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写作能力提升练,冀教版八年级下,UNIT 8 Save Our World,本单元围绕“保护环境”这一话题展开讨论，内容为环境污染、垃圾分类和再利用，以及保护环境的方法和措施等。号召我们爱护环境，增强环保意识。体现到写作中的话题是如何保护环境。,单词：,environment, rubbish, protect, duty, reuse, recycle,pollution, reduce, waste, save,素材典藏,短语：,clean up, pick up, sort garbage, throw away, turn off,reduce packaging, reduce pollution, shut down,protect the environment,句 型：,1. We should do our best to protect the environment.,2. Its our duty to protect the environment.,3. Lets clean up our schoolyard.,4. We should learn to reuse and recycle to reduce pollution.,5. Sort the garbage, and some of it can be recycled.,6. The environment is important to us.,常用衔接词：,if, when, but, and, whats more, as we all know,请根据以下提示，以,“How to Protect Our Environment”,为题，谈谈你的观点，不少于,80,词。,提示：,1.,离开教室前记得关灯,;,2.,尽量骑自行车去上学,;,3.,回收废纸、饮料瓶，不乱扔垃圾,;,4.,购物时带布袋，不用塑料袋。,经典例题,【,审题指导,】,1.,体裁,：说明文,2.,人称,： 第一人称为主,3.,时态,： 一般现在时为主,【,思路构建,】,开篇点明环境的重要性,The earth is our home.,Everyone should do something to protect the earth.,具体介绍作为学生应该做的事情,We should turn off the lights when we.,Try to ride bikes to school.,Try not to throw away garbage. recycle waste paper and bottles.,.bring a cloth bag instead of using plastic bags.,概括总结,If everyone gives a hand to save., our world will.,【,范文赏析,】,How to Protect Our Environment,The earth is our home, but its getting dirtier and dirtier.,Everyone should do something to protect the earth. As students, we need to do some things. We should turn off the lights when we leave the classroom. Try to ride bikes to school instead of going by car. Try not to throw away garbage,everywhere. Recycle waste paper and bottles or use them again for something else. Whats more, bring a cloth bag instead of using plastic bags when you go shopping.,If everyone gives a hand to save our environment, our world will become better and better.,点评：文章要点齐全， 层次分明，条理清晰。文章用词丰富，比如,try to., try not to., instead of , whats more, give a hand,等词汇的使用，表现了作者出色的表达能力，为文章增添了文采。,在学校，一些同学不注意保护学校环境，使学校环境受到破坏。请你根据所给内容要点， 以,“Keep Our School Clean”,为题用英语写一篇不少于,80,词的短文。,内容要点： 现象：,1.,学校环境越来越差。,2.,地上垃圾很多。,措施：,1.,不随地吐痰和乱扔垃圾。,2.,保护花草树木。,3.,多植树，循环使用教材。,4.,保护学校环境。,写作实践,参考词汇：,worse; spit(,吐痰,); destroy(,毁坏,); do something to protect.,要求：,1.,包括所有内容要点，不要逐句翻译，可以适当发挥。,2.,语句通顺、语法正确。,3.,文中不得出现真实的姓名、地点和所在的学校名称。,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,Keep Our School Clean,As we all know, its very important for us to keep our school clean and tidy. Keeping the school clean makes us feel happy and relaxed. However, our school environment is becoming worse and worse. We can still see that there is lots of rubbish on the ground, such as plastic bags, cans and so on.,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,Therefore, we have to protect the environment as soon as possible. For example, we shouldnt spit or throw rubbish everywhere. We should protect the trees and keep the off grass. At the same time, we need to plant more trees. We can also reuse our books. It is a good way to reduce the waste of natural resources. In this way, Im sure that our school will be more and more beautiful in the future.,
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