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高考作文-感谢信写作 感谢信是用于致谢他人的馈赠,款待,帮助,以及对慰问信和祝贺信的回复.感谢信要求感情真挚,措词得体.阅读范文,总结感谢信的写作手法和句型:Version One: 假如你是一名失学儿童，名叫李华，你有幸得到在中国工作的Mr. Brown的资助，可以重返校园。你给Mr. Brown写了一封信，内容如下：收到钱和书后能重返校园，非常感激；在老师的帮助下，学习有了很大的进步，受到老师的表扬和鼓励；决心更加努力学习，取得更大的进步；盼望见到Mr. Brown，希望他寄来一张照片。 I am writing to express my deepest gratitude for the money and books you sent me. I could not have returned to school without your help. Thank you so much. I have been working hard since I went back to school. I have made great progress in my studies with the help of my teachers. They often praise me and encourage me. But for your help, I might have left school and couldnt have got such a good education. I have made up my mind to study harder and make greater progress. How are you getting on with your life and work? I would like to meet you in person, but I have no opportunity to do so. Would you please send me a photo of yourself? Thank you again for your generous help and best wishes! Yours Sincerely, Li HuaVersion Two:Dear John, I am writing to thank you for looking after me after that unfortunate accident the other day, when I was knocked off my bike by a taxi. If it had not been for your assistance in giving me first aid and taking me to a nearby hospital, I fear that the consequences might have been much more serious . Now that I am home and on my own again, I feel extremely happy. Abundant thanks to you for your patience, expertise and genuine help. It was you who helped me believe in myself and the warmth of the society. I would never forget each word you said to me and the things you have done to me. Your help really means a lot to me and my family, and my true gratitude is beyond any words,thanks again Affectionately, Wang Fang感谢信的内容一般分为三个部分: 1. 表达感谢之情并说明原因. 2. 细述并赞赏对方所给与的帮助3. 再次阐述谢意并表达回报愿望.感谢信的时态: 感谢信的正文中的时态灵活多变. 在提到对方曾经给予的帮助时,应用_; 在提到对方的帮助所产生的实际效果时,可以使用_; 在涉及到现状时,应用_; 在表达祝愿或希望时,应用_.感谢信常用句式:表达感谢之情并说明原因:1. I am writing to express my sincere thanks for2. In this letter ,I would like to convey my heartfelt thanks to you for.3. With deepest gratitude I write you this letter for4. I am writing this letter because I am indebted to you for5. I am obliged to you for 6. I owe you a great deal for细述并赞赏对方给与的帮助:1. It was nice/ kind/ thoughtful of you to2. Thank you very much for your kind hospitality and the honor you showed me during my visit3. It was your kind help that(强调句型)4. If it had not been for your(help/ guidance/ assistance), I wouldnt have (won the prize. (虚拟语气)5. But for/ Without, I wouldnt have再次阐述谢意并表达回报愿望:1. Thanks again for your generous help.2. I appreciate it more than I can say.3. My true gratitude is beyond the words description.4. I feel deeply indebted to you and I really do not know how to thank you enough for your help.5. Please accept my sincere thanks for your help, which I will never forget.6. Nothing could ever return the favor you gave me.7. Please do not hesitate to let me know if there is anything I could do to pay you back.8. Please have no hesitation in writing to me, should you want me to do something for you9. Please do allow me to return your favor.感谢信模板:模板一：Dear _(收信人)I am writing to express my sincere thanks for _ (感谢的原因). If it had not been for your assistance in _ (对方给你的具体帮助)，I fear that I would have been _ (没有对方帮助时的后果)。 Everyone agrees that it was you who _(具体帮助的细节). Again， I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude. Yours sincerely, Li Ming模板二：Dear _ (收信人)，I am now writing these few lines to express my sincere thanks for _ （感谢的原因）. Id like you to know how much your _ (对方的帮助) meant to me. I not only enjoyed _ (具体细节)，but also _ （具体细节）I repeat my thanks again for your _ (感谢原因). Please give my kind regards to your _ (问候对象). Yours truly, Li Ming实战练习:根据下列要求和提示，完成审题谋篇、遣词造句、连句成篇等写作过程。假设你是李华，你们学校和一所美国中学签署了教师交流协议。在过去的一年里，你们的英文老师是来自这所中学的Sue Wood，不久前她返回美国任教，请你根据写作要点和要求给sue写封电子邮件。写作要点：1.对她表达感谢之意2.介绍她离开后你自己及班里发生的事情；3希望了解她的近况。一、审题谋篇 1. 确定文体：该篇要求写 。 2. 确定主体时态：主要以 时态为主。 3. 确定主体人称：多采用 人称。 4. 内容要点：寒暄导入感激老师的教诲因为老师的帮助生活发生改变老师离开后发生了很多事情列举一二例子关心老师近况结束语。二、遣词造句1. 词汇准备：(1).欣赏 感激_ (2).多亏 由于_(3).赢得一等奖_ (4).上周举办的运动会_ (5).极大的成功_ (6).分享_(7).附带一些照片_2. 句式准备 一句多译(1).我们很想念你，感激有你做我们的老师a._b._ (2).你不知道，多亏你的帮助我们的生活发生了多么大的变化.a._b._(3).自从你离开后发生了很多事a._b._ (4).你是我们想与之分享幸福的人。a._b._(5).我想知道你是否可以给我说说美国的生活，最好附上照片a._b._实战演练:（感谢推荐） Suppose you were recommended by Professor Liang to get further education in Sydney University last June and now you have been admitted by that university. Write a letter to Professor Liang to express your gratitude in about 100 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, using “ZhangYing”instead. You do not need to write the address._感谢信的时态: 感谢信的正文中的时态灵活多变. 在提到对方曾经给予的帮助时,应用一般过去时; 在提到对方的帮助所产生的实际效果时,可以使用现在完成时态; 在涉及到现状时,应用一般现在时; 在表达祝愿或希望时,应用一般将来时.感谢信常用词汇: 感激appreciate, grateful 表示感激convey/ express ones appreciation/gratitude难以言表beyond words 礼貌courtesy 慷慨generosity 好客hospitality及时的timely实战练习:1. 确定文体：该篇要求写 感谢信 。 2. 确定主体时态：主要以 一般现在时，现在完成时 时态为主。 3. 确定主体人称：多采用 第一 第二 人称。 4. 内容要点：寒暄导入感激老师的教诲因为老师的帮助生活发生改变老师离开后发生了很多事情列举一二例子关心老师近况结束语。二、遣词造句 1. 词汇：(1).欣赏 感激 appreciate be grateful for (2).多亏 由于 owing to thanks to (3).赢得一等奖 win the first prize (4).上周举办的运动会 the sports meeting held last week_ (5).极大的成功 a great success (6).分享 share with (7).附带一些照片 attach some pictures 2. 句式练习 一句多译(1).我们很想念你，感激有你做我们的老师a. We all miss you and _appreciate you _being_our teacher. b. We all miss you and we are_ grateful that you were_our teacher. (2).你不知道，多亏你的帮助我们的生活发生了多么大的变化. a. Never will you know _how much our life has changed owing to your help. b. You dont know that how much our life has changed thanks to your help.(3).自从你离开后发生了很多事a. A lot of things have taken place since you left. b. Since you left, a lot of things happened. (4).你是我们想与之分享幸福的人。 a. Its you that / who_ we want to share happiness with_ b. You are the very one who we want to share happiness with(5).我想知道你是否可以给我说说美国的生活，最好附上照片 a. I wonder if you can tell me something about it, better to attach some pictures.Dear Sue，Im Li Hua, one of your students in China. We all miss you and really appreciate you being our teacher. Never will you know how much our life has changed owing to your help.A lot of things have happened since you left. Do you know that three of us have won the first place in the National English Competition for Primary School Students (NECPS)? There is another thing you perhaps want to know : the sports meeting held last week was a great success. Had you been here, you would have known how fast I ran. Its you that we want to share happiness with.How is your life in America? I wonder if you can tell me something about it, better to attach some pictures.Looking forward to your early reply.Dear Professor Liang, I am writing to extend my gratitude to you because with your help I am now a student of Chemistry Department of Sydney University. Last June, when I applied to become a graduate student of Sydney University, you really gave me a lot of valuable help. You not only wrote a recommendation for me to Professor Wells who works in the Sydney University and also gave me careful and patient instructions on how to fill the application forms and write the application letters. It is your unreserved help that enables me to obtain this splendid opportunity of further education. For the following two years I will study hard to reciprocate your sincere help and expectations with excellent grades. Yours truly, Zhang Ying