英语写作技巧指导(好词好句的运用).ppt

好词好句的运用 高考英语写作技巧指导 爱学网资料 一 新课标对英语写作能力的要求 爱学网资料 爱学网资料 二 基础写作的评分标准 满分15分15 8 语言 5 内容 2 连贯 爱学网资料 三 读写任务的评分标准 满分25分25 5 概括大意 20 正文 爱学网资料 基础写作 1 信息点完整 2 不多不少五句话 3 语法 单词拼写无误 4 好词好句的运用 5 行文自然 流畅 读写任务 1 文章要点概括全面 2 正文内容 例子切题 3 观点 事例符合逻辑 4 语法 单词拼写无误 5 好词好句的运用 评分的关键点 爱学网资料 四 如何构成高分作文 以基础写作为例 书写好词好句的运用 包括固定表达及句型 如 定语从句 名词性从句 非谓语结构 with的结构等 爱学网资料 爱学网资料 两组2012年广州一模作文的对比分析 爱学网资料 定语从句 这篇关于兔子和狗的故事 告诉了我们坚持 persistence 的重要性 Thepassageisaboutarabbitandadog andittellsustheimportanceofpersistence Thepassage whichisaboutarabbitandadog tellsustheimportanceofpersistence 爱学网资料 名词性从句 污水随意排放到河里的现象已经得到了有效的控制 Pollutedwaterwasrandomlypouredintotheriver andthisphenomenonhasbeencontrolled Thephenomenonthatpollutedwaterwasrandomlypouredintotheriverhasbeencontrolled 爱学网资料 非谓语结构 todo ing 过去分词 坐落在珠江边的广州塔 很受游客欢迎 GuangzhouTowerisnearthePearlRiver andit swelcomedbytourists GuangzhouTowerisatthebankofthePearlRiver whichiswelcomedbytourists Located StandingatthebankofthePearlRiver GuangzhouTowerispopularamongthetourists 爱学网资料 with的结构 with n ed ing adj adv todo 他的学校看起来像个美丽的花园 到处种满鲜花 Hisschoollookslikeabeautifulgarden andflowersareplantedeverywhere Hisschool whereflowersareplantedeverywhere lookslikeabeautifulgarden Withmanyflowersplantedaround hisschoollookslikeabeautifulgarden 爱学网资料 好词好句的重要性 参看一些2012年广州一模的高分作文 爱学网资料 常见常用的一些好词好句 consider think regard treat count as concentrateon loseoneselfin diveoneselfindevote to bedevotedto takeitforgranted Believeitornot beofhelp use importance necessityinneed shortof lackof lackasfarasI mconcerned frommyperspective inmyopinion frommypointofviewTosumup Inshort Inaword Toconclude 爱学网资料 doharm goodtohaveaninfluence effectonstriveto tryone sbesttodosth beconcerned anxiousaboutstruggletoaimattakemeasures stepstodotothecontrary ontheoppositethink sing praisehighlyofOntheonehand Ontheotherhandkeepupwith catchupwithplan mean intendtodoberesponsiblefortake shouldertheresponsibilityfor 爱学网资料 remindsb ofTobehonest frankHonestly Frankly Totally Generally Personallyspeaking buildupmybody confidence determinationTomysurprise excitement disappointmentJudgingfrom accordingtobecauseof dueto owingto forinstanceconduct carryout doasurveyresultin fromcomeupwith workout dealwithspendtime money in doing onsth 爱学网资料 Itisnouse gooddoingsth Itis un certain surethat Itgoeswithoutsayingthat Thereisnodoubt denyingthat Everycoinhastwosides Astimegoesby WithtimegoingbyItis that 强调句 It shightimethatsb did shoulddosth Itissaid reported believed hoped wellknown suggested mentioned declared observed considered proved estimated that Notonly 半倒装 butalso 爱学网资料 好词好句的积累与掌握 1 从哪里获得 课文 阅读文章 谚语 句型归纳的书籍 非歌词或电影对白 要养成认真听老师讲课文 分析阅读理解的文章 且看课文或文章时拿笔划出里面的词组 句型或好的表达的习惯 哪怕是自己已经非常熟悉的takecareof等 以加强记忆 方便复习 注意 看文章时 并不需要把所有的生词都划出来并查字典 爱学网资料 以2011年广东高考英语试题基础写作为例 以下是一本图书的基本信息及相关报道 基本信息 1 书名 BattleHymnoftheTigerMother 2 作者 AmyChuo 美籍华人 耶鲁 大学教授 3 出版时间 2010年 4 内容 作者用中国传统教育方式教育两个女的故事 5 效应 引发了中美教育方式孰优孰劣的讨论相关报道 1 中文版 2011年初开始在中国销售 2 意外反应 多数中国妈妈不赞同作者的做法 3 最新消息 17岁的大女儿已被哈佛 和耶鲁录取 耶鲁 Yale哈佛 Harvard 写作内容 根据以上信息写一篇图书介绍 爱学网资料 AbookentitledBattleHymnoftheTigerMotherbyAmyChuawaspublishedin2010 Ittellshowthemother aChineseAmericanandprofessoratYaleUniversity educatedhertwodaughtersinthetraditionalChineseway Itspublicationhasstartedadebateastowhichwayofparentingissuperior thetraditionalwayortheAmericanway 爱学网资料 ItisreportedthattheChineseversionofthebookbegantosellinChinaearly2011 Unexpectedly themajorityofmothersinChinadisagreewiththeauthorthoughher17 year oldelderdaughterwaslatelyreportedtohavegotoffersfrombothHarvardandYale 爱学网资料 AbookentitledBattleHymnoftheTigerMotherbyAmyChuawaspublishedin2010 Ittellshowthemother aChineseAmericanandprofessoratYaleUniversity educatedhertwodaughtersinthetraditionalChineseway Itspublicationhasstartedadebateastowhichwayofparentingissuperior thetraditionalwayortheAmericanway 爱学网资料 ItisreportedthattheChineseversionofthebookbegantosellinChinaearly2011 Unexpectedly themajorityofmothersinChinadisagreewiththeauthorthoughher17 year oldelderdaughterwaslatelyreportedtohavegotoffersfrombothHarvardandYale 爱学网资料 2 如何利用要学会对好词好句的整理 分类 归纳 例如 有关 名人介绍 方面的文章整理短语和句子Allkindsofmythssurroundthelivesofwell knownpeople beginone scareerasa Itis thatchangedone slifesbisalwaysdevotedtoone scauseasa sbisoneofthemostnoticeablefiguresintheworldofsthsbappearedasthesymbolofsthsbwalksatthelatestedgesofworldculture 爱学网资料 例如 就一篇文章里关于 发表观点 的表达的整理Nowadays moreandmorepeopleareinfavorof Tobefrank Ican tagreemorewithit Thereareseveralfactorscontributingtomypoint Inthefirstplace Inthesecondplace Therefore itgoeswithoutsayingthat 爱学网资料 3 如何记忆背诵 是最有效的学习途经 是语言输入 记忆的必经之路 是培养语感的有效方法 背诵 是有方法可循的 可把它看作一个故事来记忆 或者用自己的独特方法 切忌逐字逐句来记忆 爱学网资料 Lastweek IhadaninterviewwithProfessorYangaboutthemiddleschoolstudents addictiontotheInternet AccordingtoProfessorYang thenumberofthenetizensinourcountryhasincresaedto338million and25 ofthemaremiddleschoolstudents mostofwhomareplasurfingtheInternetyingcomputergameswhile Internetaddictionwillcertainlycausethemlackofsleepandwillhaveabadinfluenceontheirhealthandstudies 主题 中学生上网成瘾问题 爱学网资料 Hesuggestedthatschoolsshouldtrynotonlytoreducestudents heavyburdenandrelievetheirstress butalsoenrichtheirafter classactivities Healsopointedoutthatitisusefultoimprovetherelationshipbetweenteachersandstudentsandtocreateawarmandharmoniousatmosphereinschoolsandfamilies 125words 爱学网资料 Lastweek IhadaninterviewwithProfessorYangaboutthemiddleschoolstudents addictiontotheInternet AccordingtoProfessorYang thenumberofthenetizensinourcountryhasincresaedto338million and25 ofthemaremiddleschoolstudents mostofwhomareplayingcomputergameswhilesurfingtheInternet Internetaddictionwillcertainlycausethemlackofsleepandwillhaveabadinfluenceontheirhealthandstudies 轻松背诵 Round1 爱学网资料 Hesuggestedthatschoolsshouldtrynotonlytoreducestudents heavyburdenandrelievetheirstress butalsoenrichtheirafter classactivities Healsopointedoutthatitisusefultoimprovetherelationshipbetweenteachersandstudentsandtocreateawarmandharmoniousatmosphereinschoolsandfamilies 爱学网资料 Lastweek IhadaninterviewwithProfessorYangaboutthemiddleschoolstudents addictiontotheInternet AccordingtoProfessorYang thenumberofthenetizensinourcountryhasincresaedto338million and25 ofthemaremiddleschoolstudents mostofwhomareplayingcomputergameswhilesurfingtheInternet Internetaddictionwillcertainlycausethemlackofsleepandwillhaveabadinfluenceontheirhealthandstudies 轻松背诵 Round2 爱学网资料 Hesuggestedthatschoolsshouldtrynotonlytoreducestudents heavyburdenandrelievetheirstress butalsoenrichtheirafter classactivities Healsopointedoutthatitisusefultoimprovetherelationshipbetweenteachersandstudentsandtocreateawarmandharmoniousatmosphereinschoolsandfamilies 爱学网资料 Lastweek IhadaninterviewwithProfessorYangaboutthemiddleschoolstudents addictiontotheInternet AccordingtoProfessorYang thenumberofthenetizensinourcountryhasincresaedto338million and25 ofthemaremiddleschoolstudents mostofwhomareplayingcomputergameswhilesurfingtheInternet Internetaddictionwillcertainlycausethemlackofsleepandwillhaveabadinfluenceontheirhealthandstudies 轻松背诵 Round3 爱学网资料 Hesuggestedthatschoolsshouldtrynotonlytoreducestudents heavyburdenandrelievetheirstress butalsoenrichtheirafter classactivities Healsopointedoutthatitisusefultoimprovetherelationshipbetweenteachersandstudentsandtocreateawarmandharmoniousatmosphereinschoolsandfamilies 爱学网资料 4 如何实践运用1 词组的运用关键 分类整理 举例说明 表示喜欢的词组 不同程度的 like lovebeinfavourofbekeenon crazyabout fondofhaveapreference tasteforprefertodelightinsth doingsth feellikedoingsth 爱学网资料 2 句型临摹 万能句型的使用例1 天气因素是关键 Weatheristhemostimportantthing Weatheristhekeypoint Itisweatherthatcounts makesadifference 实战演练 要获得成功 自制力是关键 Togainsuccess itisself controlthatcounts makesadifference 爱学网资料 例2 我们唯有相信她才能解决这件事情 Wehavetobelieveher andthenwecansolvetheproblem Theonlythingwecandoistobelieveher whichcanhelpsolvetheproblem Onlyifwebelieveher canwesolvetheproblem 实战演练 我们只有做到这些 才可以解决空气污染的问题 Onlyifwedothesecanwesolvetheproblemsofairpollution 爱学网资料 Onlyifwefollowtherules canweworkitoutsmoothly Onlyifwestartoutsmall canwehaveabetterlife Onlywhenwedoallmentionedabove canwemakeasuccess Onlyinthisway canwesucceed Onlyintheseways canwebuildupaharmonioussociety 爱学网资料 Teamworkspiritcontributesalottooursuccess Whateveryoudecidetodo justdothebestyoucan Therearethreefactorscontributingtomypoint Thereisanoldsayingthat TherearemanyreasonsaccountingforthischangeOpinionsaredividedonthefellingofhappiness Thisstoryremindsmeofoneofmyformerexperiences 爱学网资料 3 例文临摹 以 调查 偶像 为例 调查的时间 问题 对象 Lastweek wedidasurveyamong2600studentson WhoIsYourIdol 调查结果 ThesurveyshowsthathalfofthegirlschoosefilmandTVstarsastheiridols while48 oftheboysfavorsportsstars Asthedatashows parents ranksthesecondforthegirls butthefourthfortheboys However thepercentageoftheboyschoosing greatfigure isthesameasthatofthegirls 个人观点 Asformyself ThomasEdisonismyidol becausehisinventionhavegreatlychangedourlife 爱学网资料 最近 我们以 2012年中学生的春节活动 为题 在368名中学生中进行了一次调查 survey 写作内容 请根据以上内容用英语写一份调查报告 内容包括 1 调查问题及调查对象 2 主要活动 3 感受及原因 4 期望 实战训练 2012年广州一模基础写作 爱学网资料 Recently we 368students howtheyspent 2012年的春节 留在家里 todohomework 高达 45 与此同时 spentmostoftheirtimewiththeirparentsvisitingrelativesandfriendswhile 25 的学生 wenttravelingwithclassmatesorparents didasurveyamong on Asthedatashows ranksthefirst 30 ofthestudents the2012SpringFestival stayingathome upto Inthemeantime onefourth 爱学网资料 当被问到 howtheyfeltabouttheSpringFestival mostsaidtheyenjoyedit 因为 thecolourfulholidayandthe 大量的 luckymoneytheygot butsomefeltunhappy 因为 的原因 的量 homeworkleftlittletimeforfunactivities 至于 方面 theexpectation manystudents 表达他们的希望 thatnextyeartheywillhavelesshomeworkandmorefreetime Whenasked enormous Asto forthereasonthat becauseof theamountof expressedthehope 爱学网资料 强调提醒 不能盲目套句型 要自然 流畅为先 注意therebe句型的使用观点要鲜明 例子要符合完整的逻辑 爱学网资料 建议 一个 善于 两个 重视 三个 主动 爱学网资料 爱学网资料