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Section,Writing,写一篇,“,说服性,”,文章,Step,文本研读,.,框架建构：整体理解,Skim the letter and youll find that the author wants to _ his friends to _,persuade,reduce food waste,.,文本剖析：特色表达,Clear Your Plate,Problem,Over 1._ of the worlds food is wasted,while many people in poor areas are 2,._,_,_,Solutions,Order 3._ than you need in the school canteen.,Take leftover food home when dining in restaurants.,Call on 4._ to participate in the campaign.,Conclusion,Lets start doing what we can to make the world a 5._ place.,30%,hungry/in starvation,less,family members and friends,greener,Step,知识点,1,concerned,adj,.,焦急的，担忧的,There is no need for you to,be concerned about,his future.,你没有必要担心他的未来。,The accident,was concerned with,the bus driver.,这次事故与公共汽车司机有关。,As/So far as Im,concerned,its wise not to spend too much time playing with smartphones.,就我而言，不花太多时间玩智能手机是明智的。,He asked several questions,concerning,the future of the company.,他问了几个有关公司未来的问题。,归纳探究,(1)be/feel concerned about/for.,对,关切的；对,担忧的,be concerned in.,牵扯进,/,参与,be concerned with,与,有关；涉及,as/so far as.be concerned,就,而言，对,来说,(2)express ones concerns about.,表达某人对,的担忧,show concern for,关心,一言助记,As far as I am concerned,educators should,be concerned about,the problems that,are concerned with,the healthy growth of the children and,concern themselves with/in,the work of education.,依我之见，教育工作者应该关心与儿童健康成长有关的问题，并使自己参与教育工作。,单词积累,concern,v,(,使,),担忧；涉及，与,有关,n,担心，关切,concerning,prep,.,关于，涉及,即学即练,单句语法填空,His mother is always concerned _ his future and his happiness.,You should pay attention to the questions which are concerned _ personal problems.,Nowadays more and more people are concerned _ their health.,As far as Im _(concern),both health and wealth are important to our life.,about/for,with,about/for,concerned,2.,urge,v,敦促,，,竭力主张,，,强烈要求,n,强烈的欲望；冲动,He had a sudden,urge to design,a poster personally.,他突然有亲自设计一个海报的欲望。,The club,urged that,every member should take an active part in this activity.,这个俱乐部强烈要求每一个成员都积极参加这个活动。,归纳探究,urge sb.to do sth.,力劝,/,敦促某人做某事,urge that.,力劝,/,敦促,an urge to do sth.,做某事的冲动,联想拓展,(,1)urge,后跟,that,从句时，从句常用虚拟语气，从句谓语用,“should,动词原形,”,，,should,可以省略。,(2)urgent,adj,.,紧急的；急切的,urgently,adv,.,紧急地；迫切地,urgency,n,紧急，紧迫,即学即练,单句语法填空,/,完成句子,China urges the relevant parties _(keep)calm and adopt a responsible attitude.,They might then urge their parents and other people _(give)up smoking,too.,I have an _(urge)message.Call me back as soon as possible.,Teachers urged parents,_,_,_,(,不要允许,)their children under 12 to ride bicycles to school for safety.,My teacher urged that,_,_,_,(,我们在课下时应多做运动,).,to keep/(should)keep,to give,urgent,not to allow/(should)not allow,we(should)do more exercise after class,识记,下列单词和短语,call on sb.to do sth.,号召某人做某事,propose,提议,(,后接虚拟语气,),starvation,饿死，饥饿,Step,Writing a persuasive letter,文体介绍,“,说服性,”,文章，指作者透过某种社会现象，提出或驳斥某一观点，通过厘清概念和提供经验来帮助读者形成理智判断，说服读者改变观点或采取行动的文章。,篇章结构,结构主要有三部分：,Topic,话题、观点,Body,说明、论证,Closing,结论、总结,常用表达,(1),开头：,Learning that.I am writing this letter to raise your awareness of.,了解到,我写这封信是为了提高你对,的认识。,Im writing to persuade you to.,我写信是想说服你,Here Id like to give my advice on.,在这里，我想就,提出我的建议。,Im writing to give some suggestions about.to you.,我写信是想给你一些关于,的建议。,I will try my best to make some constructive suggestions.,我会尽力提出一些建设性的建议,。,(2),正文：,I would like to suggest.,我建议,I hope that you will consider.,我希望你能考虑,In order to.we propose that.,为了,我们建议,One of the reasons for this is.,这样做的一个原因是,First of all,I think it would be better if.,首先，我认为,会更好。,(3),结尾：,In order to improve the situation,we should.,为了改善这种状况，我们应该,It is necessary/essential/significant/of,significance/of importance to.,有必要,/,很重要。,These are my suggestions and I hope they could mean something for a better future of.,这些是我的建议，我希望它们意味着,的美好未来。,Please give careful consideration to my advice.Thank you.,请认真考虑我的建议。谢谢您。,实践应用,目前，中国已经进入汽车社会，越来越多的汽车正走进寻常百姓家。但是有些驾驶员的素质令人担忧，他们的所作所为严重危害了自己和他人的安全。这种现象与社会的发展极不协调。请你以李华的身份，结合下列几点写一封倡议书，倡议所有驾驶员做“中国好司机”。,主要内容包括：,1,简单描述以上现象；,2,你的建议：,(1),严格遵守交通规则；,(2),不隔窗抛物；,(3),礼让他人，不闯红灯。,注意：词数,80,个左右。,参考词汇：规则,regulations,让路,give way to,闯红灯,run the red light,第一步布局谋篇,第二步遣词造句,完成句子,1,但是有些驾驶员的低素质令人担忧。,But some drivers bad quality,_,2,他们的行为危害了他人和自己的安全。,Their behavior,_,3,这种现象与我们社会的发展背道而驰。,This phenomenon,_,4,一些清洁工每年在捡你扔掉的东西时，都会被过往的汽车撞倒甚至死亡。,Some cleaners are hit by the passing cars and die per year,_,worries us a lot,does harm to the safety of others and themselves,is against the development of our society,while they are picking up the things you throw away,句式升级,5,用,what,引导的名词性从句改写句,1,。,But,_,6,用,which,引导的非限制性定语从句改写句,2,和句,3,。,Their behavior does harm to the safety of others and themselves,_,7,用状语从句的省略改写句,4,。,_,，,some cleaners are hit by the passing cars and die per year.,what worries us a lot is some drivers bad quality,which is against the development of our society,When picking up the things you throw away,第三步完美成篇,用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语短文。,_,_,_,Dear drivers,，,At present,more and more cars have entered the homes of ordinary people.But what worries us a lot is some drivers bad quality.Their b
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