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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Cartoon writing,Yanqiao Middle School,Taolic,Cartoon writingYanqiao Middle,caricatures,cartoons,comics,caricatures,cartoons,comics,2012,年江苏省高考说明：,writing,示例,示例,自己英语学习的情况,1,英语学习的目的,2,英语学习的方法,3,课外自学的途径,-,对学校英语教学的建议,列两至三点建议,文字材料类,漫画类,2012年江苏省高考说明：writing示例示例自己英语,1.,该漫画告诉了我们什么,；,1.该漫画告诉了我们什么；,1.,(,陈炎焱,),As is shown clearly in the caricature,the son,is playing the computer and chatting with his friend.,His mother,want to talk with him,but the son doesnt want to talk and continues to chat online.,(37words),good!,brief!,1.(陈炎焱)As is shown clearly,2.,(,张丽君,),As we can see from the drawing above,the child refuses to talk with his mother when he is chatting online.The severe phenomenon nowadays has already raised a wide rang of social concern.,(33 words),brief!,better!,to the point!,2.(张丽君)As we can see from t,3.,(,王青,),The son is playing computer when his mother coming.His mother wants to talk with his son about themselves and wants his son can company with her.But his son only to play himself doesnt care his mother.So he even doesnt see her mother just shakes his hand and say“I cant talk with you now,I am busy to chatting”His mother is disappointed.,(66words,),not too bad!,too long!,3.(王青)The son is playing co,2.literal meaning,step picture text,3.implied meaning,It mirrors a common phenomenon,which,has raised social concern.,boy:,chat,ignore,mum:,stand,unhappy,1.beginning,As is clearly shown in the picture,vividly,severe problem,aroused,Tip:,Describe the picture briefly and keep it to the point.,2.literal meaningstep pictur,common phenomenon,chat,refuse,stand,unhappy,chatrefusestand,unhappy,2.literal meaning,step picture text,3.implied meaning,It mirrors a common phenomenon,which,has raised social concern.,boy:,chat,ignore,mum:,stand,unhappy,1.beginning,As is clearly shown in the picture,Tip:,Describe the picture briefly and keep it to the point.,2.literal meaningstep pictur,2.,你对此现象的看法；,2.你对此现象的看法；,1.,(,朱旭彬,),This caricature mirrors a serious problem which worries many parents.As far as Im concerned,being addicted to the Internet,destories childrens dream,.If we devote too much valuable time to surfing the Internet.We will,lose many opportunities,of communicating with our parents.,(44words),problem,quite good!,effects,1.(朱旭彬)This caricature mirr,2.,(,梅加平,),Several factors have contributed to this problem,On the one hand,some teenagers are,so addicted,to chatting online that they sit in front of the computer all day.On the other,parents do nothing to deal with,it on accent of,lack of communication,with them.,(48 words),How terrible it will be if it gets along like this!,excellent!,problem,causes,2.(梅加平)Several factors have,3.,(,姚梦月,),It mirrors a severe phenomenon nowadays and has already raised a wide range of social concern.Internet is a part of our life.We can,make friends,who have the same interests and with who we can share our trouble and secrets.However we cant be addicted in it if we depend on the Internet too much,it will,affect our ability,to communicate with people in real life even our parents and friends.,(74 words,),quite good!,3.(姚梦月)It mirrors a severe p,step problem cause/effect,1.transition,Several factors contribute to the problem.,2.causes/effects(2-3),On the one handon the other,For one thingfor another,besides/furthermore/however,ments,fun,making friends,How terrible it will be if it gets along like this!,cheated,isolated,Tip:,List the causes using various,linking words,step problem cause/,3.,我们该如何主动和父母沟通；,3.我们该如何主动和父母沟通；,1.(,尤烨凯,)So how can we rebuild the relationship of our family?Personally,I suggest that we should give up chatting online so that we have time to talk to our parents.Also,when we talk to them,we should be with a smile,which will make our parents feel comfortable and happy.In addition,we should often care about their,health.If do like this,I imagine that our relationship with family will be in harmony.,(79 words),wonderful!,1.(尤烨凯)So how can we rebui,2.(,张晔,)considering the serious of the condition,many things can be done to improve it.Children should try to pay their attention on keeping accompany with their parents.Doing the housework can also develop the relationship and increase the chance to communicate.So,go ahead to communicate and love your parents!,(50 words),terrific!,2.(张晔)considering the serio,3.(,俞涛涛,)Action,please.Dont leave ourselves sitting in front of computers all time.Please going into true life.Chatting with our parents by yourselves with enthusiasm.We can talk to them about what we feel interesting.Dont make them feel alone.They like us very much.Dont make them disappoint.,(49 words),not bad!,3.(俞涛涛)Action,please.Don,step problem solution,1.transition,Considering the seriousness of the condition,
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