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,高考英语应用文写作技巧之,邀请信,Letter of Invitation,高考英语应用文写作技巧之Letter of Invitati,1,After learning this lesson, you will,1. apply the format to your writing properly.,2. write the points completely and clearly.,3. use appropriate expressions in your writing and mind your tone.,4. make your writing more coherent.,5. use some advanced expressions and sentence patterns to write a letter.,学习目标,Learning objectives,学习目标 Learning objectives,2,全国卷应用文体考察一览表（,2009-2019,）,全国卷应用文体考察一览表（2009-2019）,3,一、评分原则,1. 本题总分为15分，按五个档次进行评分。,2. 评分时，应主要从,内容组织,、,词汇语法,和,篇章结构,三个方面考虑，具体为：,(1) 对内容要点的覆盖情况以及表述的,清楚,程度和,合理性,。,(2) 使用词汇和语法结构的,准确性,、,恰当性,和,多样性,。,(3) 上下文的,衔接,和全文的,连贯性,。,高考应用文写作评分标准,一、评分原则高考应用文写作评分标准,4,第五档：(13-15分)能写明全部要点；语言基本无误；行文连贯，表达清楚；,第四档：(10-12分)能写明全部或绝大部分要点；语言有少量错误；行文不够连贯, 表达基本清楚；,第三档：(7-9分)能写明基本要点；语言虽有较多错误，但能基本达意；,第二档：(4-6分)能写出部分要点；语言错误多，影响意思表达；,第一档：(1-3分)只能写出一两个要点；语言错误很多，只有个别句子正确。,二、各档次的给分范围和要求,第五档：(13-15分)能写明全部要点；语言基本无误；行文连,5,应用文写作要诀：,稳中求胜、变中求新,1,、,“,套路,”(structure),要稳,2,、 要点,(points),制胜,3,、 语言,(language),巧变,应用文写作要诀：稳中求胜、变中求新1、“套路”(struct,6,假如你是李华，你校计划成立,“,读英文名著,”,小组，请用英文给你的外教,Wilson,写一封信邀请他加入，内容包括：,1.,成立的目的；,2.,活动的时间和地点；,3.,请他加入的理由；,注意：,1.,词数,80,左右；,2.,可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。,假如你是李华，你校计划成立“读英文名著”小组，请用英,7,邀请信写作要诀之一：,“,套路,”,要稳,三步走,表明写信目的,(,para1),说明活动安排,(,para2,),表达期望,(para3),假如你是李华，你校计划成立,“,读英文名著,”,小组，请用英文给你的外教,Wilson,写一封信邀请他加入，内容包括：,1.,成立的目的；,2.,活动的时间和地点；,3.,请他加入的理由；,1.,问候,2.,背景,3.,目的,邀请信写作要诀之一：“套路”要稳三步走表明写信目的(para,8,开头没有写信目的,开头缺少问候语和背景介绍,How are you doing recently? Our school is going to set up., so Im writing the letter to invite you to.,假如你是李华，你校计划成立,“,读英文名著,”,小组，请用英文给你的外教,Wilson,写一封信邀请他加入，内容包括：,1.,成立的目的；,2.,活动的时间和地点；,3.,请他加入的理由；,开头没有写信目的开头缺少问候语和背景介绍How are yo,9,三步不清晰、明确,三步不清晰、明确,10,I hold the belief that your coming will add color to our activity. Looking forward to your reply.,假如你是李华，你校计划成立,“,读英文名著,”,小组，请用英文给你的外教,Wilson,写一封信邀请他加入，内容包括：,1.,成立的目的；,2.,活动的时间和地点；,3.,请他加入的理由；,结尾没有表示出期待或希望,I hold the belief that you,11,邀请信写作要诀二：要点制胜,2C,原则,complete,要点全,clear,要点清楚明了,假如你是李华，你校计划成立,“,读英文名著,”,小组，请用英文给你的外教,Wilson,写一封信邀请他加入，内容包括：,1.,成立的目的；,2.,活动的时间和地点；,3.,请他加入的理由；,邀请信写作要诀二：要点制胜2Ccomplete要点全clea,12,假如你是李华，你校计划成立,“,读英文名著,”,小组，请用英语给你的外教,Wilson,写一封信，邀请他加入，内容包括：,1.,成立的目的,;2.,活动时间和地点,;3.,请他加入的理由。,少要点,2,1,3,假如你是李华，你校计划成立“读英文名著”小组，请用英语给你的,13,要点顺序颠倒,假如你是李华，你校计划成立,“,读英文名著,”,小组，请用英语给你的外教,Wilson,写一封信，邀请他加入，内容包括：,1.,成立的目的,;2.,活动时间和地点,;3.,请他加入的理由。,2,1,3,要点顺序颠倒假如你是李华，你校计划成立“读英文名著”小组，请,14,时间不明确,at 4 o clock every Friday afternoon, lasting one hour.,假如你是李华，你校计划成立,“,读英文名著,”,小组，请用英语给你的外教,Wilson,写一封信，邀请他加入，内容包括：,1.,成立的目的,;2.,活动时间和地点,;3.,请他加入的理由。,时间不明确at 4 o clock every Frida,15,时间地点不明确,at 4 p.m. every Monday in Room 407 of our office building.,假如你是李华，你校计划成立,“,读英文名著,”,小组，请用英语给你的外教,Wilson,写一封信，邀请他加入，内容包括：,1.,成立的目的,;2.,活动时间和地点,;3.,请他加入的理由。,时间地点不明确at 4 p.m. every Monday,16,邀请信写作要诀三之语言三原则,3C,原则,conciseness,语言简洁,courtesy,语言礼貌（场合、对象）,coherence,语言连贯,邀请信写作要诀三之语言三原则3Cconciseness 语言,17,不可强人所难,不可强人所难,18,Learning that you are an expert in classic works, we hope you can give us some guidance.,句型过于正式,语气生硬,Learning that you are an exper,19,语言太直接，不够礼貌,It would be better if you can help us choose the classic works since we have no experience in doing this.,语言太直接，不够礼貌It would be better i,20,连贯不一定非得用连接词,连贯不一定非得用连接词,21,使用,not only. but also,结构衔接两个句子。,使用not only. but also结构衔接两个句子,22,除了过渡词之外，句子开头还可使用,副词、形容词（短语）、分词做状语、介词短语、各种从句,衔接上下文，使文章更连贯。,1.,Undoubtedly, this exhibition will provide you with a wonderful chance to know more about Chinese painting.,2.,As for,the exact place of this exhibition, it is not far from your home.,3.,Having heard,that you are fond of Chinese knot, I brought you some.,4.,If you are willing to join the club, please contact us.,句子之间的衔接,除了过渡词之外，句子开头还可使用副词、形容词（短语）、分词做,23,we are,hope,us,1,2,3,第五档：(13-15分)能写明全部要点；语言基本无误；行文连贯，表达清楚；,假如你是李华，你校计划成立,“,读英文名著,”,小组，请用英文给你的外教,Wilson,写一封信邀请他加入，内容包括：,1.,成立的目的；,2.,活动的时间和地点；,3.,请他加入的理由；,we arehopeus123第五档：(13-15分)能写明,24,one possible version,Dear Wilson,How are you getting on these days? Our school plans to,set up,a Reading English Classic Group and wed like to invite you to join us.,Reading English classics is,a good way to know about the culture of western countries. The group will gather at 4 p.m. every Friday afternoon and the activity will last one hour.,Being a native speaker,you must,have a better understanding of,E,nglish classics.,We will appreciate it if you can give us some guidance.,I am looking forward to your reply.,Yours,LiHua,one possible version,25,邀请信写作要诀三之词句巧变,1,、高级词汇替换简单词汇,At the end of the festival, wed like you to,join in,the performance as well as,give,the certificates to the winners.,At the end of the festival, wed like you to _the performance as well as _the cetificates to the winners.,_ the paintings to be displayed in the museum this Friday, there is no doubt that you will like them.,About,the paintings to be displayed in the museum this Friday, there is no doubt that you will like them.,get involved in,issue,Concerning,邀请信写作要诀三之词句巧变1、高级词汇替换简单词汇At th,26,2.,短语优先,I am _ to hear that you won the first prize in the speech contest.,more than glad,I think reading English classic works is very,important,for English learners.,I think reading English classic works is _for English learners.,I am,happy,to hear that you won the first prize in the speech contest.,of great importance,2. 短语优先I am _ to,27,下周我们学校要举行中文诗歌朗诵比赛，这将是你展示自己的好机会。（被动句）,A Chinese poetry recitation contest is going to be held in our school, which is definitely a good chance for you to show your talent.,Your participation is highly anticipated .,非常期待你的参与。（被动句）,It is a good idea for you to sign up for the calligraphy course.,报名参加书法课是一个很好的选择。（,it,作形式主语）,3.,恰当使用,被动句或,it,或物,作主语的句型,下周我们学校要举行中文诗歌朗诵比赛，这将是你展示自己的好机会,28,structure,套路,points,要点,language,语言,5C principles,purpose,写信目的,hope,希望,Summary,词句巧变三条,structure套路points要点language语言5,29,假定你是李华，你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛，请给你的英国朋友George写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括：,1.比赛时间；2.演讲话题；3.报名方式,;,注意：,1.词数80左右；,2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯,.,课后练笔（,2020,浙江首考真题）,假定你是李华，你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛，请给你的英国朋,30,Wish you good luck!,Goodbye,Wish you good luck!Goodbye,31,
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