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How to Better a Piece of Writing （Go for it ！八年级上册 unit1）Teaching topic(教学主题) Preparation Preparation Who ？ Learn and know the information of Writing elements(写作要素) How （weather）; When; Where; Who; What; How （feel）Before writing How （weather） （sunny） When （ July 2 5 th ） Where （Haitang Park） Who （friends and Mr Li） What （boating；eating some Rongchang bean jelly(凉粉)； going bikeriding ） How （happy）The information of Writing elements(写作要素)about Mr Li Help怎么帮助李老师写出更好的旅行日记 In the morning, we tried boating, it was really exciting! At lunch time, we had some Rongchang bean jelly. They looked good, it tasted terrible. We visited Sweet faye floor(香霏楼), it was boring.After lunch, we walked along the lake , took a lot of photos, they were very beautiful. We came back to the hotel late in the evening. ConstructionIs this passage good ？ Better the layout (布局)Preparation Body: What(activities)Beginning: When, How(Weather),Where, Who Ending: How(Feelings)Construction In the morning, we tried boating, it was really exciting! At lunch time, we had some Rongchang bean jelly. They looked good, it tasted terrible. We visited Sweet faye floor(香霏楼), it was boring.After lunch, we walked along the lake , took a lot of photos, they were very beautiful. We came back to the hotel late in the evening. I went to Rongchang Haitang Park on vacation last summer. lt was July 25th, it was a sunny day. I went to the Haitang Lake with my friends. We all felt tired but happy.Construction Better the sentences （句子）Preparation How can we better the logic ?Linking words (连接词) Mr Li took a lot of photos.Mr Li took a lot of photos, _they were very beautiful.and, so, but,thenand Mr Li tried boating, and Mr Li visited Sweet faye floor(香霏楼).Mr Li visited Sweet faye floor(香霏楼), _it was boring.and, so, but,thenbut Mr Li ate some Rongchang bean jelly(凉粉), but Mr Li went bike riding.It was sunny, _ Mr Li went bike riding.and, so, but,then so Mr Li visited Sweet faye floor(香霏楼), but it was boring.Rongchang bean jelly(凉粉), we walked along the lake , then took a lot of photos.Linking words (连接词) 用 and、but、so 、then等 连接词填空 I went to Rongchang Haitang Park on vacation last summer. lt was July 2 5 th, it was a sunny day. I went to the Haitang Lake with my friends. In the morning, we tried boating, it was really exciting! At lunch time, we had some Rongchang bean jelly. They looked good, it tasted terrible. We visited Sweet faye floor(香霏楼), it was boring.After lunch, we walked along the lake , took a lot of photos, they were very beautiful. It was sunny, we went bike riding.We came back to the hotel late in the evening. We all felt tired but happy.and soandbutbutthenand 荣昌初级中学英语社团拟举办一次“Follow Me to the Interesting Places in Rongchang”的英文征文活动，你可以选择下列任务之一，以游记的形式给社团投稿，介绍自己曾经去过的荣昌的某个有趣的地方(如万灵古镇；螺罐山；安富陶瓷博物馆；海棠公园等等)。字数80-120字。1， 自由写:根据游记要素和语篇结构写出自己的旅行日记。2 ，仿写:回读Mr Li的游记，根据你的具体情况替换其中细节内容，仿写一篇游记。writing travel diary Show TimeBe brave!Production What you have learned today?summary 1、Better the sentences （句子）2、Better the logic (逻辑) 3、Better the layout (布局)How to makebetter 小组以每位同学的旅行日志为材料，配图出一份手抄报，在校园里进行展示。 Thank you !
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