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本次作文主题是“我们眼中,写法指导,第一步:审题,写自己观察的一种事物或一处场景,写出自己在观察中的发现。,第二步:立意,养成勤于观察、善于思考的好习惯。,第三步:选材,可以写校内景物、家庭生活、动物的生活习惯、植物的生长特点等。,写法指导第一步:审题写自己观察的一种事物或一处场景,写出,第四步:思路,(,以范文为例,),含羞草,开头:发现问题(含羞草“不害羞”),中间:解决问题(思考、查阅资料),结尾:得到启发(要多观察、多学习),第五步,:,方法,运用说明、议论、叙述等表达方式,把内容写具体、写清楚。,第四步:思路(以范文为例)含羞草开头:发现问题(含羞草“不害,含羞草,在我上学必经的小路旁,长着一株矮小的含羞草,它的茎纤细,叶子是羽毛状的。只要一碰它,它的叶子就会合拢,头就会垂下,真有意思!,上学、放学经过那里时,大家都争,小作者观察得很细致。,含羞草 在我上学必经的小路旁,长着一株矮小的含羞草,它,着去“羞”它。,今天早晨,我又拨弄了它几下。奇怪,含羞草的叶子怎么没有合拢?大概是天气冷了吧。但是我立刻把这个想法否定了。记得几天前我在其他地方碰过一株含羞草,它的叶子很快就合拢了。这到底是怎么回事呢?我百思不得其解。,“羞”这个词用得好。,“,大家都争着去羞它”,也为下文“不羞”埋下了伏笔。,这一思考过程表现出小作者是个爱动脑筋的孩子。,着去“羞”它。“羞”这个词用得好。“大家都争着去羞它,放学回家,我找来一本关于植物的书查看,这才明白了其中的奥秘。原来含羞草的小叶柄、大叶柄与茎轴相连的地方叫叶枕,叶枕内部细胞含有水分,当我们碰叶片时,叶枕上部细胞内的水分便流到别的细胞空隙去,叶枕上部就褶皱起来,于是,含羞草就出现了“害羞”的现象。但是,如果我们连续碰它,叶枕内的细胞液都流完了,来不及补充,就出现了“不羞”的情况。,放学回家,我找来一本关于植物的书查看,这才明白了其中的奥秘。,没想到,一株不起眼的含羞草也蕴藏着如此有趣的科学知识。看来,我们平时还得多注意观察和学习啊!,结尾小作者的感叹起到了画龙点睛的作用。,没想到,一株不起眼的含羞草也蕴藏着如此有趣的科学知识,总评,:小作者对含羞草进行了仔细的观察,更难能可贵的是含羞草“不羞”的现象引起了小作者的思考,小作者还为此查找了资料。最后,小作者发出了“平时还得多注意观察和学习”的感慨,认识很深刻。,总评:小作者对含羞草进行了仔细的观察,更难能可贵的是含羞草“,
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