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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Guidance on Writing,Welcome!,自强中学 2021.12,书面表达总分值25分,假设你是高中生李华，你校英文报正在进展征文活动，主题是“给爸爸的一封信。你打算给校报投稿。请根据下面要点给你的父亲写一封信，要点如下：,1、保重身体，愉快工作；,2、想念父亲，有时间常回家看看；,3、努力学习，回报付出。,注意：100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总数；可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。,Dear Father,You have worked outside our hometown for a good many years._,Your son,Li Hua.,一 病句修改,(1),I,will very happy.,I,very,miss you.,I wish you can keep,health,.,(4),I will try my best to,have a,great grades.,(5),but for your,work hard,I couldnt enjoy a wonderful high school life.,STEP 2,改正及提高,.,be,very much,h,ealthly,get,hard work,一 病句修改,(2),(6),Dont worry me,I can take good care of myself.,(7),I will try my best to,dont,fail you.,(8),I have a time dont look you.,(9),I know you are work hard.And you are work very tired.,(10),I think I can paid off your efforts.,I havent seen you for a long time,Youve been working very hard,Your hard work will pay off,not to,about,二 选词造句,1.,保重身体，愉快工作,take good care of /look after/keep healthy,enjoy working/enjoy your work/,choose to be happy at work.,2.,想念父亲，有时间回家看看,miss him so much,in your free time/whentimepermits,/time permitting,3.,努力学习，回报付出,study hard/make great efforts to do,repay/pay back,用自己会的句子，防止乱造；实在不会，换种说法。,三 出彩句,1.I have met you many times in my dreams.I could clear see that you are thinner than before.You looked so tired and stressed.When I woke up.I opened my eyes with tears filling.,2.I strongly believe that my hard work will pay off.I will make you take pride in my success.,3.Dad,your love is like the light in the dark which can give me hope and strength.,4.I must hard work and do my best.On no account do I give up whatever happens.,1.I have met you many times in my dreams.I could,clear,see that you are thinner than before.You looked so tired and stressed.When I woke up,I opened my eyes with tears,filling.,I strongly believe that my hard work will pay off.I will make you take pride in my success.,Dad,your love is like the light in the dark which can give me hope and strength.,4.I must,hard,work,and do my best.On no account do I give up whatever happens.,clearly,rolling down my cheeks,出彩句,work hard,复合构造 语法；真情、细节语言,词汇高级，运用正确,语句优美,语法构造高级，倒装句。,(,增添细节，用上美句,),四 连句成篇,Dear Father,You have worked outside our hometown for a good many years.I hope you can enjoy working there.You are always quite busy working,so that,you cant come back home often.I miss you very much and hope you can come back home to see us in your spare time.,Now everything is going on well with me in my school.I am getting on well with my classmates and teachers.,And,I am doing well in my studies.,So,you can feel relieved.Father,I know you work very hard.I am determined to work hard like you and wish to be admitted to an excellent university.,Then,after graduation,I can find an ideal job.In the future,I can repay you and Mother for what you have done for me,.,your son,Li Hua.,五 高考总分值作文欣赏,(2012,安徽高考,),假设美国某中学的学生明天来你校访问交流，主题是高中生对文、理科的选择。请你用英语写一篇发言稿，向他们介绍你所做的选择，并说明选择的理由。,注意：,1.,开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；,2.,词数,120,左右；,3.,短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息。,参考词汇：文科,arts,；理科,science,Good afternoon,everyone,，,Welcome to our school,！,_,_,Thanks,！,学生总分值作文,名师点评,1构造清晰，层次清楚。覆盖了所有内容要点。,2语句通顺，过渡自然。Firstly,Secondly,Thirdly,Last but not least等过渡词的使用，使文章过渡自然，浑然一体。,3decide on,in great demand等高级词汇的使用以及It is difficult for me to make.等高级句式的运用，充分证明了作者对语言的驾驭能力。,4总之，本文到达了外在美、构造美、词汇美、句式美、衔接美的要求，为总分值作文。,一 写作步骤：三大步,1.认真审题：审要求，审内容，审时态等,2.选词造句：列出关键词组和句型,3.连句成文：用正确的语法构造写出准确的句子 并形成篇章,注意检查哦：看拼写、单复数、主谓一致等,STEP 2 写作指导“三三制,二 写作段落：三大段,1 开场局部opening 直击要点、核心问题,2 正文局部body 围绕主题展开表达、讨论,3 结尾局部conclusion总结概括、呼吁等,三 写作原那么：三注意,语言第一语法构造从句、强调句、感慨句、倒装、被动、分词、复合构造、名言谚语等和词汇地道，味道高级,内容第二内容要点全面,构造第三连接成分有效,实 战 练 习,作文题目,假定你是星光中学的高中毕业生李华，母校将为高一新生举办主题为“What to learn in senior high school的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。请根据以下提示准备一份英语发言稿。,1.学会学习：方法，习惯等;,2.学会做人：真诚，友善;,3.学会其他：考生自拟。,注意：1.词数120左右;2.发言稿开头和结尾已给出，不须抄在答题卡上，不计入总次数。,Good morning,everyone!It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on learn in senior high school.,Thank you!,实战练习,一 认真审题,1.审要求 ：提纲类应用文。要求以高中毕业生身份写一篇英语发言稿，谈论“What to learn in senior high school,2.审内容：三大点学会学习，学会做人，其他方面除所列要点外，学生有话可说；但写好不易。如果能增加假设干细节，在第3点其他方面发挥好，运用一些高级词汇和句型那么能出彩。,3.审时态：主要用一般现在时,STEP 4,实 战 练 习,二 选词造句,1.,学会学习,：方法、习惯,learn to learn efficiently,develop/form/get into a good habit,.,2.,学会做人：真诚、友善,get along well with,be honest/be friendly with/be kind to,3.,其他方面,take part in sports/build up my body/enrich my school life,4,.,总结,no pains no gains/,限时练笔提炼思路 平时演,练,实战见效,Tips:,每天练笔熟悉句型,名句谚语铭,记,心上,细细审读要求题示 拟好提纲排列顺序,思路清晰分段陈述 草稿写作认真细心,书写核对措辞时态 标点符号准确到位,检查,1.,时态,2.,主谓一致,3.,名词单复数,4.,单词拼写,5.,动词的过去式,过去分词,6.,句子是否完整,等等,Homework:,利用“三三制，完成这篇作文。,Thank you!,
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