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,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Unit 23 Conflict,Communication Workshop,A,letter of complaint,洛阳市第五十九中李艳娜,lead-in,(导学),While meeting such a conflict,,,how to complain,?,Teach,ing aims:,To,practise,using the vocabulary of complaint.,To,practise,using linking words and expressions,.,To write,a letter of complaint.,Task 1,(探究一),2.What does,Jeffreys,complain about?,Its a kind of exercise bike.,Jeffreys,used the bike in order to lose weight,but he,seemed to put on weight and got hurt.So he wrote a,letter of complaint.,1.Whats“Tour de France”in the letter?,Task 2,:,(探究二),Match the titles(1-,5,)with the paragraphs,(A-E).,Paragraph A,Paragraph B,Paragraph C,Paragraph D,Paragraph E,poor service,false claims,the product,money back,poor quality,Task 3,:,(探究三),Classify,the underlined linking words and expressions.,manner,condition,contrast,purpose,reason,so,as if,despite,unless,if,as though,not to,however,in order to,since,as,result,time,addition,relative pronoun,so,that,after,just as,when,as soon as,as well as,not only,either,also,that,which,Exercise,(测练一),Combine the,sentences,in your compositions,using linking words,.,eg,:,I,work hard,.I,want to be admitted into college.,I,work hard,because,I,want to be admitted into college,.,I,work hard,therefore,I,can be admitted into college,.,I,can be admitted into college,due to,my hard-working,.,I,work hard,so,that,I,can be admitted into college.,I,want to be admitted into college,so,I,work hard.,1.,I was,angry.,I,complained to,the,teacher about it.,I was,so,angry,that,I,complained to,the,teacher about it,.,Have a try,(测练二),2.I can speak English fluently.Also I can write good articles in English.,Not only,can,I,speak,English fluently,but also,I can write good articles in English.,3.I couldnt understand what the teachers said.It made me upset.,I couldnt understand what the teachers said,which,made me upset.,I can,not only,speak,English fluently,but also,write good articles in English,.,Imitative writing,(测练三),4.,The more,I use the bike,the more,weight I seem to put on.,The more you work hard,the greater progress you will make.,(,correct,),The harder,you work,the greater,progress you will make.,eg,:,The more,we get together,the,happier,we will be.,Summary,1.While writing a letter of complaint,what should we know,?,2.Two ways to improve your sentences,:,Your style of writing:,Your reader:,Your purpose:,formal informal,the government the manager,to complain to persuade,(1).Combine your sentences,by,using linking words,.,(2).Use,good sentence patterns.,Write a letter of complaint,假设你是李华,你在一家商店购得劣质电视一台,遂与营业员交涉。但该营业员对你态度粗暴,不予受理。你为此向经理写一封投诉信。,要求,:,1.,字数,100,左右;,2.,适当添加细节和使用,linking words,使行文连贯。,Work in group,The beginning of your letter:,Your problems:,Your purpose:,The ending:,Im writing to tell you that,Im sorry to bother you,The TV set broke down/The TV didnt work.,The shop assistant was rude to me.,He didnt help me to solve the problem.,to look into the matter/give me an explanation,to give back your money/demand a full refund.,I would appreciate it if you.,I look forward to receiving your reply.,(not onlybut also;sothat),(as soon as;unless),影响高考英语书面表达得分的几个因素,1.,卷面整洁,书写工整,.,2.,语篇信息是否完整,.,3.,行文是否连贯流畅,.,4.,是否使用高级词汇,.,5.,是否使用复杂句,.,my composition:,22,my composition:,13,Homework,Write a letter of complaint to Apple Computer Company after class.,Thanks for,listen,ing!,
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