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Discuss the problems that people with walking difficulties might have in a cinema.TheHeading(address,date)ThebodyThesignature(name)The Greeting and your purpose to write the letterSuggestionsPersuade the architect again to take the suggestions A letter of suggestionPersuade the architect in a polite wayI hope you will not mind me writing to ask.I wonder ifIt would be handy to have liftsSo Id like to suggest that.Perhaps there could be.Thank you for reading my letter.I hope my suggestions willSituation:An architect(Mr.Smith)is designing a supermarket in your community,and a boy wrote a letter of suggestion to him.task 1 Paraphrase(改写)-the Greeting PartDear Mr.Smith,Are you the architect to build the supermarket?I am writing to tell you the design is not ok,you mustnt design it for the disabled like that.So you should listen to my advice:Dear Mr.Smith,I learn from the local news that you are the architect who is to design the supermarket.I am writing to ask you to consider the right of the disabled for easy access.In particular,I would like you to consider the following things:Can you give some suggestions to the architect,remember to use polite forms.DiscussionUse the suggestions you collect to finish this part,there should be a topic sentence in each paragraph.Task 2 Writing the Suggestion Part感谢您阅读我的信，希望您能赞成我的建议。Thankyouforreadingmyletter,Ihopemysuggestionswillmeetwithyourapproval.残疾人应该和健全人有同样的机会来享受购物。Disabledpeopleshouldhavethesameopportunitiesasable-bodiedpeopletoenjoyshopping.如果你采纳我的建议，我肯定超市会吸引更多的顾客，人们会高度评价你的设计，Ifyouadoptmysuggestions,Iamsurethesupermarketwillattractmorecustomersandpeoplewillspeakhighlyofyourdesign.Task 3 Translating the Ending PartHomeworkWritealetterofsuggestiontothearchitect.多元化课堂评价表多元化课堂评价表评分分标准：准：A掌握了掌握了;B基本掌握基本掌握;C没掌握没掌握ReadingskillsABCNewwordsABCCommunicationABCWritingskillsABCParticipationABC不介意我写信来问不介意我写信来问尤其是尤其是对对-方便方便做做-有困难有困难在在-装几套耳机装几套耳机听力受损的顾客听力受损的顾客升起了的座位升起了的座位-更方便更方便电影院的入口电影院的入口得到你的赞成得到你的赞成带着尊严带着尊严获取更高的利润获取更高的利润notmindmewritingtoask.inparticularbehandytohavetroubledoingsthfitsetsofearphonestohearing-impairedcustomersraisedseatingitismoreconvenienttotheentrancetothecinemameetwithyourapprovalwithdignitymakehigherprofitsA letter of suggestionAletterofsuggestionnormallyhasfiveparts.1.TheHeadingThisincludestheaddress,linebyline,withthelastlinebeingthedate.Skipalineaftertheheading.2.TheGreeting.Thegreetingalwaysendswithacomma.Thegreetingshouldbeformal,beginningwiththeworddear.3.Thebody.Itisalsoknownasthemaintext.Generallyspeaking,thebodyincludesthreeparts.Thefirstpart(usuallythefirstparagraph)tellsthereceiverthatyouarewritingthislettertomakesuggestionsonsomething,andthemainparttellsclearlywhatyoursuggestionsare.Thelastpart(usuallythelastparagraph)asksthereceivertoconsideryoursuggestions.Dontforgettoencouragethereceivertotakeyoursuggestions.Skipalinebetweenparagraphs,especiallyintypedorprintedcopy,andalsohelpthereader.4.Thecomplimentaryclose.Thisshortexpressionisalwaysafewwordsonasingleline.Itendswithacomma.Thecomplimentaryclosebeginswithacapitalletterandendswithacomma.5.Thesignatureline.Typeorprintyourname.Thehandwrittensignaturegoesabovethislineandbelowtheclose.Thesignaturelineandthehandwrittensignatureareindentedtothesamecolumnastheclose.Thesignatureshouldbewritteninblueorblackink.Skipfromonetothreespaces(twoonatypewriter),andtypeinthesignaturelinetheprintednameofthepersonsigningtheletter.Signthenameinthespacebetweenthecloseandthesignatureline,startingattheleftedgeofthesignatureline.A sample of a letter of suggestionMr.XueSunLeiChiefarchitect18HongyangSupermarketdesignYuquanCounty211KangweiRoadYuquanCounty18March,200_DearMrXue,Ilearnfromthelocalnewsthatyouarethearchitectwhoistodesignthesupermarket.Iamwritingtoaskyoutoconsidertherightofthedisabledforeasyaccess.Inparticular,Iwouldlikeyoutoconsiderthefollowingthings:1.Access to the supermarket for people in wheelchairs and those who have difficulty walking.Theliftsshouldbewideenoughforthewheelchairstomovearound.Theentranceshouldbesuitableforwheelchairsonthegroundfloor.Thereshouldbespecialentryforpeoplefortheblind.2.Toilets.Thereshouldbespecialtoiletsforthedisabled.Thebathroomsandtoiletsshouldhavedoorwayswideenoughforawheelchair,doorsthatareeasytoopenandclose,andhand-holdsthatthedisabledcaneasilyuse.3.Telephones should be easy for a person in a wheelchair to reach.Generallyspeaking,asupermarketissobigthatitisdifficultforone,especiallyoneinawheelchairtofindwhatoneneeds.Sotelephonesshouldbeeasytoreachforapersoninawheelchairsothathecancallthestaffforhelp.4.Shelves.Whenpeopledesigntheshelves,thedisabledshouldbetakenintoconsideration.Safetyshouldcomefirst.Thankyouforreadingmyletter.Ihopeyouwillconsidermysuggestions.Disabledpeopleshouldhavethesameopportunityasable-bodiedpeopletoenjoythesupermarketandtheyshouldbeabletodosowithdignity.Itisveryimportanttousevariousformsof technologywhichcanassistindividualswithvarioustypesofdisabilitiestoincreasetheirmobilityandindependence.Iamsureifyoudesignitwithgoodaccessforthedisabled,thesupermarketwillattractmorecustomersandpeoplewillspeakhighlyofyourdesign.Yourssincerely,SunleiHomeworkWritealetterofsuggestiontothearchitect.Thankyouforlistening!
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