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图 表 示 作 文 可 分 为 “ 读 图 ” 作 文 和“ 读表 ” 作 文 。 所 谓 “ 读 图 ” 作 文 是 指 通 过提 供 的 画 面 （ 往 往 是 一 组 图 画 ） ， 用 文字 把 图 画 中 的 故 事 描 述 出 来 。 此 类 作 文在 全 国 高 考 中 屡 见 不 鲜 。 上 海 2002年 高考 作 文 题 虽 也 是 图 画 ， 但 只 有 一 幅 。 它完 全 不 同 于 全 国 高 考 中 出 现 的 “ 读 图 ”作 文 。 其 实 ， 它 更 像 是 一 篇 命 题 作 文 。“ 读 表 ” 作 文 是 指 通 过 表 中 提 供 的 数 字 ，得 出 一 个 结 论 或 形 成 一 种 看 法 。 图表作文 2000年全国高考 假设你是李华，在美国探亲。2000年2月8日清晨，你目击一起交通事故。警察局让你写一份材料，报告当时所见情况。请根据下列图画写出报告。1、目击者应该准确报告事实；2、词数100左右；3、结尾已为你写好 At 7：15 on the morning of Feb.8.2000，I was footing eastward along the Park Road. I was about to reach the T-crossing near the City Park when I noticed an old man coming out of the City Park and was trying to cross the street. Suddenly，a yellow car，which had come down the 3rd Street，turned sharply right at the corner. It was driving so fast that neither the driver nor the old man was able to react effectively. Regretfully，the woman driver did not stop to look after him but fled as quickly as possible. Badly injured as he was，the old man tried to take down the cars number. However，I managed it：which was AC864. About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital. 2002年 全 国 高 考 上 海 英 语 试 卷 Guided Writing Directions: Write an English composition in over 120 words based on the picture and the instructions given below.简 要 描 述 图 片 内 容 ， 结 合生 活 实 际 ， 就 图 片 的 主 题谈 谈 自 己 的 感 想 In the picture, we can see that the girls parents and her grand mother are helping the girl, which makes it impossible for the girl to ride bicycle on herself. What is more ridiculous, her mother even takes some medicine. In fact, this is not a picture just for fun. It tells us that parents shouldnt help their children too much. They should let their children be more independent. Many parents share the opinion that they must get every thing ready for their children so that their children could put more emphasis on their study. They all failed to consider that with help of this kind, children wont be able to live their own life without their parents in the future. Nowadays, It is often reported that a certain college student dont know how to wash her socks! How can she compete with others after graduation? Love and attention is needed in the growth of a child, but it should never be too much or youll spoil the child and he will accomplish nothing in his life. 考生作文评析 本 文 内 容 较 充 实 ， 详 略 得 当 。 能根 据 写 作 要 求 ， 简 要 描 述 了 图 片 内 容 ，并 能 结 合 生 活 中 的 实 例 ， 谈 出 自 己 的感 想 。 具 有 较 好 的 语 言 表 达 能 力 。 虽 然有 些 语 法 错 误 ， 但 全 文 流 畅 ， 结 构合 理 ， 句 型 较 多 样 ， 词 汇 较 丰 富 。 读表作文 （2002年上海春季高考）某城市今年每百人中手机用户增长（示意图）人 数1 10 20 50 根 据 所 给 图 表 ， 简 要 描 述 某 城市 今 年 每 百 人 手 机 （ mobile phone)用 户 增 长 情 况 ， 并 试 分 析 其 增 长 原因 。 From the chart we may see that the percentage of people owning mobile phones has risen sharply since 1995, when only 1 percent of people owned mobile phones. And in 2001 half of the population had mobile phones. The reasons for this phenomenon are as follows. First of all, peoples living standard has been greatly improved, and more and more people can afford such modern equipment as mobile phones. Secondly, mass production has brought down the prices, which contributes to the popularization of them. Last but not least, people have come to realize the importance of information in what is known as “information times”. Those who have access to the latest news are somewhat more competent in the society. I think in the 21st century, the trend of owning mobile phones will continue. With the development of modern science and technology, not only will mobile become smaller and cheaper, they will also have more functions. 描述图表常用句式：The table/ chart/ diagram/ graph shows (that)As (is) shown in theAs can be seen from theIt is apparent from the chart (that)The number of (cars) + V.+ Adv.+ number and timeThere was a (very) Adj. + N. + in the number of + time 表述上升、下降、平稳发展等的常用词：总计：add up to, total上升：rise, increase, climb, improve, reach a peak下降：fall, decrease, decline, go down, drop, slip back 平稳：remain stable回升：recover (recovery)波动：fluctuate上述动词常可用下辖这些副词修饰：slowly, gradually, slightly, sharply, dramatically, steadily, suddenly, rapidly例如：In Asia the number of “Satay World” restaurants increased rapidly from 12 in 1985 to 54 in 1995. 常用的名词：increase/ jump/ rise/ decrease/ drop/ fall/ fluctuation修饰上述名词常用的形容词：sudden/ rapid/ dramatic/ significant/ sharp/ steep/ steady/ gradual/ slow/ slight例如：There was a sudden rise in the number of “Satay World” restaurants between 1985 and 1995. 20世纪下半叶某城市人口增长率(示意图) 75%10%7%3%5%学生课外生活 （2006上海秋季高考） 下表提供了你所心仪的南、北两所大学的招生信息。通过比较作出选择，并结合个人情况说明理由。南方大学北方大学学费8000元/年5000元/年招生人数20人10人优惠政策无加20分 (A) I am a senior three student and will begin to receive my high education from this September. So I am considering which university I should apply for. Among the universities all over the country, the Southern University and the Northern University are my favorite ones, and both have respective advantages. The expense of the Southern University is 8,000 yuan per year, 3,000 yuan more expensive than that of the Northern University. However, the number of students that will be admitted of the Southern University is twice as that of the Northern University, accounting for 20. As to the Northern University, what attracts me most is the beneficial policy that if I apply for it, I will get an extra 20-point in my college entrance exam. Its really a remarkable factor. Having thought twice, difficult as making the final decision is, I choose the Northern University. First, its cheaper studying there, so that my parents burden of money will relatively light. Second, 20 point is of considerable amount, which will certainly help me in my exam. Although it will enroll only 10 students, I have the confidence to be admitted. 能根据题目要求，对表格中所提供南北两所高校的不同方面进行比较，从而作出决定，并结合个人的实际，比较具体地阐明了自己对各种条件的态度和想法。表达较流利，错误很少，展示出一定的遣词造句能力，是一篇写得较好的作文。 (B) Now there are two universities to choose. And the two universities are good. I like them, too. But as far as I am concerned, I will choose the North University. First compared the South University, the North University is cheaper than the South University. My family is not very rich. So I think the North University is better. Secondly, the North University is easier than the South University. The North University can give you 20. The better policy give me confidence. Considering my study is not good, so I will choose the North University. Although the students of North University is less than the students of the South University, I will do my best to get it. In a word, I think the North University suit me. So I will choose the North University.虽然也按题目要求对两所学校的三个方面进行了比较，但是不能用正确的语法结构和词汇准确表达出意思，且内容不够充实，读上去很单调。在语言表达上有较多的语法、拼写及标点符号错误。
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