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,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,爱特精英雅思托福作文资料(瞿毅),英语作文二十五大闪光点,一.词汇层面,1.高级词汇的运用：提升文章档次,2.抽象名词的运用：正式书面用语,3缩合关系代词what的运用：地道英文,4连接副词的运用：突出逻辑层次感,5adv和adj的运用：生动形象，丰富饱满,6避免多处出现同一词：表达方式多样化,writing,2,writing,7分词、不定式、形容词词组后置作定语,：简洁性原则,二.句型层面,8 同位语和定语从句：解释说明/限制,9 插入语的英语行文：解释说明，句式多样化,10倒装句和强调句：结构需求、上下文衔接/突出强调,11长短句相间：体现层次，阅读顺畅,3,writing,12,变化多端的句子开头：句式多样化,13,分词作状语代替连词；独立主格结构：句式多样化,/,情景描写,14,被动语态的引入：省去做动作的人,15,主从复合句：句式多样化,16.,设问与反问：设置悬念,/,突出强调,17.,平行排比：内容丰富饱满，突出强调,4,writing,18.,比较级句：句式多样化,19.,双重否定：突出强调,20.,对照句：强烈对比,5,writing,三.论证与修辞手段,21.说理论证手段,22.对比论证手段,23.类比论证手段,24.举例论证手段,25.比喻、拟人等修辞手段,6,表达方式的多样,Before I was a college student,I considered it easy to be a college student.At that time,I was eager to be a college student.I imagined the interesting life of a college student.But now I think it is difficult to be a student in college.,writing,7,writing,Before I entered college,I considered it easy to be a college student.At that time,I was eager to be one of them.I imagined the interesting life in the ivory tower/on the university campus/the interesting university life.But now I think it is difficult to be a student in college.,8,抽象名词的使用,1)a.Watching too much TV will affect your studies.,b.Heavy exposure to TV will interfere with ones studies.,writing,9,writing,2)a.Although I anticipate for months,nothing could have prepared me for the impact of the actual day.,b.Despite months of anticipation,nothing could have prepared me for the impact of the actual day.,10,3)Devotion to that land has been the source of conflict in the last decade.,4)He failed to complete the course.,This spoilt his chances of promotion.,His failure to complete the course spoilt his chances of promotion.,writing,11,writing,5)He criticized the plan repeatedly.,This irritated/annoyed everyone.,6)If you carefully compare the two teaching methods,you will find the former is superior.,Careful comparison of the two teaching methods will show the superiority of the former.,12,writing,7)When there is a slight improvement in their childrens studies,parents will feel happy.,13,writing,同位语特殊结构：,同位语的位置,1)N词组,主语.（名词词组指代主语，如例3）,2)主语，N词组,谓语（名词词组指代主语，如例4）,3).N,N词组（名词词组指代逗号前离它最近的名词，如例2）,4).,N词组（名词词组指代逗号前整个句子，如例1）,14,writing,同位语的形式：,1)N词组N+doing/done/adj.词组/to do,2)N词组N+定语从句,15,writing,1)a.Soon I would be on my own,making my own decisions,doing what I wanted without someone looking over my shoulder and it meant going to school with boys,which is a welcome change coming from all-girl high school.,b.Soon I would be on my own,making my own decisions,doing what I wanted without someone looking over my shoulder and it meant going to school with boys-a welcome change coming from all girl high school.,16,writing,2)a.I dont expect you simply to agree and do nothing more.I expect you add something that may be a reason for agreeing,another example,or a remark to carry the idea further.,b.I dont expect you simply to agree and do nothing more.I expect you add something-a reason for agreeing,another example,or a remark to carry the idea further.,17,writing,3)A man of humble origin,Lincoln achieved success through his own efforts.,4)Pamela Doviak,an expert in the highly classified field of silencing nuclear submarines,has listed a series of discrimination complaints against the Navy because she is not permitted to go on sea trials to see her efforts at work.,18,writing,5)The first great idea is electronics,the technology that enables a cooperative global exchange of information,lectures and courses.,6)The same criteria should apply to alcoholism,a disease that is the third leading cause of preventable death in this country.,19,writing,小试牛刀,1.There they were greeted by a woman called Zenobia.,She was a beautiful woman of wealth and position.,2.Photosynthesis is an extremely important process.,It is the ultimate source of food for almost all organisms on the earth.,20,writing,3.Even a brief visit to Greece gives you a profound sense of the roots of our civilization.,Greece is a modern gateway to the glory of the past.,4.She is an excellent,all-round student with a congenial personality.,She is a promising candidate for WOW.,WOW is an international scholarship program for outstanding women around the world.,21,writing,避免过多使用thing，good，wonderful，bad，important等词。这些词的词义非常宽泛，一词多解，所以易造成词义模糊。,例如：,1)Tom and his wife were very diligent and good,and they led a thrifty and simple life.,-Tom and his wife were very diligent and kind/warm-hearted,and they led a thrifty and simple life.,22,writing,2)My English teacher is a wonderful person.,-My English teacher is a kind/knowledgeable/helpful/humorous person.,3)You are a student