Academic-Writing-Introduction-and-Purpose---副本

Click to edit Master title style,Click to edit Master text styles,Second level,Third level,Fourth level,Fifth level,#,Biomedical Academic Writing,Agenda,Miscellaneous:Class schedule,note on editing,see homeplay,Review:MM and Results exercise,Grammar and Style:Remove Wordiness,Introduction and Purpose section,Edit and Analyze:Introduction and Purpose section,Exercise:Outline,Homeplay/Final Project,:,10 Verbs,Adverbs,Adjectives,Post a rough draft of your introduction/purpose section to class group before 8pm night before classs.Also bring a copy next week.,Lesson 6 Part A(Week 9):Introduction and Purpose Section,Agenda,Miscellaneous:editing points,Grammar and Style:Broad Reference Pronouns(BRP),Review:Introduction Outline and Verbs Adv Adj list,Close Editing:Your introduction and Purpose,Homeplay/Final Project,:,Lesson 6 Part B(Week 10):Introduction and Purpose Section,Class Schedule,Masters Class,:No make-up.,PhD Class 1:,come earlier 45 minutes 1:45pm,PhD Class 2:,stay later 45 minutes 6:15pm(5 minute breaks),MA class ends week 11,November 9(as scheduled),PhD class ends week 15,December 8(four weeks early),Final Project,Your group(of about 10 students)will write a completed manuscript using the research from a published article from a trusted English journal of your choice,and using the Authors Guide provided.The data and research itself may come from the article or may be faked but the words must be your own.You may also mimic from any other article source.,You should form a QQ group and name it“MA AW 2023 Fall Group X”.Be sure you have a folder 文件 like this:,Within your group decide on a journal article you will use and provide a copy to the instructor by putting in your groups folder.Label“Group X Model Paper”.If your group uses another paper to mimic please label this“Group X Mimic Paper”.,Final Project-Editing,Your group should be starting to write your final project manuscript.A large part of this project will be how well you edit others work.I will be looking for evidence you participated in the editing process.So I want to see your comments.,I will be checking progress each week giving 1 point to those who actively participate,either writing or providing constructive,useful comments.,To make comments you should be a user in Word.Of course your user name should be exactly like“1-1,柯塞屿,kesaiyu 0123456789”:,1,柯塞屿,kesaiyu 0123456789,Final Project-Editing,You will make your comment here in Word:,Final Project-Editing,So your comments will look something like this in Word:,10-20 Comment 1,10-20 Comment 2,Final Project-Editing,Not like this:,Name the combined file:,filename merged comments.docx,Final Project-Editing,Article Structure:Sections,An,Article,in a journal in general consists of,9 sections:,Note:may differ from journal to journal:,Title(Written Last),Abstract(Written Last),Introduction(Written 3,rd,),Purpose(Written with introduction),Literature Review(Written Last),Materials&Methods(Written 1,st,),Results(Written with MM),Discussion(Written 3,rd,),Conclusion(Written with discussion),References&End Notes(Written Last),Why?,Provides detailed background,Give reader context behind the research,Title,Abstract,Introduction,Purpose,Materials&Methods,Results,Discussion,Conclusion,References&End Notes,General Structure of an Article,Why?,Describes the exact objective or goal of the study,Should follow Introduction,Title,Abstract,Introduction,Purpose,Materials&Methods,Results,Discussion,Conclusion,References&End Notes,General Structure of an Article,Consult authors guide/notes,.,Can be rather long(500 to 1000 words),Good writing to draw reader(7-points),Verb tense,present tense/active voice(fact),past/active(your research),Structure follows the general explanation or introduction of any problem.,Journal of Bacteriology Results Section,Introduction and Purpose,Fact and present tense:,Journal of Bacteriology Results Section,Introduction and Purpose,Special terms should be defined and explained here:,explained concisely,Spelling and abreviations accepted by the international scientific community(check on the internet),For example:Acinetobacter baumannii,is a Gram-negative opportunistic human pathogen that has been recognized ,Give all full names with any,abbreviated,form:,.siRNA is taken up by RNA-induced silencing complex(RISC),Introduction and Purpose-Style,Introduction and Purpose-Style,Writing Basics The 7 Points of Clear Writing,Topic,Interest/Audience,Unity,Logic/Coherence,Development,Vocabulary/Grammar,Format/Structure,Background(2 to 4 paragraphs),State the,pertinent,background,previous,relevant,research,Significance/Limitations(1 to 2 paragraphs),Limitations,of current research,Significance,of your research,Problem(1 paragraph),State the problem you want to help solve,Purpose/Goal(1 paragraph),Briefly state your objectives/goals,Principal,findings,Overview,Introduction and Purpose-Style,Background:,Jack has been having several problems with his homework assignments and missing days at school.,Signif