作文指导课课件

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,作文指导课,执教者：林桂华,训练一：根据提示，写一段话，说说你曾经看过的一部电影。,1,、,What was the name of the film?,2,、,When did you see it ?,3,、,Where did you see it ?,4,、,What do you think of the film?,5,、,What story was the film about ?,Finding Nemo,last week,at school,interesting , funny,，,great , wonderful,Finding Nemo,结构：主,+,谓,+,宾,call,ed,die,d,(die) , lovely ,on the first day of school ,did,nt,listen to , diver(,潜水员）,caught,(catch) , sad ,want,ed,look,ed,for ,met,(meet) , happy.,训练二：李增富和他的宠物狗上周日去公园，请,你写一段话，说一说他在公园里所做的,一些事情。所有的英文提示词都要用上。,提示词,:go to the park , with pet dog,take Bus 45 , eat some snacks ,drink some Coke ,have a rest under the tree ,lose money , walk home,比一比，谁的眼睛最闪亮。,Li Zhengfu goes to the park with his pet dog last,Sunday .She took Bus 45 to go there.He was very,happy when he got there . At 12:00, his hungry.,He eat some snacks and drink some Coke .Then he,has a rest under the tree . When he woke up ,he lose his money . He said angry ,“ I will come back,again !” At last , walked home.,went,He,he was,ate,drank,had,lost,angrily,he,写作时请注意：,1,、时态的把握,2,、动词的变化,3,、人称的运用,4,、词性的判断,5,、句子的结构：主,+,谓,+,宾,提高写作水平秘诀：,1,、背诵英语课文,2,、背诵作文范例,3,、用英语写日记,教学反思：,书面表达是学生在考试中比较难应付,的题型，本节课只教授学生如何根据英文提示词,完成书面表达。面对学生无从下手，无话可说的,状况，教师选择了学生曾经看过的有趣的影片,海底总动员,片段做为导入，和学生共同回忆影,片的故事情节。其次，又以大家熟悉的一个同班,同学做为作文的话题，并展开作文纠错。学生既,感到有趣，又感到亲切。最后又以影片主题曲,Beyond The Sea,为师生互动的最后环节，整堂,课让人觉得轻松自然。教师的作文指导小结也是,本堂课同学们的重要收获，效果极佳。,