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英语写作训练英语写作训练英语写作训练1英语看图类作文：英语看图类作文：1.1.记叙文记叙文2.2.议论文议论文3.3.说明文（含图表）说明文（含图表）英语看图类作文：2遇到不会写的单词怎么办？2 2种方法：（种方法：（1 1）同义替换）同义替换 遇到不会写的单词怎么办？2种方法：（1）同义替换3遇到不会写的单词怎么办？(1）这人很变态：BT?bedifferentfromnormalpeoplestrange/odd/peculiar（2）难民difficultpeople？thepeoplewhosufferedfromadisasterXX遇到不会写的单词怎么办？(1）这人很变态：XX4遇到不会写的单词怎么办？（3）老百姓oldhundredsexthegeneralpublicordinarypeoplepeoplefromallwalksoflife四喜丸子fourhappymeatballsmeatballsXX遇到不会写的单词怎么办？（3）老百姓XX5遇到不会写的单词怎么办？（2 2）上义词或下义词代替）上义词或下义词代替上义词是对事物的概括性、抽象性说明上义词是对事物的概括性、抽象性说明下义词是事物的具体表现形式。下义词是事物的具体表现形式。遇到不会写的单词怎么办？（2）上义词或下义词代替6遇到不会写的单词怎么办？（3）铁锹、锄头、镐：thetoolswhichareusedtoplanttrees拐杖：Thetoolwhichisusedtohelpthedisabledtostand/walk二氧化碳：carbondioxide一氧化碳：carbonoxidepoisonousgasesspade,hoe,pickstick遇到不会写的单词怎么办？（3）铁锹、锄头、镐：spade,7没有不会写的，只有不会想的！没有不会写的，只有不会想的！残疾人：thepeoplewhocannotmove/speak/thinknormally大众媒体大众媒体大众媒体的具体表现形式是大众媒体的具体表现形式是TVTV，radio,radio,newspaper,internetnewspaper,internet thedisabledmassmedia没有不会写的，只有不会想的！残疾人：大众媒体大众媒体的具体8北京很迷人北京很迷人 。Beijing is so beautiful that many people come here.Beijing is so beautiful that many people come here every year.Beijing is so beautiful that thousands of people come here every year.Beijing is so beautiful that thousands of people come here every year from all around the world.Beijing is so beautiful that thousands of people,no matter young or old,men or women,come here every year from all around the world.北京很迷人。9高考英语看图作文五步曲高考英语看图作文五步曲一一“抓抓”为抓主题。为抓主题。二二“列列”为列要点。为列要点。三三“变变”为变要点为句子。为变要点为句子。四四“连连”为连句成篇。为连句成篇。五五“检检”为文章检查。为文章检查。高考英语看图作文五步曲10假定你是李华。你和几个朋友约定星期天在人民公园野餐。你们的英国朋友 Peter 也应邀参加。请根据下面的示意图，给他写封信件，告诉他进公园后如何找到你们。注意：词数 80-100。开头语已为你写好。(95)DearPeter,WeresogladthatyouarecomingtojoinusonSunday.Hereishowyoucanfindus.LiHua假定你是李华。你和几个朋友约定星期天在人民公11一“抓”为抓主题。Type:Person:Tense:What:When:Where:说明文（书信）第一人称一般现在时，一般将来时通过看示意图来野餐星期天人民公园一“抓”为抓主题。Type:说明文（书信）第一人称一般12thekeypointstobeincluded1.在人民公园野餐2.从公园正门进3.进门后朝前走4.到小河过桥5.向右拐后朝前走6.绕/爬过小山7.我们在（湖畔）小树林里1.haveapicnic,inPeoplesPark2.enterpark,bymaingate3.walkstraight4.crossstream5.turnright6.totheothersideofhill7.insmallwoods,bylake二“列”为列要点。在人民公园野餐haveapicnic,inPeopl13Expandthekeypointshaveapicnic,inPeoplesParknWewillhaveourpicnicinthePeoplesPark.nWearegoingtothePeoplesparkforapicnic.nWearegoingtothePeoplespark,wherewewillhaveapicnic.三“变”为变要点为句子。Wewillhaveourpicnicinthe14enterpark,bymaingateEntertheparkbythemaingate.Gothroughthemaingateofthepark.Entertheparkbythemainga15walkstraightWalkstraightontillyoucometoastream.Walkalongtheroaduntilyougettoabridgeoverthestream.Walkstraightontillyoucom16crossstreamCrossthestream.Gooverthebridge.Crossthestream.Goover17turnrightTurnright.Turnright.18totheothersideofhillWalkroundtotheothersideofthehill.Climbthehill.Walkroundtotheotherside19insmallwoods,bythelakeWellhaveourpicnicinthesmallwoodsbythelake.Wellhaveourpicnicinthe20确定提示要点的益处：4）便于使用恰当的连接词。1）不丢重要信息点。2）避免中文式英文。3）连词成句时能够注意到时态、语态等问题。确定提示要点的益处：4）便于使用恰当的连接词。1）不丢重要信21连句成篇连句成篇DearPeter,WeresogladyourecomingtojoinusonSunday.Hereishowyoucanfindus.WellhaveourpicnicinthePeoplesPark.Youknowwherethatis,dontyou?Afteryouentertheparkbythemaingate,walkstraightontillyoucometoastream.Crossthestreamandturnright.Afterwalkingforawhile,youwillcometoahill.连句成篇DearPeter,22Walkroundtotheothersideofthehill.Thereyouwillseealake.Wellhaveourpicnicinthesmallwoodsbythelake.Imsureyoullhavenotroublefindingus.Docome!Walkroundtotheothersideo23PossibleversionDearPeter,WeresogladyourecomingtojoinusonSunday.Hereishowyoucanfindus.WellhaveourpicnicinthePeoplesPark.Youknowwherethatis,dontyou?Afteryouentertheparkbythemaingate,walkstraightontillyoucometoastream.Crossthestreamandturnright.Afterwalkingforawhile,youwillcometoahill.PossibleversionDearPeter,24PossibleversionWalkroundtotheothersideofthehill.Thereyouwillseealake.Wellhaveourpicnicinthesmallwoodsbythelake.Imsureyoullhavenotroublefindingus.Docome!LiHuaPossibleversionWalkroundto25仔细观察下面一幅图画，根据图画的内容，写一篇词数仔细观察下面一幅图画，根据图画的内容，写一篇词数100100左右的英语短文。左右的英语短文。情景：假定你叫李红，家住香港。你和几个朋友约定星期六在中心公园情景：假定你叫李红，家住香港。你和几个朋友约定星期六在中心公园(Central Park)(Central Park)聚会。现请你写封信邀请聚会。现请你写封信邀请BrownBrown女士参加，并根据下图告诉她女士参加，并根据下图告诉她来中心公园的路线。来中心公园的路线。参考词汇：参考词汇：have a gathering party(have a gathering party(聚会聚会)这是一篇图画说明文，根据图画，指明路线，如何到达中心公园。注意观察这是一篇图画说明文，根据图画，指明路线，如何到达中心公园。注意观察图画，确定出发点、行走路线、目的地，灵活使用表达路线的表达语。图画，确定出发点、行走路线、目的地，灵活使用表达路线的表达语。Dear Mrs Brown,Dear Mrs Brown,We are so glad that youre coming to join us on Saturday.Here is We are so glad that youre coming to join us on Saturday.Here is how you can find us.how you can find us.仔细观察下面一幅图画，根据图画的内容，写一篇词数100左右的26Type:Person:Tense:What:When:Where:Type:27DearMrsBrown，WearesogladthatyourecomingtojoinusonSaturday.Hereishowyoucanfindus.WellhaveourgatheringpartyintheCentralPark.Maybeyouvebeenthere，haventyou？Gostraightonwhenyougetoutoftheschoolgateandcometothestreet.Thenturnrightatthesecondcrossingandyoullfindahospital.JustoppositeitisaNo.7busstop.Takeabusandgetoffatthefourthstop.CentralParkisjustinfrontofit.Wellhaveourgatheringpartyinaboatonthelake.Whatafunnything！Docomeontime.WellwaitforyouattheparkgateYours，LiHuaDearMrsBrown，282009年高考全国卷年高考全国卷II英语作文英语作文假定你是李华，你的美国朋友假定你是李华，你的美国朋友sarah sarah 打算暑期来北京旅游，来信打算暑期来北京旅游，来信询问改建后前门大街的情况。请你写封回信，简单介绍以下内容：询问改建后前门大街的情况。请你写封回信，简单介绍以下内容：1.1.简况：长简况：长800800余米、余米、600600多年历史、多年历史、300300余家商铺；余家商铺；2.2.位置：天安门广场南面；位置：天安门广场南面；3.3.交通：公共汽车交通：公共汽车1717、6969、5959等路，地铁等路，地铁2 2号线；号线；4.4.特色：步行街、当当车、茶馆、剧院等。特色：步行街、当当车、茶馆、剧院等。参考词汇：步行街参考词汇：步行街 pedestrian street pedestrian street当当车当当车 trolley car trolley car地铁地铁 subway subway注意：注意：1.1.词数词数100100左右；左右；2.2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；贯；3.3.开头语已为你写好，请将完整的回信书写在答题卡上。开头语已为你写好，请将完整的回信书写在答题卡上。Dear sarah.Dear sarah.Thank you for you letter asking about the rebuilt Thank you for you letter asking about the rebuilt Qianmen street.Here is something about it.Qianmen street.Here is something about it.2009年高考全国卷II英语作文假定你是李华，你的美国朋友29DearSarah,ThankyouforyourletteraskingabouttherebuiltQianmenStreet.Hereissomethingaboutit。QianmenStreetisafamousstreetofover600yearsold.Alongthis800-metrestreet,therearemorethan300shops.AsthestreetisinthecenterofBeijing,justtothesouthofTiananmenSquare,itsveryconvenienttogettherebybus.YoumaytakeBusesNo.17,69or59.subwayLine2hasastoptheretoo.QianmenStreetisapedestrianstreet,buttherearetrolleycarstotakeyounotonlytotheshops,butalsototheatersandteahouseswhereyoucanexperienceatrulyChinesewayoflife,Imsureyoulllikeit。DearSarah,Thankyouforyou30(06(06湖北湖北)受某英文报的委托，你最近对高中生的英语阅读兴趣做了受某英文报的委托，你最近对高中生的英语阅读兴趣做了一次调查。请根据以下信息，用英语为该报写一篇一次调查。请根据以下信息，用英语为该报写一篇100100左左右的短文。短文的标题及首句已为你写好。右的短文。短文的标题及首句已为你写好。调查内容：在新闻、故事、科普、学习方法四种英文文章调查内容：在新闻、故事、科普、学习方法四种英文文章中，学生最喜欢哪一种。中，学生最喜欢哪一种。调查范围：湖北省的调查范围：湖北省的1010所中学所中学调查对象：高中生调查对象：高中生调查人数：调查人数：10001000调查方式：访谈调查方式：访谈调查结果：（见下图）调查结果：（见下图）(06湖北)31【参考范文】Reading Interests of Senior Middle School StudentsRecentlyasurveyhasbeendonetofindoutthereadinginterestsofseniormiddleschoolstudents.Inthissurvey,onethousandseniormiddleschoolstudentsfromteninHubeiProvincewereinterviewed.TheywereaskedwhichtheylikedreadingmostamongthefourcategoriesofEnglisharticles:news,stories,popularsciencearticlesandarticlesaboutlearningmethods.Thesurveyshowsthatmorethanhalfofthestudentsliketoreadnewsmost.Twenty-sixpercentofthestudentssaythatEnglishstoriesaretheirfavorite.Onlysevenpercentofthestudentsaremostinterestedinreadingarticlesaboutlearningmethods.However,thenumberofstudentswhoenjoyreadingpopularsciencearticlesdoublesthatofthosewhopreferreadingarticlesaboutlearningmethods.【参考范文】32p经常不断地学习,你就什么都知道。你知道得越多,你就越有力量pStudyConstantly,AndYouWillKnowEverything.TheMoreYouKnow,TheMorePowerfulYouWillBe写在最后经常不断地学习,你就什么都知道。你知道得越多,你就越有力量写33Thank You在别人的演说中思考，在自己的故事里成长Thinking In Other PeopleS Speeches，Growing Up In Your Own Story讲师：XXXXXX XX年XX月XX日Thank You34