话作文,应用文的特殊格式要求,署名,Yours sincerely,Yours truly,Yours faithfully,/Faithfully yours,Most sincerely,Yours respectfully,(对上级和长者),Li Ming,内容,13,文章框架,10,句话作文,2,句开头、,6,句重点、,2,句结尾,开头,1,句背景,+1,句点题,Im writing to raise my advice concerning the alteration,of the school newspaper column arrangement+,定语从句,My suggestion is that entertainment should be deleted and,career planning added.,(表语从句),内容,14,定语从句,怎么用?,形容词、“的”,我遇到了一位美女。,I met a girl who is very beautiful.,I met a girl who is rather attractive.,I met a girl who has astonishingly attractive appearance.,I met a girl whose astonishingly attractive appearance resembles/can be compared with that of Helen of Troy.,从句,15,定语从句,怎么用高大上?,尽量不用,that,和,which,I met a girl who is very beautiful.,I met a girl,who is rather attractive.,I met a girl,who has astonishingly attractive appearance.,I met a girl,whose/of whom astonishingly attractive appearance resembles/can be compared with that of Helen of Troy.,从句,16,定语从句,怎么用高大上?,尽量不用,that,和,which,I met a girl who is very beautiful.,I met a girl,who is rather attractive.,I met a girl,who has astonishingly attractive appearance.,I met a girl,whose/of whom astonishingly attractive appearance resembles/can be compared with that of Helen of Troy.,No reason can be found why/for which I came across the attractive girl.,1.,非限定性定从,2.,介词,+,关代,3.,换连接词,从句,17,状语从句,怎么用高大上?,换连接词,原因:,since,as,for,seeing that,considering that,now that,(different)in that,结果:,so that,such that,条件:,on condition that,provided(that),supposing(that),目的:,in order that,so that,for fear that,in case,lest,从句,18,名词性从句,怎么用高大上?,别用宾语从句,:,I think/believe that,表语从句:,My thought/belief/conviction is that,同位语从句:,My conviction that is deeply rooted in,主,+,表语从句:,What I hold as my firm belief is that,从句,19,文章框架,10,句话作文,2,句开头、,6,句重点、,2,句结尾,开头,1,句背景,+1,句点题,Im writing to raise my advice concerning the alteration,of the school newspaper column arrangement,some of which,I hope,can be of great help.,My suggestion,is that,entertainment should be deleted and,career planning,added,.,(表语从句),内容,20,文章框架,10,句话作文,2,句开头、,6,句重点、,2,句结尾,重点,关键在分类!,自然分类:作文要点,(,1.,欢迎,2.,本地生活信息,3.,本班情况,4.,做什么增进友谊),脑补分类:学习、做人、做事,内容,21,文章框架,10,句话作文,2,句开头、,6,句重点、,2,句结尾,学习方面,学习成绩,academic performance,学习成就,academic attainment,打下基础,lay the foundation for/form the basis of,广泛阅读,read extensively,广泛涉及,comprehensive coverage of sth.,课外活动,extra-curricular activities,表达,22,文章框架,10,句话作文,2,句开头、,6,句重点、,2,句结尾,做人方面,积极的人生态度,a positive outlook on life,行为准则,standard of upright conduct,自制能力,self-discipline,提高,意识,raise the awareness/consciousness of sth.,表达,23,文章框架,10,句话作文,2,句开头、,6,句重点、,2,句结尾,做事方面,尽力做某事,apply oneself to doing/go to great lengths to do/endeavor to do,尽职尽责,fulfill sbs responsibilities/obligations,激发兴趣,kindle sbs interest in sth./ignite sbs enthusiasm for sth.,批判性思维,critical thinking,培养,能力,foster/cultivate/develop/build sbs abilities/capacities of sth.,更有能力,be better equipped/prepared to do sth.,表达,24,文章框架,10,句话作文,2,句开头、,6,句重点、,2,句结尾,重点,Personally speaking,I think,there is no point spending,much space on the Entertainment section,since,when compared with health and culture,entertainment,fades into less significance,.,There is no,denying that,entertainment can help us relax ourselves,but it,can be a major distraction,as well,.,内容,25,文章框架,10,句话作文,2,句开头、,6,句重点、,2,句结尾,重点,增,As for the column to be added,I will choose the career plann
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