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话题写作(七)观点建议第一篇教材考点梳理假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Jack来信说他暑假期间要来中国交流学习。他学了两年中文,但是仍然担心用中文交流时会遇到困难。请你用英语给Jack写封回信,提几点建议。要点(1)大胆自信;(2)放慢语速;(3)借助图画或肢体语言等表达方式。典例分析要求(1)词数:80100;(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;(3)信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;(4)开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。参考词汇 自信的 confident;肢体语言 body languageDear Jack,How is everything going?I am very glad to learn that you are coming to China this summer.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:主题是寻求与人沟通时的建议,主要有:(1)遇到的问题;(2)给出的建议。2.时态:一般现在时3.人称:第二人称【写作架构】【基础写作】根据所给提示写句子。1.基础句你应当学会如何与其他人交流。(communicate with)_升格句(用find it+adj.+to do sth.句式结构改写此句)_2.基础句现在全世界广泛使用肢体语言。(use)_升格句(改为被动语态)_You should learn how to communicate with others.I find it necessary for you to communicate with others.Now people use body language widely all over the world.Now body language is widely used all over the world.3.基础句对你来说,对自己有信心很重要。(important）_升格句(用 be of+n.+to do句式结构改写此句)_4.基础句我想要分享我的观点。我认为这些观点可能会有帮助。(share;help)_升格句(改为which引导的定语从句)_I want to share my ideas.I think the ideas might help.I want to share my ideas,which I think might help.Its important for you to be confident about yourself.Its of importance for you to be confident about yourself.5.基础句我们中国人很友好,因此你没有必要害怕犯错误。(so)_升格句(用含有sothat的句式结构改写此句)_We Chinese are very friendly,so you neednt to be afraid of making mistakes.We Chinese are so friendly that you neednt to be afraid of making mistakes.【连句成文】Dear Jack,How is everything going?I am very glad to learn that you are coming to China this summer.Its not necessary to worry about your Chinese.Id like to share my ideas which I think might help.First,be brave enough to speak Chinese when you communicate with others.Its of great importance to be confident about yourself.We Chinese are so friendly that you neednt be afraid of making any mistakes.Second,its better to speak slowly and clearly.In this way,you can make yourself understood more easily.Whats more,sometimes you can use drawings or pictures.And as you know,body language is also widely used in the world and it really works.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【导入主题】1.Today many students are interested in surfing the Internet.But it has advantages and disadvantages.2.Peoples opinions are always different when they talk about it.3.However,each coin has two sides.4.Id like to share my ideas which I think might help.5.I want to share some ideas that might be helpful to you.拓展积累【文章的过渡、发展】1.As far as Im concerned,students should use the Internet properly.2.Those who are in support of it think thathas a lot of advantages.3.From my point of view4.The reason whyis that5.On the one handon the other hand6.From what I said,I agree to the idea that【文章的结尾】1.All in all,the world needs love and we should be ready to help others.2.In my view,I dont think grades are important.3.In a word,we should do it in a right way.4.Only if we consider all the things above can we treat the problem correctly.A你们班在本周的班会上以“学生是否应该学习国学”为主题展开了讨论。有些同学持支持态度,也有些同学持反对态度。请你根据下面的提示,以“Should Students Be Encouraged to Learn Sinology?”为题写一篇短文,并给出你自己的观点。提示(1)支持者:培养语言学习能力;养成好的行为习惯;传承中华文化;(2)反对者:不考试,没必要;学习紧张,无暇顾及;不感兴趣,浪费时间;(3)你的观点。实战演练One possible version:Should Students Be Encouraged to Learn Sinology?At this weeks class meeting,we talked about whether students should be encouraged to learn sinology.Here are the results.Some students think learning sinology can develop their ability to learn languages.By reading some ancient stories,they can form good habits.Besides,its their duty to pass on the traditional Chinese culture.But other students think they wont have exams on sinology so that they dont have to learn it at all.Whats more,they have no time to learn it because of their busy study.It is a waste of time.In my opinion,we students should be encouraged to learn sinology.As Chinese,we should feel proud of our rich culture,and it should be carried forward.B最近,你们班就“是否应该帮助陌生人”展开了讨论,同学们就这一话题意见不一,你的看法如何?根据所提供的信息,以“Should We Help Strangers?”为题,写一篇短文。原因赞成帮助他人是美德;帮助他人就是帮助自己反对怕陷入麻烦;怕被误解你的观点(至少两点)要求(1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;(2)必须包括表格中所有的相关信息,并适当发挥;(3)词数:100左右(短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数);(4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。参考词汇美德virtueShould We Help Strangers?Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers.Different students have different opinions.One possible version:Should We Help Strangers?Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers.Different students have different opinions.Some think we should try to help strangers.Helping others is a virtue,and helping others is helping ourselves.We may come across some trouble and need others help some day.If everyone isnt willing to help us just because we are strangers to them,its hard to imagine what our world will be like.However,some are afraid that helping others can sometimes bring us trouble.Sometimes we are just misunderstood and even have to pay the cost of kindness.In my opinion,we should try our best to help others when they are in need of help,but we should also protect ourselves from getting into trouble.If everyone tries a little kindness,our world will be full of love.
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