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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,清远市清城区清城中学 何笑霞,话题写作,About me,Qingcheng Junior High School,reading,shopping,Wechat,Discussion: Find out what you can do on WeChat according to pictures and what you know.,讨论：根据图片找出在微信我们可以做什么，填词。,Lets discuss,share something on moment,分享到,朋友圈,send and get lucky money,What can we do on Wechat?,Wechat,?,Brainstorm,?,?,?,?,?,?,?,What can we do on Wechat?,Wechat,_,a ticket,Brainstorm,_,on moment,_,with friends,_,shopping,_,a taxi,_,games,_,photos,_,lucky money,send and get,share something,talk,play,send,do some,call for,book,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,_,news,read,9,Wechat,_,a ticket,_,on moment,_,with friends,_,shopping,_,a taxi,_,games,_,photos,_,lucky money,send and get,share something,talk,play,send,do some,call for,book,Words and Phrases,_,news,read,Lets read,收发红包,发送,照片,买东西,与朋友,谈话,玩游戏,打车,发朋,友圈,订机票,根据箭头指示，说出相应短语,Lets play,play games,book a ticket,do some shopping,call for a taxi,talk with friends,send photos,share something,on moment,send and get,lucky money,What can people use Wechat for?,When people,want to,they can use Wechat for,_,.,book,ing,a ticket,see a film,Lets practice,book a film,ticket,see a film,When,we,we use Wechat for,_,_.,playing games,feel bored,What can we use Wechat for?,When I _, I will,use Wechat to _.,Sentence imitation:,句子仿写,Write down two sentences on your paper,Tips:,send pictures, send videos, talk with friends, look for people around you, learn English, read news, play games, tell people where you are, share what I do with my friends, know more about each other,But there are something,bad happening.,be bad for study,not care for,unhealthy,dangerous,When cant people use Wechat?,People cant use Wechat,while they,are,_,_,because _.,its dangerous,walking in the street,having classes,its bad for their study,When cant people use Wechat?,-When cant people use Wechat?,-,While they are,_,-Why is that?,-,Because,_.,its not polite,People mustnt _while they are _ because _.,having family dinners,its not polite,use Wechat,having family dinners,We mustnt _,while,we are _,because,_.,Complete the sentences.,Tip 1:,1,.,do homework,2. walk ,3. have dinner,4.,go,across the road,5. stand on the bus,Tip 2:,1,.,dangerous,2. not good,3. bad,not,safe,not polite,Dear boys and girls,How are you? I am Lucy. I know Wechat is very popular now. But I know little about it. So I really want to know what I can use it for and when I cant use it. I need help. Who can help me? I hope to get your help as soon as possible.,Lucy,What does Lucy want to know?,Lets find,假如你是,Jack,，请你给,Lucy,写一封回信，说说你对微信的看法，告诉她用微信可以做什么（至少两点），什么时候不可以用微信（至少两点），,80,字左右。,Dear Lucy,Dont worry about it. I think I can help you.,_,_,_,_.,I really hope these can help you,know more about Wechat.,Jack,Lets write,要求,:1.Your ideas on Wechat.,2.What can she use Wechat for?(2,点,),3.When cant she use Wechat? (2,点,),4. Use the linking words.,Beginning,Body,Ending,Strategy,Use,outline,to improve our writing,summary,A,reply,Your opinion,In a word, All in all,What can she use Wechat for?,When cant she use Wechat?,I think; In my opinion,.,first/first of all, second, third,firstly, secondly, finally,first of all ,Whats more,In my opinion, Wechat is very useful and interesting.,First, when I feel bored, I will play games on,it.,Second, when I want to go to a place by,plane, I will book a ticket on it.,But,we cant,use Wechat while we are driving a car because,its dangerous,.,Whats more,we cant use,it while we are sleeping in bed because its,bad for our eyes,.,In a word, Wechat is always changing our life.,Use linking words (,连接词,) to put the sentences,together. (,first, second, but, whats more,),Sample,Have a try by yourselves!,自己试一试！,10 minutes,Check your writing again,：,内容,： 要点是否齐全，题材有无适当,发挥,准确性,：语法（时态语态、三单）、词汇、,大小写、,标点符号,。,流畅性,：结构是否完整，有无连接词增加,流畅性。,中考书面表达评分标准,要素,内容,（,6,分）,体现要点,题材有所发挥,准确性,（,6,分）,语法,词汇,大小写、拼写、标点符号等,流畅性,（,3,分）,结构、连接词等,书写（,1,分）,Enjoy and evaluation,看法,结尾,要点,1,2,个,要点,2,2,个,连接,词,时态,人称,拼写,语法,错误,字数,整洁,2,分,1,分,4,分,4,分,1,1,1,1,Words and phrases:,Summary,send and get lucky money, talk with friends,share something on moment, send photos,book a ticket, call for a taxi, book a ticket,2. Sentence patterns:,When I,want to see a film,I will,use Wechat tobook a ticket on Wechat.,We mustnt,use Wechat,while we,are,driving cars,because,its dangerous.,3. How to write a good composition,step1:,read,carefully,（审题）,step2:,draw an,outline,（列提纲）,step3:,write and use linking,words,（连接词）,step4:,write correct and beautiful,sentences,（润色）,step5:,Check your writing,again,（检查）,Tips:,1. linking words: First, second, but, whats more,2.,W,riting,evaluation,A.,内容,B.,连接词,C.,语法,1.,Correct you,r writing.,2. Share your writing on moment.,Homework,Thanks for listening!,We love, we share, we chat!,
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