新人教版高中英语读后续写课件

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,Continuation Writing,Continuation Writing,1,I love three things in the world，,Sun,moon and you,.,Sun for,morning,，,Moon for night，,And you forever,.,I love three things in the wor,2,Step 1:,Read and analyze,the given passage,(Main idea,plot,feelings,coflict.).,Step 2:,Infer,the plot development,and,the,ending,by the given sentences.,Step 3:,Writing,and,polishing,.,Continuation Writing,Steps,：,Step 1:Read and analyze the g,3,1.Reading for the,main idea,On Christmas Eve,Della cried for not having enough money to buy her husband,Jim a,.Then,she,her only possession-her long beautiful,to buy her Jim a,-perfect for Jims gold,.,gift,sold,hair,chain,watch,1.Reading for the main ideaOn,4,1.What,did Della do?,(,actions,),2.How,did Della feel at the beginning of the story?(,feelings,),3.Why,？（,Problem/conflict,）,1.Count,sob,howl.,2.Reading for the,plot and feelings,(,Para1,）,Della,Jim,2.,Sad/Frustrated,.,3.,They lived,in extreme poverty,.,1.What did Della do?(action,5,her cheeks burned,with the silent scold of meanness.,There was clearly nothing to do but,sob,on the shabby couch and,howl,.,a,gray,cat walking along a,gray,fence in a,gray,yard.,How did the writer vividly show these feelings,?,1,2,3,Imagery,3.Reading for the,Language,vivid use of language to form an image/a picture,her cheeks burned with the,6,Her eyes were shining brilliantly,but her face had lost its color within twenty seconds.,I,t,suddenly occurred to,her that she could sell the hair to buy an expensive gift for Jim.,She was,sorrowful,because she would buy the gift,at the expense of,her beloved hair.,sacrifice,3.Reading for the,language,(,Para2,）,Her eyes were shining brillian,7,Imagery,Para 3,Staring into,the mirror,she found her hair,reached below her knees,shining like a brown waterfall,.,She,stood still,while a few tears fell/,splashed/dripped/streamed down,on the floor.,ImageryPara 3Staring into the,8,body language/expressions,surprise,eyes,wide open;,mouth,in the shape of an“O”;,jaw,dropping,lips,curving into a smile;,face,lighting up;,grin,from ear to ear,happiness,being moved,red-rimmed,eyes,;,hug/embrace,sb.tightly;,tears,splashing/welling,Imagery,body language/expressionssur,9,4.,Infer,the plot development and ending by the given sentences.,Para1:,The door opened and Jim,stepped in,.,Para2:Inside,Jims,package,were the,expensive,combs,something special to hold her hair that Della had wanted ever since she saw them in a shop window.,4.Infer the plot developme,10,1.Suppose you were,Jim,seeing Dellas short hair,how would you feel?,.surprised,.,.frustrated,.,2.Suppose you were,Della,what would you do and say?,Jim,3.How to connect with the second paragraph?,Jim,took out,a package.,Interaction,Imagery,.delightedly,presented,the gift to Jim and told the truth.,Jim was deeply,moved,and,hugged,her in his arms.,1.Suppose you were Jim,seeing,11,第七档（,22-25,分）,1.,创造了新颖，丰富，合理的内容，富有逻辑性，续写完整，与原文情景融洽度高。,2.,使用了多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达流畅，语言错误少，且完全不影响理解。,3.,自然有效地使用了段落间，语句间衔接手段，全文结构清晰，前后呼应，意义连贯。,Continuation Writing,Criteria,(,评价标准,):,第七档（22-25分）Continuation Writin,12,Use,“interaction”,to design your plot;,Use,“imagery”,to make your language more vivid.,5.,Writing vividly,Use“interaction”to design yo,13,Show Time,Appreciate your classmates articles,learn from each other and polish your writing.,6.,Showing and polishing,Show Time Appreciate your,14,新人教版高中英语读后续写课件,15,新人教版高中英语读后续写课件,16,新人教版高中英语读后续写课件,17,A possible version for reference,Para1,：,The door opened and Jim stepped in.,Staring at Dellas eyes,shining with anticipation,Jim,widened his eyes,at the sight of her new haircut and,squeezed out a faint smile,to hide his inner sadness.,/,Della,danced towards him at a brisk pace,and,spread out her palm,with the shiny chain inside,saying gently Merry Christmas,honey!.,/,Realizing Della bought the gift at the expense of her beloved hair,Jim was reduced to tears,with red-rimmed eyes,and,embraced her tightly in his arms,.,/,While mildly stroking her short hair,he,murmured in a choked voice,“Ive also got a gift for you!”as he reached for a package and unwrapped it.,A possible version for referen,18,Para2,：,Inside Jims package were the expensive combs something special to hold her hair that Della had wanted ever since she saw them in a shop window.,Para2：Inside Jims package wer,19,theme,Love,Sacrifice,Wealth,1,2,3,It is,love and sacrifice,that,make people truly wealthy.,theme LoveSacrificeWealth123It,20,Use,“interaction,”and,“imagery”,to finish the second part of the writing,and have,the theme,highlighted.,Use“interaction”and“imagery,21,Learn more:,http:/ you!,Thank you!,Learn more:Thank you!Thank yo,22,