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English Writing 英语书面表达训练,英语句子的种类,简单句 (The simple sentence),并列句 (The compound sentence),复合句 (The complex sentence),1. I turned on the TV. I watched it. 2. I bought my sister a present. She didnt like it.,并列句,并列句,I turned on the TV and watched it.,I bought my sister a present,but she didnt like it.,阅读下列各组句子,填入适当的 并列连词. 1.She tried hard,_she was unsuccessful. 2.Put on more clothes,_you may catch cold.,but,or,4.In the old days,he could_ read _write. 5.How great he is!He can_ read French _speak it well. 6.He knew nothing about the man,_ he didnt trust him.,neither,nor,both,and,so,请用合适的并列连词把每组句子合并为一个并列句。 1.He was tired. He went to bed. 2.The child hid behind his mothers skirt. He was afraid of the dog.,He was tired, so he went to bed.,The child hid behind his mothers skirt,for he was afraid of the dog.,3.He made a promise.He didnt keep it.,He made a promise, but he didnt keep it.,4.Mary is opening the door. John is greeting her guests.,Mary is opening the door,and John is greeting her guests.,请用括号中所给的词把每组句子连接为一个复合句。,I still remember the day .I first came to Beijing on that day.(when),I still remember the day when I first came to Beijing.,附图,1,2,3,4,书面表达六步法,审 题,1、体裁：,2、主要时态：,3、人称：,4、要点：,记叙文,一般过去时，叙述描绘一起交通事故,第一人称 I,时间、地点、人物、事件的前后经过。,图1,It was 7:15 on the morning of February 8, 2000. I was walking along Park Road,图2,A car hit the man while he was crossing the road.,图3,I noticed the driver was a young woman and the car was yellow.,图4,AC864,The car number was AC864.,精 彩 范 文 赏 析,It was 7:15 on the morning of February 8, 2000. I was walking along Park Road towards the east when an old man came out of the park on the other side of the street. Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and make a right turn into Park Road. The next moment the car hit the man while he was crossing the road. He fell with a cry.,The car didt stop and drove off at great speed heading west. I noticed the driver was a young woman and the plate number was AC864. About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital. Li Hua,词：, to ride a bike, to hit his bike and fall off,句：,A man was riding a bike along the street.,A car hit his bike and he fell off it.,文：,One day, I was on my way to school and a man was riding along the street.,One day, I was on my way to school and a man was riding along the street. Suddenly, a car ran fast towards the man. The car hit the bike heavily and the man fell to the ground wounded. The driver caused an accident. He was so frightened that he ran away quickly with his car.,Because I saw what had happened and remembered the number of the car as well, I reported this to the policeman at once. As a result, the driver was caught and he was punished for what he had done.,如何算是一篇好文章？ 覆盖了所有的要点 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑,要点全,词汇,句型 （高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）,连接词,根据右边六副图的提示，写一篇短文,1. Play with water 2. Splash water here and there/ flow around on the ground,1.Pass by /walk by / go past 2. Make him wet by splashing / splash him with water,Run away without / run away, leaving,1. Turn off 2. Be angry,1.write a notice 2. save water 3. put up,1. Come back / return / get back 2. Feel ashamed / be sorry,Thank you！,
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