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第03周 安慰别人范文11 安慰有困扰的同学为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：1表示理解并给予安慰；2提出建议并说明理由。注意：1词数120左右；2信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；3信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：temper n. 脾气，情绪Hi Worried.:Im sorry to know that youre having such a hard time at the moment._Yours,Jamie【思路点拨】题目要求给Worried回一封信，回信的内容主要包括：理解并给予安慰；提出建议。写作时注意信的格式，不要出现拼写和标点错误；多使用定语从句、名词性从句、非谓语动词等语法知识。文章注意使用First, Second, And third等来表示列举，使行文显得有条理、有层次；尝试使用了一些短语和固定搭配：talk to；a good way of；let out；go outdoors；get rid of；attitude towards；carry on；as normal等，长短句结合，使作文显得错落有致。【必背范文】Hi Worried，Im sorry to know that youre having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you dont have to worry so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything youll regret. Here are three useful tips:First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.I hope youll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.Yours,Jamie范文12安慰身患癌症的美国女孩据报道，7岁的美国女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后处于极度的痛苦之中。美国抗癌协会(ACS)决定,每当Amy收到一封慰问信，就给她增加3美分的治疗款。假如你是新华中学的学生李华，请你用英文给Amy写一封慰问信，主要内容包括：1.自我简介；2.得知的情况；3.表示鼓励；4.打算为她做什么；5.祝她早日康复。注意:1.信的格式已为你写好；2.信中不得出现你的真实情况；3.词数100左右。Dear Amy,_Yours,Li Hua【思路点拨】本文要求用英文给Amy写一封慰问信，鼓励Amy与病魔斗争。写作时可遵循以下几点：(1)确定要点：自我介绍，得知她的情况，表示鼓励，打算为她做什么，最后祝她早日康复；(2)扩展要点，丰富要点，将句子补充完整；(3)连句成篇，将句子连成短文，打好草稿；(4)全面检查，检查草稿，修改拼写、标点符号错误，修改人称、时态、句子结构逻辑错误。另外应考虑语篇的结构、句式的变化和词汇的丰富。【必背范文】Dear Amy,I am a student from Xinhua Middle School. I am very sorry to have heard of your present situation that you are so bitter after having a lung cancer.At present, ACS decides that it will give you three cents when you receive a letter. That will offer you so much courage. I hope you will make efforts to overe all kinds of difficulty, no matter how hard it is. You are sure to make it.I will try my best to ask all my friends, schoolmates and relatives to write letters to you, which may help you. Hope they will give you more courage to live on.May you recover soon.Yours,Li Hua范文13安慰情绪低落的朋友假如你是李华，最近收到了你的美国朋友Jenny的来信。她在信中说，由于刚进入高中，还不能适应新的环境，不知道如何去结交新朋友，因而情绪低落。请根据以下内容给她回信。1. 向Jenny表示问候和慰问；2. 针对她的问题提出以下建议： 放学后邀请同学一起参加活动； 你的同学遇到麻烦时，你去帮助他们； 你遇到困难时向同学求助。注意：1.词数100左右。2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear Jenny,I am really sorry to hear that you feel bad after entering the high school. _ Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【思路点拨】本文属于提纲作文，内容是给Jenny写一封回信，向Jenny表示问候和慰问，并针对她的问题提出三点建议。写作时注意以下几点：1.仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确要点就是主要内容。2.提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要根据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3.根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时为主。【必背范文】Dear Jenny,I am really sorry to hear that you feel bad after entering the high school. Id like to talk about it with you.In fact, in your senior high school, your classmates are also new and facing the same problem, so you dont have to worry too much about it. There is also something that you can do to change this situation. First, try to invite some of your classmates to take part in some activities together after school. This will help you understand each other better than municating with others. Then, help your classmates when they are in trouble and ask them to help you when you have difficulty.I believe you will make many new friends and you will have a happy school life there.Best wishesYours,Li Hua范文14 给与发生过摩擦的朋友道歉假如你是小明，前天踢足球时你撞倒了你的好朋友李华，因而你俩发生争吵。经过两天的冷静思考，你觉得不应该因为这件小事而失去一个好朋友，于是决定写一封道歉信，希望和他冰释前嫌，内容包括:1.说明写信的目的；2.承认自己的错误；3.指出李华的不足；4.提出希望，重归于好。注意：1.请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息；2.可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；3.词数不少于100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Li Hua,Im sorry_Best wishes. Yours,Xiao Ming【思路点拨】这是一篇应用文，要求写一篇道歉信，因此具有很大的开放性。道歉人主要向收信人表达歉意，希望对方原谅自己的过失，并提出弥补过失的具体措施和建议。写作时根据提示要求按照三段式模式谋篇布局。首段重复自己做的错事，表示歉意。主体段落说明道歉的原因，写信时应该注意在陈述理由时要照顾收信人的感受，切忌强词夺理。尾段再次表明承认错误的态度，请收信人谅解.【必背范文】Dear Li Hua, Im sorry to have quarreled with you about knocking you down the day before yesterday. I feel that its not necessary for me to do that, so I make a sincere apology to you and hope that you forgive me. As a friend, I should not quarreled with you about a small thing. Whats worse, its foolish of me to have said bad things to hurt you, though I was sure I didnt mean to. On the other hand, you were not so sensible then. If you had asked me why I knocked you down, the quarrel would have been avoided. Therefore, we should keep calm no matter what happens in the future. Only in this way can we deal with things correctly and maintain our friendship. At last, I hope we will have a lifelong friendship! Best wishes.Yours,Li Hua范文15 因不能赴约给朋友道歉假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你和在上海上学的英国朋友Tom约好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件：1. 表示歉意；2. 解释原因；3. 另约时间。Dear Tom,I am indeed very sorry that_ Yours, Li Hua【思路点拨】根据题目要求写一篇道歉信。文章分为三部分：首先说明自己的错事，并表达自己的歉意；第二部分解释原因；第三部分再次表达歉意，并另约时间。时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。人称以第一人称为主。【必背范文】Dear Tom， I am indeed very sorry that I cant go to Beijing with you next week, which I have promised. I feel badly about it and want you to know what happened.Just now, my cousin, Li Qiong, who left home to Australia for his further study last year， informed me that he will return this Saturday morning. And ask me to pick him up at the airport with his family. You know, we havent seen each other for nearly a year. I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation. I would appreciate your allowing me to make another date to show you around Beijing. Once again, Im sorry for any inconvenience caused.Sincerely yours,Li Hua
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