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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,英语,课题,:Writing English,How to keep healthy,英语,If youre happy and you know it,clap your hands(clap,clap).If youre happy and you know it clap your hands.(clap,clap).If youre happy and you know it,and you really want to show it.If youre happy and you know it,clap your hands.(clap,clap).If youre happy and you know it,stomp your feet(stomp,stomp).If youre happy and you know it stomp your feet(stomp,stomp).If youre happy and you know it,and you really want to show it.If youre happy and you know it,stomp your feet(stomp,stomp).,If youre happy and you know i,Whats the matter?,Are they happy?,Whats the matter?Are they hap,Do you think its terrible?,How to stop it?,Do you think its terrible?How,How to keep healthy？,How to keep healthy？,Writing preparation,Writing preparation,1,2,3,Task 1,We can keep healthy in 3 ways.,Choose one and discuss in groups,Sports,Eating habits,Mood,Talk about the topic,123Task 1We can keep healthy i,basketball,sports,makestrong,be good for my,popular all over the world,once a day,basketballsportsmakestrong,Eating habits,We should/had better because its good for,We shouldnt because its bad for,Eating habitsWe should/had b,Mood,We should smile to life.When we are unhappy,we can.,MoodWe should smile to life.W,Group work:,Talk about how to keep healthy with your group members.,Group work:Talk about how to k,How to write better?,Here are some standards,（标准）,you can refer to(,参考,),。,Make up a main structure(,构建骨架,),Task 2,How to write better?Make up a,How to Keep Healthy,I think we should eat healthy food like vegetables and fruits.They are good for our health.And we shouldnt eat junk food.Its necessary for us to take exercise.Exercise will keep us active and strong.I think we had better play sports like basketball or table tennis once a day.We should be happy.If we are unhappy and worried about something,we can talk to our parents and teachers.,Cover all the focal points.,覆盖所有要点,Scores(分数)_,_,8,-,10,For example,How to Keep Heal,How to be better?,Use proper conjuncti,on,s.,适当运用了语句间连接成分 (加1-2分）,How to be better?Use proper co,Scores,_,9,-1,2,A.,Finally,B.,First,C.,Then,A,B,C,Use proper conjuncti,on,s.,适当运用了语句间连接成分 (加1-2分）,How to Keep Healthy,I think we should eat healthy food like vegetables and fruits.They are good for our health.And we shouldnt eat junk food.Its necessary for us to take exercise.Exercise will keep us active and strong.I think we had better play sports like basketball or table tennis once a day.We should be happy.If we are unhappy and worried about something,we can talk to our parents and teachers.,Scores _9-12 ABC,How to be better?,Add,a good beginning and ending.,有好的开头和结尾（加1-2分）,How to be better?Add a good,As we all know,its very important to keep healthy.But do you know how to keep healthy?,Here are 3 rules.,I think we should eat healthy food like vegetables and fruits.They are good for our health.And we shouldnt eat junk food.Its necessary for us to take exercise.Exercise will keep us active and strong.I think we had better play sports like basketball or table tennis once a day.We should be happy.If we are unhappy and worried about something,we can talk to our parents and teachers.,In order to keep fit,lets follow the rules.,How to Keep Healthy,Scores,_,10,-1,4,As we all know,its very,As we all know,its very important to keep healthy.But do you know how to keep healthy?,Here are 3 rules.,I think we should eat healthy food like vegetables and fruits.They are good for our health.And we shouldnt eat junk food.Its necessary for us to take exercise.Exercise will keep us active and strong.I think we had better play sports like basketball or table tennis once a day.We should be happy.If we are unhappy and worried about something,we can talk to our parents and teachers.,In order to keep fit,lets follow the rules.,Be happy to be healthy.,How to Keep Healthy,要点、连词,开头,结尾,美句,Scores,_,1,1-16,Add,some details,or English mottoes,.,句式多样或有细节描写和美句。(加1-2分）,As we all know,its very,Writing accessment,Writing accessment,当我们在写作和评价他人作文时，要注意以下几点：,How to write better?,当我们在写作和评价他人作文时，要注意以下几点：How to,Writing practice,Writing practice,要点提示：,1.,保持健康应该注意哪些方面？,2.,关于这几方面具体应该怎样做？,要求：,1.,词数：,80,词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数,2.,文中不能出现自己的名字和所在学校的名称。,Hello,my dear friends.As we all know,it is very important for us to keep fit.,How to Keep Healthy,H,思路点拨：,审题：时态为：,人称为：,体裁为：,应用文,要点：,1.,保持健康应该注意哪些方面？,2.,关于这几方面具体应该怎样做？,条理：连词，逻辑
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