高考英语复习写作专题讲座：十二讲-应用文(二)——日记--公开课一等奖ppt课件

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,高考英语复习写作专题讲座：十二讲-应用文(二)日记-公开课一等奖ppt课件,高考英语复习写作专题讲座：十二讲-应用文(二)日记-公开课一等奖ppt课件,高考英语复习写作专题讲座：十二讲-应用文(二)日记-公开课一等奖ppt课件,题目要求,下午数学考试，你成绩不好，心情郁闷。晚上几个好朋友邀你去歌厅,(KTV),唱歌，你们一晚上唱得很尽兴。你用日记的形式记录下你今天的活动及感受。,题目要求,日记须包括以下几个要点：,(1),你因数学成绩不佳，心情一直不好。,(2),晚上朋友们邀请你去,KTV,唱歌，这是你第一次去,KTV,。,(3),大家唱得很高兴，而你一直当听众，你觉得你的歌唱得不好，不敢去唱。,(4),在大家的鼓励下，你终于拿起麦克风,(microphone),唱了一首英文歌曲,I,Believe,I,Can,Fly,。,(5),现在你心情舒畅了，更重要的是你找回了自信。,(6),你在日记中对自己说了这样一句话：“,”,日记须包括以下几个要点：,注意：,1.,词数：,100,左右。开头已写好，不计入总词数。,2,日记必须包括所有要点，但可以用不同的句式表达。,Friday,Nov.18,2011 Sunny,This evening I went to the KTV with some of my good friends.,_,_,_,注意：1.词数：100左右。开头已写好，不计入总,技法指导,日记是把自己在当天生活中经历的有意义的事以及见闻感受记录下来的书面形式。写英文日记时应注意以下三点：,1,注意格式。,(1),日期、星期一般顶格写在正文之前。可以先写星期，后写年月日，也可以先写年月日，后写星期几。,技法指导,(2),天气情况应写在日期和星期的同一行稍靠右之处。表示天气情况常用,fine,cloudy,rainy,snowy,windy,stormy,等形容词来表示。,(3),正文。正文的内容应该思想健康，积极向上。文章可长可短，开头语应简洁，结尾可适当发表感想。,(2)天气情况应写在日期和星期的同一行稍靠,2,注意人称选择。,由于日记的内容多是记叙自己的亲身经历或抒发自己的感想，所以多用第一人称,I,或,we,。,3,确定正确的时态。,日记一般写当天发生的事情，因此通常使用一般过去时。当然，即使发生在过去的事情，为了描写生动，也可以使用现在时，以表现当时的情况。发表感想或议论时则可用现在时或将来时。,2注意人称选择。,高考英语复习写作专题讲座：十二讲-应用文(二)日记-公开课一等奖ppt课件,第一步构建框架，清晰行文,谋篇布局,第一步构建框架，清晰行文,黄金模板,_(,月，日，年，星期,)_(,天气,),_(,标题,),Today/Yesterday,I/we did _(,事件,),In the morning,we.then,.after that.By the time.We had a good time.Finally _(,具体叙述事情经过,).Ill never forget the memorable day!,From this activity,I have learned that/I think _(,事件意义，自己的感想,),黄金模板,第二步打造亮句，增色文章,1,因为我数学考试成绩不佳，我整个下午情绪低落。,I was in a bad mood the whole afternoon because I didnt do well in the math exam.,I got bad grades in the math exam,so I was in low spirits the whole afternoon.,第二步打造亮句，增色文章,2,在同学们的鼓励下，我拿起麦克风唱了一首英文歌曲,I,Believe,I,Can,Fly,。,Encouraged by my classmates,I picked up the microphone and sang an English song entitled,I,Believe,I,Can,Fly,.,Because I was encouraged by my classmates,I picked up the microphone and sang an English song which is entitled,I,Believe,I,Can,Fly,.,2在同学们的鼓励下，我拿起麦克风唱了一首英文歌曲 I Be,第三步串句成文，保证流畅,Friday,Nov.18,2011Sunny,This evening I went to the KTV with some of my good friends.,This was the first time that I had been to a KTV and at first I didnt want to go.I was(had been)in a bad mood the whole afternoon because I didnt do well in the math exam.At the KTV,everybody sang his favorite songs very,第三步串句成文，保证流畅,happily except me I was only one of the audiences.I dare not have a try because I was afraid that I couldnt sing well.Encouraged by my classmates,I picked up the microphone and sang an English song entitled,I,Believe,I,Can,Fly,.,happily except me I was only,I have become cheerful now and above all Ive regained selfconfidence.I believe that,the worst enemy in ones life is oneself.I shouldnt lose heart just because of one or two failures because I still have chances to try.,I have become cheer,高考英语复习写作专题讲座：十二讲-应用文(二)日记-公开课一等奖ppt课件,(2012,北京模拟,),假设你是某所中学的学生，,3,月,22,日,(,世界水日,),你参加了你班开展的一系列节水宣传活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，以日记的形式记录当天的活动内容。,注意：词数不少于,60,。,提示词：宣传材料,leaflets,；危机,crisis,(2012北京模拟)假设你是某所中学的学生，3月22日(世,高考英语复习写作专题讲座：十二讲-应用文(二)日记-公开课一等奖ppt课件,March 22,2012,ThursdaySunny,Today is World Water Day._,_,_,_,_,March 22,2012ThursdaySun,参考范文：,March 22,2012,Thursday Sunny,Today is World Water Day.In the morning,we had a class meeting talking about what to do on this special day.Finally,we reached an agreement and immediately began to make preparations for the afternoons activities.,参考范文：,At 2,：,00 pm,we went to the neighboring community to hand out leaflets,calling on people to save water.Around 3 oclock,the expert we invited made an excellent speech on the current water crisis in China.He talked about the draught in the Southeast and the severe shortage of water in our city.The speech had a strong appeal to all the people present,including me.,At 2：00 pm,we wen,After the speech,we had a discussion with our neighbors about various ways of saving water in our daily life.I suggested turning off the tap water immediately after use,and a granny came up with the ideas of reusing the water from kitchen,for example,the water after washing fruits and vegetables can be used to water flowers and so on.,Today,I have had a better understanding of the importance of saving water and really learned a lot about saving water.,After the speech,小魔方站作品 盗版必究,语文,小魔方站作品 盗版必究语文,更多精彩内容，微信扫描二维码获取,扫描二维码获取更多资源,谢谢您下载使用！,更多精彩内容，微信扫描二维码获取扫描二维码获取更多资源谢谢您,高考英语复习写作专题讲座：十二讲-应用文(二)日记-公开课一等奖ppt课件,高考英语复习写作专题讲座：十二讲-应用文(二)日记-公开课一等奖ppt课件,附赠 中高考状元学习方法,附赠 中高考状元学习方法,群星璀璨,-,近几年全国高考状元荟萃,群星璀璨-近几年全国高考状元荟萃,前 言,高考状元是一个特殊的群体，在许多人的眼中，他们就如浩瀚宇宙里璀璨夺目的星星那样遥不可及。但实际上他们和我们每一个同学都一样平凡而普通，但他们有是不平凡不普通的，他们的不平凡之处就是在学习方面有一些独到的个性，又有着一些共性，而这些对在校的同学尤其是将参加高考的同学都有一定的借鉴意义。,前 言 高考状元是一,青春风采,青春风采,青春风采,青春风采,北京市文科状元 阳光女孩,-,何旋,高考总分：,692,分,(,含,20,分加分,),语文,131,分 数学,145,分英语,141,分 文综,255,分,毕业学校：北京二中报考高校：,北京大学光华管理学院,北京市文科状元 阳光女孩-何旋 高考总分：,来自北京二中，高考成绩,672,分，还有,20,分加分。,“,何旋给人最深的印象就是她的笑声，远远的就能听见她的笑声。,”,班主任吴京梅说，何旋是个阳光女孩。,“,她是学校的摄影记者，非常外向，如果加上,20,分的加分，她的成绩应该是,692,。,”,吴老师说，何旋考出好成绩的秘诀是心态好。,“,她很自信，也很有爱心。考试结束后，她还问我怎么给边远地区的学校捐书,”,。,来自北京二中，高考成绩672分，还有20分加分。“何旋给人最,班主任：我觉得何旋今天取得这样的成绩，我觉得，很重要的是，何旋