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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,提纲类作文,你很荣幸地成为,2008,北京奥运会的一名志愿者,负责编写奥运比赛项目的英语介绍。,(,08,年高考),写作内容,请根据以下中文提纲,编写射击项目的英语介绍:,背景:射击最初只是生存工具,,19,世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。,1896,:第一次成为奥运项目,1904,:中断,1928,:中断,1932,:重回奥运会,1968,:第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛,现状:稳步发展,,1896,奥运会只有三项射击项目,现今有,17,项。,写作要求,:,只能使用,5,个句子表达全部内容,评分标准,:,句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。,技法点拨,因用提纲的形式命题,不需要懂得绘画或绘制图表的人参加,容易操作,所以较受命题者的亲睐,广东高考的基础写作连续三年均采用了提纲的形式。提纲类作文的写作要点都已经列出,相对较容易,但写作时仍需注意以下几点:,1.,写成短文。,千万不要按提纲逐字直译,一定要写成短文。如不能这样写:,Background: shooting was originated as a means of survival,1896: the first time became an Olympic event/sport,2.,适当组合。,因写作要求中规定只能用五句话,所以我们要将提纲中的内容要点分成五组,以便用五个句子来表达。,3.,补全句子。,因提纲很简明,中文表述中省略了一些句子成分,用英语表达时要将其补全,用完整的英语句子来表达。,4.,省略字眼。,提纲中的“背景”“现状”“时间”等,由后面句子的内容本身可以体现出来,不要再将其译出,否则就会画蛇添足。,以下是一则关于中国政府决定禁烟的报道的主要内容。,以下是一则关于中国政府决定禁烟的报道的主要内容。,内 容:公共场所禁烟实施时间:,2011,年,1,月,1,日起实施范围:全国目 标:所有室内公共场所无烟措 施:张贴禁烟标志相关数据:(,1,)吸烟人数:约,3.5,亿(,2,)分 布:男性,75,;,女性:,25,(,3,)受二手烟影响人数:约,5.4,亿(,4,)因二手烟死亡人数:超过,10,万,/,年,(,10,年高考)以下是一则关于中国政府决定禁烟的报道的主要内容。,内 容:公共场所禁烟实施时间:,2011,年,1,月,1,日起实施范围:全国目 标:所有室内公共场所无烟措 施:张贴禁烟标志相关数据:(,1,)吸烟人数:约,3.5,亿(,2,)分 布:男性,75,;,女性:,25,(,3,)受二手烟影响人数:约,5.4,亿(,4,)因二手烟死亡人数:超过,10,万,/,年,内 容:公共场所禁烟,实施时间:,2011,年,1,月,1,日起,实施范围:全国,目 标:所有室内公共场所无烟,措 施:张贴禁烟标志,相关数据:(,1,)吸烟人数:约,3.5,亿,(,2,)分 布:男性,75,;,女性:,25,(,3,)受二手烟影响人数:约,5.4,亿,(,4,)因二手烟死亡人数:超过,10,万,/,年,二手烟:,second-hand smoke,写作内容,请根据以上内容给学校英语墙报写一篇通讯,内容包括:,1.,禁烟决定的内容及实施的时间和范围,;,2.,目标和措施,;,3.,相关数据。,写作要求,只能用,5,个句子表达全部内容。,评分标准,句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。,语篇模板,决定的内容和范围,The Chinese government,has decided that,smoking be banned in indoor public places all over the country.,实施的时间与目的,This decision, which will be carried out from January 1,20011,aims to,bring a complete smoke-free indoor environment.,目标和措施,In order to,achieve this goal, no-smoking signs will be put up in all indoor public places.,相关数据,Statistics show that,China has approximately 350,000,000 smokers,among whom,75 percent are men and 25 percent are women. Around 540 million people are affected by second-hand smoke, causing 100,000 deaths per year.,这类作文的句式太多,仅采访类常用的句式就有:,1. Last weekend, I had an interview with,sb,concerning/about,sth,上周,我就,(,某问题,),采访了,(,某人,),2. According to,sb, ,根据某人的看法,,3. He pointed out that,他指出,4. He suggested that(should) do,他建议,5. He particularly reminded us that,他特别提醒我们,必备词句,14.,采访:如何学好英语,你是校报小记者,最近进行了一次采访。以下是这次采访的情况:,时间:,上星期五,对象,:“疯狂英语”的发起人李阳老师,主题:,如何学好英语,专题练析,现状:,(1),相当多的学生学好英语困难很大;,(2),他们失去信心,有的甚至放弃了。,建议:,(1),早、午、晚朗读英语,每次,20,多分钟;,(2),朗读单词、课文,背诵名篇、诗歌,甚至唱英语歌曲。,写作范文,Last Friday, I had an interview with Mr. Li Yang,the founder of the,Crazy English,,,about how we can learn English well.,It is known that quite a few students have,so,much trouble in learning English,that,they gradually may lose heart in the language and some even have given it up.,According to Mr. Li,we students should make the most of every morning, noon and evening, reading English as loudly as possible.,He also suggested that,we should spend over 20 minutes reading English words, texts, or reciting famous passages, and poems, and even singing English songs. Through this interview, I realize that it is really important to do more reading repeatedly.,15.,采访:睡眠与记忆的关系,你是校报小记者,最近进行了一次采访。以下是采访的情况:,时间:上月末,对象:一位美国心理学教授,David (a professor of psychology),主题:睡眠与记忆的关系,研究结果:,(1),睡眠充足,记忆错误减少,(2),对任何人都有影响,专家解读:,(1),具体原因不清,(2),或因好的睡眠强化了记忆源(记忆过程的基本因素之一),(3),或因睡眠不足者接收信息过多,影响了记忆力,写作范文,At the end of last month, I had an interview with David,an American professor of psychology,concerning,the relationship between sleep and memory. A new study suggests that sleep helps reduce errors in memory and this finding has practical effects on everyone.,According to David, the causes are not known.,He suspects it may be that sleep strengthens a vital element of the memory processthe source of the memory. Or perhaps its because people who dont sleep well receive too much information in the day, which affects their memory ability.,Thank you !,
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