9话题写作（九)　安全问题篇

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,英语,新课标,（,RJ),话题写作,(,九,),安全问题篇,话题写作,(,九,),安全问题篇,安全问题主要涉及如何保证人身安全、校园安全、交通安全等。此类试题常以要点提示的方式来考查。,话题点睛,话题写作,(,九,),安全问题篇,1,I dont think,sixteenyearolds,should be allowed to drive.,2,I agree.They arent serious enough.,3,Dont run in the hallways.,4,If we are in danger,we must call the police for help so that we can keep ourselves safe.,5,Dont fight with each other.,常用表达,6,Safety is the most important thing in our life.,7,We should always pay attention to the traffic on our way to school or home.,8,You mustnt walk across the street until the traffic lights turn red.,9,Eat more fruit and vegetables instead of junk food.,10,Its dangerous to play on the road.,话题写作,(,九,),安全问题篇,根据汉语意思完成句子,1,你最好不要独自一人在河里游泳。,Youd better _ _ _ in the river.,2,我认为安全第一。,I think _ must come _,3,无论在哪里，我们都要尽力确保我们是安全的。,Wherever we are,we should try _ _ _ we are safe.,4,对我们来说，玩火是很危险的。,Its very dangerous for us _ _ _ fire.,基础写作,to play with,not swim alone,safety,first,to make sure,话题写作,(,九,),安全问题篇,5,健康饮食对大家都很重要。,Eating _ is very _ for everyone.,6,当我们处于危难时，要及时求助。,When we are _ _,，,we must ask for help in time.,7,上下楼梯时，请不要相互拥挤。,Dont _ _ each other when going upstairs or downstairs.,8,不允许他们带刀进校。,They arent _ _ _ knives to school.,crowd with,healthily,important,in danger,话题写作,(,九,),安全问题篇,allowed to take,为了增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护能力，某校开展了以“安全”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点提示写一篇演讲稿。,典例精析,话题写作,(,九,),安全问题篇,话题写作,(,九,),安全问题篇,注意：,1,内容必须包括所给的全部要点，可适当发挥；,2,表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；,3,词数,80,左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。,参考词汇：,be careful,online,danger,callfor,go bad,How to keep safe?,As teenagers,，,we should always keep safety in mind.But how can we keep safe?Here are some of my suggestions.First_,话题写作,(,九,),安全问题篇,【,思路点拨,】,1,明确主题：本文根据图示内容就“如何保持安全”这一话题进行阐述；,2,写作要点：,(1),慎重交友；,(2),遇险报警；,(3),安全饮食；,(4),自己的观点；,3,时态：一般现在时；,4,人称：第一人称；,5,重点词汇和句型：,(1)safety,dangerous/in danger,especially,healthily,do harm to,in short,(2)when/if/so that/that,引导的从句，动名词作主语，,Its,adj.,to do,sth,.,话题写作,(,九,),安全问题篇,【,写作模板,】,话题写作,(,九,),安全问题篇,【,佳作欣赏,】,How to keep safe?,As teenagers,we should always keep safety in mind.But how can we keep safe?Here are some of my suggestions.First,we should be careful when we make friends,especially online.Second,if we are in danger,we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe.Also,we ought to eat healthily and safely.Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health.Last but not least,summer is coming,and we must remember it is dangerous to swim alone in the river.,In short,safety must come first!,话题写作,(,九,),安全问题篇,【,名师点评,】,1,关联词,(first,second,last),的使用让文章布局合理，结构清晰。,2,文中使用了丰富的词汇：,make friends,in danger,in time,do harm to,in short,等。,3,复合句让文章的语言优美、流畅。例如，,when,引导的时间状语从句，,if,引导的条件状语从句，,so that,引导的目的状语从句，,that,引导的定语从句,(Eating food that goes bad will do),。,4,最后用,in short,进行简明扼要的总结。,话题写作,(,九,),安全问题篇,近来，全国正在进行平安校园建设，作为一名学生，我们更应该珍惜自己的生命，更加注意自己的人身安全。假如你是,Daming,，担任校学生会主席，请你就安全问题，向全校学生发出倡议，写一封安全倡议书。,内容提示：,(1),不带管制刀具到学校；,(2),不私自下河洗澡；,(3),不打架；,(4),上学、放学的途中应该注意安全；,(5),遇紧急情况，立即报告警察或老师。,实战演练,话题写作,(,九,),安全问题篇,参考词汇：,restricted knives or things(,管制刀具,),；,have a bath(,洗澡,),；,fight(,打架,),；,emergency(,紧急情况,),；,pay attention to the traffic(,注意交通安全,),写作要求：,(1),用词恰当，要点全面，层次清晰，书写规范。,(2),可适当发挥，,80,词左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。,话题写作,(,九,),安全问题篇,Dear students,，,As we know,safety is the most important thing in our lives.So,we should try our best to make sure we are safe._,_,_,Yours,，,Daming,We mustnt bring restricted knives or things to school because these things may cause serious problems.Do not have a bath in rivers or ponds alone without our parents permission.We should be friendly to others and fighting is strongly banned.Make sure that we always pay attention to the traffic on our way to school or home.Furthermore,if we meet some emergency,we must call for help from the police or our teachers.In a word,following these safety rules above can make us live in peace.,话题写作,(,九,),安全问题篇,