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作 文 的 评 分 标 准,1：内容不完整，语言表述错误很多，不能完整地 表达思想。可得0-2分 2：内容完整，重点描述合理，但表述不充分，层次结构不合理，语言不够流畅，字迹不够工整，5-6处语法或拼写错误；字数不足。可得3-5分 3：内容完整，重点描述比较充分，层次结构比较清晰，语言比较流畅，字迹工整，有3-4处语法或拼写错误；字数符合要求。 可得6-8分 4：内容完整，重点描述清楚、合理，表达充分，层次结构清晰，字迹工整，可读性强，语言流畅，仅有1-2处语法或拼写错误；字数符合要求。 可得9-10分,看图作文可采用以下几个步骤： 1、理解图意，确立情景 2、注意所给的中英文提示 3、明确时态，理顺思路 4、连词成句，然后再连句成文 5、反复审核，修改错误,假设下面五幅图画描述的是你的一段亲身经历。请你根据画面内容，写一篇80字左右的日记。,英文日记的格式,英文日记通常由书端和正文两个部分组成。中、英文的日记格式大致一样。 英语日记的书端是写日记的日期、星期和天气的。左上角是日期（年、月、日）、星期。右上角写上当天的天气情况，如：Sunny，Fine，Rainy，Windy，Snowy等。 日记的正文是日记的主要部分，写在星期和日期的正下方，可以顶格写，也可以内缩3至5个字母的空间。,今天下午我去看电影.,go to a movie go to the cinema see a film,Its a fine day today.,this afternoon,I went to a movie happily this afternoon.,在路上,我看到一个手提箱从一辆自行车上掉了下来.,On the way, I found/saw a case fall down from/off a mans bike.,on the way fall down from / fall off see / find + 复合宾语,我捡起箱子,并向骑车人大声喊叫,但他却没听见,走远了.,I picked up the case and shouted to the man, but he didnt hear me and rode away.,pick up shout to ride away,于是,我拦了一辆出租车去追赶失主.,I stopped a taxi to to catch up with the man.,stop a taxi catch up with,我终于追上了失主,并把箱子还给他.,失主非常的感动,他拿出一些钱来感谢我,但被我拒绝了.,I caught up with him at last and gave the case back to him.,The man took out some money to thank me, but I refused.,give back / return refuse,May 3rd,Friday Fine This afternoon, I went to see a film. On the way, I saw a case fall off a mans bike. I picked up the case and shouted to the man to stop. But he didnt hear me and rode away. I stopped a taxi and got into it with the case. And we caught up with the man. I gave the case back to him. The man thanked me very much and wanted to give me some money. But I refused .,I picked up the case. I shouted at the man loudly.,After picking up the case, I shouted to the man loudly.,把两个或多个句子合并为简单句,1、把其中一句改为介词短语,I gave the case back to the man. The man took out some money to thank me.,Getting the case back from me, the man took out some money to thank me.,2、把其中一句改为分词短语,I went to see a film this afternoon. One the way to the cinema, I saw a case fall off a mans bike.,I was on my way to the cinema this afternoon when I happened to see a case fall off a mans bike.,把两个或多个句子合并成复合句,But he didnt hear me and rode away.,But he rode too fast to hear me.,I stopped a taxi as quickly as I could in order to catch up with the man.,适当选择固定句型,I wanted to catch up with him ,so I stopped a taxi quickly.,May 3rd,Friday Fine This afternoon, I went to see a film. On the way, I saw The man thanked me very much and wanted to give me some money. But I refused .,It was such an interesting movie that I couldnt wait to enjoy it.,Although I missed the movie, I was very happy to help others.,
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