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,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Detail writing,Janet (May 20),2017-2019,模考,/,中考题作文分类,题目类型,一模,2017-2019,二模,2017-2018,二模,2019,中考,2016,中考,2017,中考,2018,中考,2019,结合经历写收获或感受（常用过去时态）,22,篇,13,篇,12,篇,？,吐露自我心声（常用一般现在时）,6,篇,5,篇,2,篇,畅想未来（常用一般将来时）,4,篇,1,篇,无,议论文（常用一般现在时）,3,篇,无,无,提建议（常用一般现在时）,5,篇,5,篇,2,篇,评论与推荐（常用一般现在时）,无,4,篇,无,请结合自身经历,谈谈你的收获或感想,。,Key words:,experience,progress/ achievements/ feelings,To write a good experience,How to write vivid details?,Skill 1: with + n.,我喜欢那本有绿色封面的本子。,在老师的帮助下，我成功的赢得了第一名。,通过我的刻苦努力，我终于取得了很大的进步。,作业太多，睡眠不够，我的记忆力变差了。,more practice:,他毫不犹豫地向我伸出了援手。,有了网络，我们就可以足不出户与全世界交流。,有了父母的关爱，我最终克服了所有困难。,英语老师高兴地走进教室。,( with/ without + n/ v-ing),A little boy called Jack was fishing in the well,with an enclopaedia in his hands and a bucket beside him,.,When I was 14 years old, I volunteered to work at the water station at a 10,000m race. My job was to pass out water to the runners. I felt excited when I saw different kinds of people pass by and take a cup of water hurriedly. Some ran past, some walked past and a few wheeled past. After seeing so many kinds of people do it, I thought maybe I could also do it. So the next year I signed up for the race. During the race, I jogged, I walked, I jogged and I walked. Sometimes I was even not sure if I could finish. Then came an important moment. At one point near the end, an old man ran past me, very, very fast. Therefore, I was embarrassed because I was much younger than him, but I couldnt keep up with him. I felt hopeless for a second. But then I realized something. He was running his race and I was running my race. He had different abilities, experience, training and goals for himself. I had mine. Remember my goal was only to finish. I learned something important at that moment. I turned my embarrassment into inspiration (,鼓舞,). I decided that I would not give up though many people ran past me. As I crossed the finish line, I was proud of my success.,A vivid experience,When I was 14 years old, I volunteered to work at the water station at a 10,000m race. My job was to pass out water to the runners. I felt,excited,when I saw different kinds of people pass by and take a cup of water hurriedly. Some ran past, some walked past and a few wheeled past. After seeing so many kinds of people do it, I thought maybe I could also do it. So the next year I signed up for the race. During the race, I jogged, I walked, I jogged and I walked. Sometimes I was even,not sure,if I could finish. Then came an important moment. At one point near the end, an old man ran past me, very, very fast. Therefore, I was,embarrassed,because I was much younger than him, but I couldnt keep up with him. I felt,hopeless,for a second. But then I realized something. He was running his race and I was running my race. He had different abilities, experience, training and goals for himself. I had mine. Remember my goal was only to finish. I learned something important at that moment. I turned my,embarrassment,into,inspiration,(,鼓舞,). I decided that I would not give up though many people ran past me. As I crossed the finish line, I was,proud,of my success.,A vivid experience,Skill 2: different feelings ( adj. ),happy,( glad, excited),relaxed (,relieved,), pleased,(satisfied,), amazed, proud, confident, moved, thankful, hopeful,worried,( anxious, nervous,), stressed, embarrassed, sorry(,regretful,), ashamed, guilty,sad(,upset,), disappointed, hopeless,surprised (,shocked,), interested, curious, angry,bored, tired, afraid(,frightened, scared,), pitiful, painful, ,so + adj. + that,（从句）,那一刻，我太担心了，都不知道该怎么办才好。,我对自己太失望了，甚至准备放弃。,我好奇地打开了那个盒子。,从那以后，我变得特别自信，再也不害怕与别人交流了。,To + ones + n.,（,surprise, joy/ delight, embarrassment, disappointment ,）,让我感到惊讶的是，妈妈并没有生气，而是鼓励我尝试不同的方法。,让我感到失望的是，这个方法没有用。,让我感到非常高兴的是，我终于找到了最佳的解决方法。,分词结构：,feeling + adj.,我非常同情他，就把我身上所有的零钱都给他了。,我终于赢得了比赛，又累又兴奋。,感觉有意义而又感动，我永远不会忘记那次活动。,感到又紧张又丢脸，我一句话也说不出来。,skill 3: adv.,前置,suddenly, luckily/ unluckily, ( fortunately/ unfortunately), surprisingly, disappointedly, undoubtedly, unexpectedly, hurriedly, oppositely ,不足为奇的是，作为一个九年级的学生，我已经习惯了繁忙而充实的生活。,出人意料地是，老师采纳了我的建议，并在全班同学面前表扬了我。,毋庸置疑，我的选择是对的,我的努力也获得了回报。,恰巧相反，妈妈建议我听从内心的声音。,summary,Skill 1: with/ without + n./ v-ing,Skill 2: different feelings ( adj. ),so + adj. + that,（从句）,To + ones + n.,分词结构：,feeling + adj.,skill 3: adv.,前置,Practice makes perfect !,2018,年上海市初中毕业统一学业考试,(,英语试卷,),Write at least 60 words on the topic“,My progress(,以“我进步了”为题,写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格),你在生活或学习中一定取得过不少进步,比如生活技能的获得、学习方法的掌握、良好习惯的养成。请选取其中一个方面,结合自身经历,谈一谈你是如何取得这一进步的。,The following is for reference only(,以下表达仅供参考,),used to do/be,try my best to do,make progress in( doing),Assignment:,Review the skills of detail writing,Finish the translation exercises in handout,Modify your experience,
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