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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,英语书面表示写作指导,之,漫 画 作 文,(议论类),第1页,第1页,谋篇,3 parts:,1)describe the picture,2)interpret its meaning,3)give your opinions about the phenomenon,第2页,第2页,Part 1,Describe,the picture,The picture is talking about/shows,The picture shows a common phenomenon.,The picture describes an interesting phenomenon.,The picture above is about,第3页,第3页,Part 1,Describe,the picture,What an interesting picture it is!,Sitting before,a plate of,zongzi,the boy is,at a complete loss of,how to,unwrap,them and eventually turns to a book for instructions!The picture is trying to,convince us of,a fact that many of the young are losing their basic hands-on ability in everyday life.,第4页,第4页,Part 2.,Interpret,the picture,It seems very ridiculous thatHowever,this kind of story is performed everywhere.,The picture shows thatIt is the exact reflection of,The picture indicates that weNowadays,it is a common phenomenon that,第5页,第5页,Many factors contribute to this phenomenon,.(过渡句),Firstly,many,children,have been forced to,focus on,their school work only,having,little or no space to experience things in real life.,Secondly,parents,are,over-protective,.They take over almost all their childrens life.,Thirdly,the Internet and certain books,provide actually everything we need,.,It is not surprising,for children to,develop dependence on,them for help.,第6页,第6页,Part 3 Give your,opinions,(结合动手能力和新人才观，谈见解）,I think/believe that,As far as Im concerned,In my opinion,From my point of view,should,It is better/advisable to,I consider it necessary,Only in this way can.,must,have to,Do/Dont,第7页,第7页,From where I stand,giving children chances to do things for themselves is the only remedy.Anyway,nobody can learn to swim without jumping into water.,.,Only in this way can we,children grow up confidently and eventually,live our dreams,.,第8页,第8页,高级句,1.,Its,our dependence on machines and lack of practice,that,contribute to the problem.(陈雨瑶),2.Only when,we combine book knowledge with practice,can we,lead a better life.(杨云),3.Being a student,I think,not only should,we put our study in the first place,but also we need pay attention to developing our hands-on ability.(薛刘娅),4.Only when,we gain our knowledge and practical skills,can we,adapt to society well.,第9页,第9页,5.So,what we need to do,is to,keep the balance of studying book knowledge,and gaining our hands-on ability.,6.Our studies are important,but so,is our hands-on ability.(钱玲),7.To be an outstanding man,not only,should we broaden our horizons by learning knowledge,but we are also,supposed to master some basic abilities.(陈雪菲),8.Only if,we are aware of the importance of hands-on ability and take measures to practice,can we,improve our lives,in the long term.,第10页,第10页,1.努力推动素质教育,3给孩子充足自由发展他们自己兴趣,3努力去实现梦想,4有助于社会发展,5全面发展,1.push ahead with quality education,2.give children more freedom to develop their own interests,3.make every effort to realize their own dreams,4.contribute to the development of society,5.develop,in a all-round way,第11页,第11页,注意点:,1.时间分派和文章长度,2.标题,3.图画描述,4.层次(分段,原因分析,firstly.secondly thirdly),5.发表自己见解至少三行,6.句式多样:强调句,倒装句,非限制性定语从句,分词做结果状语 (不宜用诸多问句),第12页,第12页,
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