高考写作之道歉信.ppt

假定你是李华。你校外教史密斯先生给你发来一封电子邮件，邀请你本周六上午陪他去市博物馆看中国当代油画展（ChineseContemporaryOilPaintingExhibition）。但是你有事不能同往。请你用英语给他回一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.表示歉意；2.解释原因；3.你的打算注意：1.字数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,DearMr.Smith,ThankyouforyourinvitationtoenjoytheChineseContemporaryOilPaintingExhibitionthisSaturdaymorning.Unfortunately,itismuchtomyregretthatIcantgoalongwithyou,duetoasuddenillnessfallinguponmeafewdaysago.IhavecaughtaseriouscoldwithacontinuousfeverlastweekandthedoctoraskedmetostayinbedforaweeksinceIwasveryweakandtheweatherwassocold.IthoughtIwouldrecoverafterthesedays,butthingsgocontrarytomywishes.Therefore,Icouldntmakeit.Ifeelreallysorryfornotgoingwithyouandtheinconvenienceitwouldbringtoyou.Ihopewecanarrangeanothertimeafterwards.Ifso,donthesitatetodropmealineaboutyourpreferabledate.Idolongforapleasanttimewithyou.Hopeyoucanunderstandmysituationandacceptmyapology.Yoursfaithfully,Lihua,道歉信ALetterofapology,Structures,Para1：简明说明写信目的，为自己的过失表示歉意，希望得到对方的谅解。Para2：详细说明当时情况，解释原因，语气要诚恳。Para3：提出补救方法，具体提出自己的想法，希望能弥补过失，消除误会。Para4：再次表示歉意，愿意为此负责，希望以后不再出现类似不愉快事件。,以上两段有时会合二为一,经典套用句型精彩句首：Iamwritingthislettertoapologizetoyoufornotbeingableto我写这信是因向你道歉Iexpressmyregretatbeingunabletodo对未能做，我表示歉意MuchtomyregretIwasunabletokeepmyengagementtomeetyouattheparkgate.很抱歉我没有遵守约定在公园门口等您。Ifeelterriblysorryforthesuddenchangeofplanandfeelitapitytomisstheopportunity.对突然的改变，我感到十分的抱歉，对错过这个机会感到很可惜。,精彩段中Pleaseforgivemeforastupidchoiceofwords.请原谅我说话欠妥。Ifeelawfullysorryaboutitandwantyouknowwhathappened.为此，我感到非常内疚，所以想告诉你实情。IsincerelyhopeyoucanunderstandthatIoffendedyouunintentionally.我真心希望你能理解，我并非有意冒犯您。,精彩结尾Iwilltrymybesttoavoidtheaccidenthappeningagaininthefuture.我将尽全力避免将来发生同样的事故。Isincerelyhopeyoucanunderstandmysituationandacceptmyapology.真诚的希望你能理解我的处境，并接受我的道歉。Pleaseacceptmyapology.Idohopeyouwillunderstandmeandexcusemeformycarelessness.,其他常用句式,1.WouldyoumindifIchangetheappointmenttime?2.Woulditbeconvenientforyou?3.ItisverykindofyoutoaskustoBut,toourregret,wecannotacceptit.4.IamsorryIcannotandItrustthatyouwillbeabletounderstand.5.Ihopethatthisdoesnotcauseyoutoomuchinconvenience.,书面表达假如你是李华，你和Smith先生约定昨天下午三点去他办公室，听他给你关于学习英语的建议。但由于一些原因没有赴约，特写信表示歉意，并希望另约时间。内容如下：（1）表达未能赴约的歉意（2）未能赴约的原因（3）希望另约时间要求：100字左右开头已给出，不计总数,Dearsmith,Imwritingtoapologizetoyouformyfailingtokeeptheappointmentthatweshouldmeetat3pmyesterdaywhenyouwillgivemesomeadviceonhowtolearnEnglishwell._sincerelyyours,LiHua,开头Imwritingtomakeanapologytoyouformissingourappointmentat3oclockyesterdayafternoon,whenyouplanned/intendedtogivemeadviceonhowtolearnEnglishwell.Imwritingtobesorryforbeingunabletokeeptheappointmentwemadeat3oclockyesterdayafternoon,whenyouplanned/intendedtogivemeadviceonhowtolearnEnglishwell.Imwritingtoexpressmysorryfornotbeingabletomeetyouat3:00yesterdayafternoonasweappointed,whenyouplanned/intendedtogivemesomeadviceonhowtolearnEnglishwell.,结尾：Ihopeyoucangivemeanotherchancetomakeanappointmentwithyouagain.Iwillappreciateitifyoucangivemeanotherchancetomeetme.Hopeyoucanforgivemeandgivemeanotherchancetomeetme.,内容未能赴约的具体原因：可任选其一1.我叔叔从美国回来,3:00时下飞机。然而，我爸爸妈妈没时间去接，因此我不得不去机场接他。2.我妹妹生病了，她才四岁，不能照顾自己，而爸爸妈妈又在上班，于是我不得不在家照顾妹妹。3.在去见Smith的路上，自己的车坏了，不能按时去约见他。4.在去见Smith的路上，我碰到一起交通事故，一位老人受伤倒地，没人帮忙，自己需要送老人到医院5.本人生病，医生建议我呆在家里，好好休息。,未能赴约原因：1.我叔叔从美国回来,下午3点时分下飞机。然而，我爸爸妈妈没时间去接，因此我不得不去机场接他。Yesterdayafternoon,myunclecamefromAmericaandgotoffat3pm,butmyparentshadnotimetopickhimup,inwhichcaseIhadtomeethimattheairport.Afterthatitwastoolatetomeetyou.ThusImissedourappointment.,2.我妹妹生病了，她才四岁，不能照顾自己，而爸爸妈妈又在上班，于是我不得不在家照顾妹妹。Myyoungersisterhadabadfever.Sheistooyoungtolookafterherself,andmyparentswereatwork.Therefore/Inthatcase,Ihadtostayathometotakecareofher.Thatcausedmeunabletomeetyouasappointed.Myyoungersisterhadabadfever.Sheistooyoungtolookafterherself,andmyparentswereatwork,inwhichcaseIhadtostayathometotakecareofher.Thatcausedmeunabletomeetyouasappointed.,趁热打铁3.在去见Smith的路上，自己的车坏了，不能按时去约见他。4.在去见Smith的路上，我碰到一起交通事故，一位老人受伤倒地，没人帮忙，自己需要送老人到医院5.本人生病，医生建议我呆在家里，好好休息。,DearMrSmith,Imwritingtobegyoutoexcusemeformissingourappointmenton3yesterdayafternoon,whichyouintendedtogivemeadviceonEnglishlearning.Imsorryfortheinconvenienceitcausedtoyou.Youmaybewillingtoacceptanexplanation.However,Idontwantyoutomisunderstandme.Onmywaytoyouroffice,Ihappentoseeacaraccident.Theoldmanwasbadinjured,butnobodycametoofferhelp.SoIstoppedataxiandsenthertoanearbyhospital.Istayedthereforseveralhouruntilhissoncame,andthatcausedmetomissourappointment.Iamawarethatourappointmentisgreatimportance.Idohopeitthatyouwouldbekindenoughtospareyourvaluabletimetomeetmeagain.Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,LiHua,_,at,_,when,_,unwilling,_,happened,_,An,_,badly,_,him,_,hours,of,DearMrSmith,作文范文推荐Imwritingtobegyoutoexcusemeformissingourappointmentat3yesterdayafternoon,whenyouintendedtogivemeadviceonEnglishlearning.Imsorryfortheinconvenienceitcausedtoyou.Youmaybeunwillingtoacceptanexplanation.However,Idontwantyoutomisunderstandme.Onmywaytoyouroffice,Ihappenedtoseeacaraccident.Anoldmanwasbadlyinjured,butnobodycametoofferhelp.SoIstoppedataxiandsenthimtoanearbyhospital.Istayedthereforseveralhoursuntilhissoncame,andthatcausedmetomissourappointment.Iamawarethatourappointmentisofgreatimportance.Idohopethatyouwouldbekindenoughtospareyourvaluabletimetomeetmeagain.Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,LiHua,假如你叫李华，你的一位美国留学生朋友Peter邀请你参加本周日在他家举办的生日聚会，但你不能参加，请根据以下内容给他写一封电子邮件：表达想参加的意愿说明不能参加的理由表示歉意并另约时间注意：词数100左右；可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；开头语已为你写好。DearPeterIamextremelysorrytotellyouthatIamunabletogotoyourpartythisSunday.,DearPeterIamextremelysorrytotellyouthatIamunabletogotoyourpartythisSunday.ItisverykindofyoutoinvitemetoyourhouseandIhopefullywanttocelebrateyourbirthdaywithyouandexpressmybestwishestoyou.Muchtomyregret,IwillbeabsentfromyourpartyowingtothefactthattheCollegeEntranceExamisjustaroundthecorner,forwhichIamnowquitebusypreparing.Whatsworse,IhavecaughtabadcoldlatelyandIamreallynotmyself.Iamtrulysorry.Ihopeyouwillforgivemeandacceptmysincereapologies.Ibelievewewillhavemanymorechancestogettogether.ShallwemakeitaftertheExam?Imlookingforwardtoyourreply.Bestregards,LiHua,假如你是新华中学的学生李华，上周在外教Mr.Jackson的口语课上使用手机被老师发现，手机被收走。请用英语给外教写一封道歉信，内容应包括以下要点：1表示歉意；2解释上课使用手机的原因；3提出自己的请求并适当表态。注意：1.可适当添加细节使文章连贯；字数100。2信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。,DearMr.Jackson,Imreallysorryaboutmyusingthemobilephoneinyourlecturelastweek.Pleaseacceptmyheart-feltapologyforbeingsorudeastudent.Iknowanywordmightsoundamade-upexcuse.ButIdidnotusethemobilephonefornoreason.Iwastryingtofindapart-timejoblastweekendthatday,Igotajobofferandtheyneededmyfurtherinformationimmediately.Therefore,IhadnootherchoicebuttotrysendingthematextmessageinclassandthatwasexactlywhatIwasdoingwhenyoudiscovered.,Anyway,usingamobilephoneintheclassroomisnotacceptable.Iswearitwonthappenagain.ButIdoneedmyphonebacktokeepintouchwithothers.Willyoubesokindtogiveitbacktome?Bestwishes!Yourssincerely,LiHua,