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,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,自然灾害类作文讲解,写作内容,2011,年初，我国南方大部分地区遭受冻雨,（,freezing rain),特别是贵州，湖南和四川，灾情,十分严重。公路，铁路，机场都被迫关闭，电网,瘫痪，人们饮水困难尤其是部分山区的人们生活,异常困难。在各级政府的领导下，人名群众和,解放军战士英勇抗击冻灾。作为一名中学生，,你有何感想。,要点分析,2011,年初，我国南方大部分地区遭受冻雨,（,freezing rain),特别是贵州，湖南和四川，灾情,十分严重。公路，铁路，机场都被迫关闭，电网,瘫痪，人们饮水困难尤其是部分山区的人们生活,异常困难。在各级政府的领导下，人名群众和,解放军战士英勇抗击冻灾。,作为一名中学生，,你有何感想。,1.,2.,3.,4.,时态定位,？,一般过去时,Early in 2011，,At the beginning/start of 2011,拓展：,Early in the year of 2011,英语中表达时间按照月，日，年的顺序,或者日，月，年,hit,strike,遭受,(,自然灾害）,suffer,experience,had ,witness,see,。,1:,2011,年初,我国南方大部分地区,遭受,冻雨,occur,happen,归纳：,A freezing rain hit/struck most areas in southern China.,A freezing rain occurred/happened,in most areas in the south of China,Most areas in southern China had/suffered/experienced/witnessed/,saw a freezing rain.,特别是贵州，湖南和四川，灾情十分严重,especially,后面接单词或短语以及状语从句,especially in GuiZhou，HuNan and SiChuan,the disaster was extremely serious,Early in 2011,A,powerful,freezing rain hit most areas in southern China,especially in GuiZhou，HuNan and SiChuan,where the disaster was extremely serious.,where,2.,公路，铁路，机场都被迫,关闭,，电网,瘫痪，,人们饮水困难尤其让部分山区的人们生活异常困难,.,Roads,railways and airports were all forced to be closed.,The electric system paralyzed/was also paralyzed.,Drinking water became a problem faced by people who lived in the mountains in particular.,Roads,railways and airports were all forced to be closed.,the electric system paralyzed.,even,drinking water became a problem faced by people who lived in the mountains in particular.,Besides,Whats worse,表示造成后果和影响的词语,Cause,；,result in,bring about,affect,damage,ruin,；,make，leave,2.It,made,the roads,railways and airports closed,and,caused,the paralysis of electric system.People even couldnt have access to drinking water,用现在分词做结果状语表后果,3.This disaster struck these places,causing,the roads railways and airports closure,leaving,the electric system in paralysis and,affecting,peoples water supply.,under,the leadership of the governments at all levels,people and soldiers,fought,against it bravely.,3.,在各级政府的领导下,，人名群众和,解放军战士,英勇抗击,冻灾。,Fortunately,Life in the disaster-hit areas returned to normal quickly.,As a student,I always believe that as long as we work together,we can overcome any difficulty,.,4.,作为一名中学生，你有何感想。,Early in 2011,A,powerful,freezing rain hit most areas in southern China,especially in GuiZhou，HuNan and SiChuan,where the disaster was extremely serious.,Roads,railways and airports were all forced to be closed.,Besides,the electric system paralyzed.,Whats worse,even drinking water became a problem faced by people who lived in the mountains in particular.,全文再现,Fortunately,under the leadership of the governments at all levels,people and soldiers fought against it bravely,.,Life in the disaster-hit areas returned to normal,quickly.,As a student,I always believe that as long as we work together,we can overcome any difficulty.,词数：,102,总结提升,把下面的句子翻译成英语,1.,汶川地震发生在,2008,年,5,月,12,日。,2.,许多房屋倒塌，交通中断，成千上万的人无家可归。,3.,公路上发生了一起严重的事故，至少造成,6,人死亡。,4.,幸亏消防人员及时赶到，扑灭了大火。,5.,当地政府立刻派出救援人员前往灾区。,6.,他们立刻采取了紧急的措施来应对这次大地震。,实战演练,Good-bye,1.,新闻,特写则是用形象的事实说话。它常常抓住事物有特征的一面进行描述，比消息更细腻、更生动、更形象,。,2.,由于,新闻特写的画面感特别强，因此常给读者以身临其境的感受。,3.“,花香蝶自来，题好一半文,”,，一篇文章有一个好的标题，就像一个人有一双明亮有神的眼睛一样，留给别人的是将是十分美好而深刻的印象，同时也是文学修养，语言功底，思想魅力的最直接的流露，从考试的角度来说，更是作文质量高底的一杆标尺,。,4.,对于,话题作文的拟题我们一定要多一些有针对性的训练，掌握一定的技巧，达到需要应用时信手拈来，出语不俗的效果，感动自己，征服读者,。,5.,这些,根据材料提供的话题，进一步挖深、提炼出来的题目，源源源于材料而高于材料，加进去个体的感悟与理解，充满了理性的光辉，于平凡中见奇倔，也是很多喜欢定议论文的同学拟题一种好方法，很有思想深度,。,6.,路,在脚下，更在心中，,“,前方转弯,”,的路牌不是要你停下，而是提醒你该转弯了，心随路转，心路常宽。让思维转弯是人生的智慧，因为挫折往往是转折，危机同时也是转机。,7.,自主性,是天才的基本特征。正如居里夫人所说：“我们每个人都有能力干好一件事。”古今中外，多少仁人志士以自主为经，以勤奋为纬，编织成功,。,8.,生存,于宇宙间，同顶烈日炎炎，共沐明月清辉，我不比别人多，也不比别人少。只要勇于展示自己的个性与风采，我就没必要仰视任何人。,
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