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Unit 12 Culture Shock写作园地-申请信感悟范文某国际动物关爱协会面向全球中学生招募“动物代言人”，希望申请者选择一种自己喜欢的动物，为之代言(speak for)。假设你是重庆新华中学的学生李华，有意参与该活动。现请你用英文在线填写申请表(仅需填写“申请陈述”部分)，内容如下： 表示有意参加； 说明自己富有爱心、关爱动物； 打算为何种动物代言，并说明理由； 希望申请成功。Application Form (申请表)注意：1. 词数100个左右；2. “申请陈述”的第一句已经给出，不计入总词数。范文I_am_a_student_from_Xinhua_Middle_School_in_Chongqing,_China. I would like to be a spokesman for animals to try my best to protect them.I like animals very much and I have a loving heart for animals, especially polar bears. So I want to speak for polar bears. Nowadays, the balance of nature is being destroyed and the weather is getting warmer and warmer. Whats worse, some people kill polar bears for their own sake. As a consequence, the number of polar bears is being smaller and smaller. So, in order to increase peoples awareness of protecting polar bears, I apply for the spokesman for polar bears sincerely. I do hope I can be chosen as a spokesman for polar bears. I would really appreciate it if you can accept my application.技法讨论当一个人想得到某种机会或某些东西，如申请加入某个组织、参加某项活动、得到奖学金、求学、申请出国签证等，往往通过申请信来提出请求。此类信件的写作需遵循以下步骤和原则：1提出请求：申请信开篇应点明主题，即申请的具体内容，语言要简练。2说明原因：也就是说明提出此申请的原因。要求对自己的情况和所具备的申请条件做一简要介绍。这一部分为申请信的主体，需重点明确，论述充分。3再次表明自己的意愿，请求回复并表示感谢：信的最后请求回复并表示感谢时，应该采用礼貌、诚恳的措辞。黄金表达1. I have learned that you are hiring.2. I wonder if you could tell me the information about.3. I am writing for the information about.4. I would like to apply for.5. I am interested in a.position in your firm.6. I would like to know whether you can provide me with information regarding.7. I would appreciate an interview at your convenience.8. I look forward to your immediate response.9. I am waiting for your quick reply.10. Thank you in advance for your assistance.亮点分析亮点一：文章思路清晰，布局合理，表意明确。第一自然段表达申请意愿，第二自然段写出申请理由及决心。亮点二：文章使用了whats worse，as a consequence，so等连接词语，使文章过渡自然，行文流畅。亮点三：大量语法结构的恰当使用，如：I would like to.；进行时被动语态；I do hope.强调谓语；I would really appreciate it if.等，这些都是文章的增分亮点。亮点四：本文还使用了一些短语，如：have a loving heart for；speak for；apply for等。类文演练 假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加此夏令营。 内容主要包括： 1.自我介绍(包括英语能力)； 2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家)； 3.希望获准。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好。Dear Sir or Madam，_RegardsLi Hua联想词汇1. 夏令营 _答案：summer camp2. 对感兴趣 _答案： be interested in3. 参加 _答案：take part in4. 而且，加之 _答案：whats more5. 接受为 _答案：accept.as.连词成句1. 我在因特网上读到了一篇你们张贴出的关于夏令营的通知。I read the announcement of the summer camp _ on the Internet.答案：that you have posted2. 我对此很感兴趣。I _ it.答案：am interested in3. 我想参加。I would like to _.答案：take part in it4. 我可以告诉来自于其他国家的学生有关中国的事情，以及了解他们国家的情况。Im able to tell the students _ about China and learn about their countries _.答案：from other countries; as well连句成章_答案：Dear_Sir_or_Madam，Im Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you wele students from different countries and Id like to take part in it. Ive been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, Ill be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.Looking forward to your reply!RegardsLi_Hua
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