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,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,Exercises:,1.I cannot argue with your reasoning that television equipment,is still in an early stage of development,but at my age I,cannot afford to wait for technical refinements.,你认为电视还处在开发阶段，我无话可说；但我已这把年 纪了等不到电视技术,的改善了。,2.If children are accorded the respect as adults,they can be,counted on to display comparable manners.,假如孩子能象成人一样受到人们的尊敬，他们同样也会对人彬彬有礼的。,3.I am more alive in the presence of a letter from you than in the,company of most of the people I encounter in my life.,令我感到振奋的是看见你的信，而不是一生中相处的大多数人和我相伴。,4.The 1.248 billionth Chinese was born in 1999.,到1999年，中国人口已经达到12.48亿。,5.Too clearly,it is a topic we shall do no justice to in this place.,很明显，象这样的问题我们在这里是不可能讲得透彻的。,第二章 翻译的过程,（2）,（201,1,年9月2,2,日,Wang Zheng,Chapter Focus:,1.Representation,2.Testing/Proofreading,第二节 表达,Adequate representation is the end of accurate comprehension.,Some relations,1.between loyalty and smoothness,e,g.It is a truth universally acknowledged,that a single man in,possession of a good fortune,must be in want of a wife.,(Jane Austen:,Pride and Prejudice,),Version 1.有钱的单身汉总要娶位太太，这是一条举世公认的真理。,Version 2.举世公认，一个拥有一大笔财产的单身男人必定想娶一个女人,做太太，这以成为一条真理。,Version 3.有钱的单身汉必定想娶亲，这条真理无人不晓。,Version 4.谁都知道，单身汉有了钱，第一件事儿就是要娶个媳妇。,2.between form and content,eg.I was in the middle before I knew that I had begun.,(p.25),version 1.,等我发现我自己已开始爱上你的时候，,我已经走了一半路了。,version 2.,我是到了不能自拔的时候才发现爱上了你。,3.between self-confinement and creativity,eg.1 The rainy season has set in earlier this year.,version 1.,今年，雨季来得早了点。,version 2.,今年的雨季来得比往年早。,eg.2 The cold weather frosted up the track last night.,version 1.,昨晚寒冷的天气使跑道上结了霜。,version 2.,昨晚天气寒冷，跑道上结了霜。,cf.over-representation and Under-representation,eg.1 He was on his way to China again.,version 1.,他又风尘仆仆地踏上去中国的旅程。,version 2.,他又踏上去中国的旅程。,eg.2 He sold hard-to-get items.,version 1.,他行贿受贿，兜售紧俏商品。,version 2.,他经销紧俏商品。,第三节 审校,Effective proof-reading,sometimes termed revision,is a careful review of the target language,with special,emphasis on accuracy and consistency of rendering,1.Correction and compensation,eg.1（p.30）,2.Avoiding translationese,eg.3（p.30）,3.Hypotactic,（形合）,v.s.paratactic,（意合）,(with or without syntactic connection.),In English,clauses and phrases are coordinated with one,another or subordinated to one another syntactically while in,Chinese they are placed one after another without coordination,connectives.,eg.He had a disconcerting habit of expressing contradictory,ideas in rapid succession.,他有一种令人难堪的习惯：一会儿一个看法，自相矛盾，变化无常。,To sum up:,accurate,natural,economical,brief,terse,refined,Exercises,1.Miss Osborns and heart were still free after various,incomplete love affairs.,2.People see Reebok shoes as“cool”and the trendy thing,to wear.,3.He was the open sesame to a new and glittering world,that excited me as nothing in my life had even done before.,4.More and more hard-working young couples are becoming,“dinks”.,5.Clothing new ideas in old form is in no way different from,putting new wine into old bottles.,
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